IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 51

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries,employers prefer experience rather than the knowledge of the candidates. I believe that,benefits of this outweigh the demerits.

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The plans below show the layout of a public park in 1990 and in 2020

The maps illustrate the changes in the layout of Central Park between 1990 and 2020. Overall, the park underwent significant developments, with the addition of new facilities and infrastructure aimed at enhancing visitor experience.

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Many countries thought that children have to do homework in their free time while other say children should do more outdoor activity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that doing homework is very important for children's future careers. However, on the other hand, some people prefer outdoor activities in their leisure time. In my opinion, both of them are important for children's future careers, health, andlifestyle and they are completing each other.

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The growing number number of over wight people is putting strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. TO what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the surging proportion of obese populace is instilling profound burden on various healthcare services in order to mitigate the concern related to an obese human's health. Moreover, proponents believe that the most efficacious strategy which can be used as a remedy to solve this prevailing issue in the society is the incorporation of extensive physical education in any educational institutions. In my opinion, I firmly side my conviction in the affirmation of this proposed ideology as it will not only plunge the overall admission rate unhealthy obese individuals in the hospitals but also it will encourage the individuals to foster a healthy and fit lifestyle.

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In many countries, plastic shopping bags are the main type of rubbish. They cause water and land pollution, so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, in many nations, the usage of plastic shopping bags has been surged, which causes pollution of water and land in the environment. I totally agree with this statement and will explain my viewpoints and related examples in the following essay.

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The television is good for you. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of watching television. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience.

Television has beneficial effects for human-beings. It also has adverse impacts such as problems in vision and eye-sight. I believe that there are more advantages than its negative aspects. This essay will explain this topic in further detail.

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write atleast 250 words.

It has become increasingly common for some people to make payments by cards instead of cash, while others still insist(on) using cash. This trend may be driven by various factors and there are valid arguments for both sides. From my perspective, electronic payments will be a more popular and beneficial method of purchasing in the future.

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write atleast 250 words

It has become increasingly common for some people to make payments by cards instead of cash, while others still insist using cash. This trend may be driven by various factors and there are valid arguments for both sides. From my perspective, electronic payments will be a more popular and beneficial method of purchasing in the future.

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Robot and AI are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

As the 21st century continues to unfold, technological advancments are tranforming every aspects of our lives, particularly workplace. Although robots and AI have become significantly popular, due to their efficiency and affordability, I suppose this trend will impose serious challenges on societies.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behavior. What is your opinion?

Recently, the amount of violence that is displayed on TV programs and video games has increased considerably. While some people believe that these kind of programs pose a real threat on the society, others claim it will not be so damaging. I am in favor of formal statement and some vital aspects will be cover in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Obesity has been found to be a serious health hazard the world over, over the past few decades. What are the causes behind it and what are the effects of it on various sections of the community?

Over the course of last decades, the world has faced a wide range of health problems and obesity is not an exception. In fact, there are various factors such as physical inactivity and over-eating which brings about dire consequences for both the person and the society.

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Nowadays ,many people have to work longer hours and they feel stressed out than before.what are the reasons?what can employers do to make their life easier.

Nowadays work has a majority of time in our lives.So people spend longer hours at work and they feel more stressed than before There are many reasons for this issue add to that employers should find a solution to make their life easier.In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and I will highlight the solution.

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Nowadays, more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

Over the course of the last decades, finding a suitable job has become increasingly challenging. Many older job seekers have to compete with younger candidates for the same position, which can induce several problems such as large-scale unemployment and workplace conflicts for both individuals and societies. Therefore, some measures should be taken to address these issues effectively.

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Many government spend a lot of money on art.Some people think this investment in art in necesssary,but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many citizens presume it is necessary that the goverment invests a large sum of money into art, while on the other hand some assume that they should put the money instead into improving the health and education system due to the fact its more "beneficial", in this essay we will converse about both of these views with expressing my perspective.

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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experienc

The digital realm has benefitted our access to knowledge positively. I agree with this statement and believe that it has enhanced humanity in numerous ways. However, even though it laid the foundation for technological breakthroughs such as assisting instructors to teach via e-learning, it unabled people to work hard in terms of earn something.

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In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous peoples being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media have no right privacy. To what extend do you agree?

There is no denying the fact that the most captivating content in the press renvolves around celebrity and their lives.While it is commonly held belief that famous people loss their privacy the moment they get in the media , there is also an argument that opposes it.In my opinion , I consider although the well-known individuals choose career expose them to the society and become under the spot ,some privacy and limit require to ensure human comfort ,physical and mental health.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

In certain nations, students who just graduated from high school are adviced to take a gap year to travel or work. This essay will elaborate on the merits and demerits to this decision.

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More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or "remotely" rather than going into an office each day. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many people can work from home without going to the office. This has both advantages and disadvantages that should be considered.

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In modern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home

Nowadays, adolescents prefer to spend more time with their friends instead of with their families because of the improvement in technology compared to the past. Moreover, I believe that parents should not limit their children to hanging out with their friends in order to spend more time with their family.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In life there are times when unfavourable situations occur such as having a bad job or not owning enough funds. While some feel people should accept their fates when faced with these circumstances, there are opponents who believe that it is more profitable to try and change one's situation. This essay will elaborate on both sides of the argument and why I think it is better to accept bad situations when they occur.

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