IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 46

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?

Throughout the history, reading, writing, and mathematics remained as necessary sections of education. However, some individuals claim that computer skills should be added to this list after an increase in computer use in the wide range of areas. I agree with this statament due to the incessant innovations in technology, which require people to catch recent developments, and the replacement of jobs with artificial intelligent.

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The best way to ensure a happy family life for children is to make mothers and fathers take part in parenting courses every year. Do you agree or disagree with this idea?

There has been a a growing belief that encouraging parents to enrol in annual parenting courses is crucial for ensuring a happy family life for children. I strongly agree with this idea as it eases the generation gap despite considered a waste of time.

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Some people think that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment celebrities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is frequently argued that professionals like doctors and teachers deserve higher salaries than celebrities in sports and entertainment. I agree with this statement to a greater extent and will provide justification in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There has been a growing perception that it is unreasonable to invest in technology for exploring space and there are more advantageous things to fund. The author firmly disagrees with this view due to potential resources despite temporary benefits from other areas.

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With an increasing number of people eating fast food, which if eating too regularly can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely. To what extent do you agree?

An outright banning of fast foods is said to be a viable solution when it comes to associated health related issues from consuming it on a regular basis. The writer of this essay is in complete agreement with this scenario since fast food is not just the number one cause of obesity but also how a prohibition would lead to other, more healthier foods being selected by the general public.

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Some country are moving towards a cashless society where all transactions are digital. Do the advantages of a cashless society outweigh the disadvantages.

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In some countries, governments have tried to reduce the traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during the rush hours. Do you think this development is positive or negative?

There is no gainsaying the fact that in a few nations, congestion tax has been imposed/levied/slapped by many authorities/regimes to mitigate the problem of traffic bottlenecks in the rush hours. Imposing tax in the peak hours has both pros and cons. But, from my perspective, it is positive development due to its a number of merits.

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Some people believe that car-free days are effective ways to reduce air pollustion. However, others argue that there are other ways that are more effective. Discuss both vies and give your own opinion.

In the modern era, pollution is a global concern. Some individuals assume that there are more days that having no car on the road is an effective method. In the meantime, others hold a view that there are different alternative ways rather than the car-free. The two aforementioned perspectives will be discussed thoroughly in the following paragraphs before presenting my own view.

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Some people believe genetic engineering is a positive development that can improve human life. Others think it poses serious risks to society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people claim that genetic engineering provides some positive impacts on human life. Others believe that it has many negative effects on society. This essay will discuss both views.

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Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extend do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

People in the field of education contemplate that cross-cultural exchanges at the secondary school level will be beneficial for pupils. Although, there might be possible drawbacks in terms of the curriculum taught, I believe that implementation of these programs outweigh its challenges and can be transformative for the lives of teenagers due to their huge impact on the improvement of a foreign language and broadening the worldview.

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Success is often measured by wealth and material possessions. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?"

Today, it is common to think that successful people are only the ones who possess a lot of material and money resources. In my opinion, success of a person is not only his or her richness and possessions, it is also about personal characteristics, contribution to the world , and positive relationships.

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Earlier technological developments were more beneficial and changed the lives of the ordinary people than recent technology ever will. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is believed that technological enhancements happened while earlier ages provided more benefits and had larger impacts on society. However, some people argue that current developments are also notable. In this essay, I will discuss the difference of impacts between recent technological progress and past one and explain why I disagree with the initial statement.

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These days, more and more people are goiung to other countries for significant period of time, either to find job or to study. there are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

In this contemporary era many people tend to migrate to another country in the purpose of working or studying. there are precisely many upsides and downsides options , this essay will point out the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people believe that because of Modem technology, it is no longer Necessary For people to lean handwriting Skills, but others think that handwriting is Still an important Skill. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is frequently debated if writing manually is still important for people, while many tools have appeared on the market, making it unnecessary for creating high quality texts. In my opinion, although recent technologies will represent the one-way solution to well communicate, I believe that learning handwriting still remains one of the crucial paths to developing fundamental skills, especially in young people.

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Some people think individuals should be responsible for reducing pollution, while others argue that it is the government’s duty. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals believe that everyone has the responsibility to reduce pollution, while others claim that the government should be the one to address the problem. In my opinion, I fully agree with the viewpoint that protecting the environment requires every human being’s effort. This essay will discuss both perspectives and my reasonings.

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Leaders and directors in organizations are often older people. Some people say that younger people could be leaders. Do you agree or disagree?

Leadership and directorship are vital characters for big companies and it is often seen that the command of such role remains in the hands of senior staff members. However, some people say that they should give a chance to young professionals too. I disagree with this statement because these roles require background which newly hired employees might lack.

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All parents want the best opportunity for their children. There are some people who think schools should teach children skills but others think having a huge range of subjects is better for a child's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

Most parents wish to provide the best opportunities for their children. While some believe that schools should teach essential life skills, others think that studying a broad range of subjects helps children develop skills for the future. This essay will explore the contribution of schools and academic subjects, along with my own opinion.

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The only reason why people work hard is to earn money and there is no other reason for doing so. To what degree do you support or oppose this idea?

The assertion that financial gain is the exclusive motivator for hard work is a narrow perspective that overlooks the complex tapestry of human ambition and fulfillment.

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Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others are of the opinion that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the 21st century, the growing salary gap between directors and ordinary staff has sparked a heated debate. This essay will clarify some justifications for high salaries of directors and unfairness among employees before giving my own perspective on this matter.

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Some people believe famous people’s support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while other think celebrities make the problem less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In recent times it has been observed by some, that problems are made less significant by celebrities, while others believe that famous people supporting relief associations assist in highlighting issues that are otherwise ignored. Important personalities utilize their social status and credibility to vital difficulties which would otherwise be overlooked. It is due to these reasons that I agree with the former point of view.

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