IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 53

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Employment should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Most individuals say that, to make workers good at their work, companies must provide a month – long holiday. I totally agree with this statement. The agreement to the notion along with the conclusion is explained below in this essay.

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Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In today’s world, mandatory enlistment in a national service has been commonly implemented in most countries. Some people suggested that this adoption of the system in all nation is a brilliant idea, regardless genders. In my opinion, I agree with this view due to its significant advantages, especially for promoting the national loyalty, as well enhancing personal growth and development.

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Remote work has drastically improved productivity. This boost in productivity is attributed to the improved work-life balance that becomes more attainable when working from home. To what extent do you agree?

In this contemporary era, the norm of working from home have dramatically escalated the range of productive outputs delivered by any organizations following this trend. Morever, proponents also believe that this amendement had bolstered the work-life balance by plunging the discrepancy within it. However, in my opinion, I side my earnest conviction opposing this ideology as I opine that this prevailing scenario had elevated the culture of working overtime to meet the enforced job requirements as well as it has also resulted into building up higher state of unrealistic expectations in terms of tasks accomplishments.

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Schools should teach children the academic subjects which have a close relationship with their future careers, so other subjects like music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some suggest that schools should focus only on those subjects which are directly related to helping them choose their profession in future rather than incorporating other subjects like music and sports in into the curriculum. In my opinion, I disagree with the given statement.

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Some people think having a universtiy degree is the best way to secure a good job. However, others believe skills and experience are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many believe that being graduated from a university is the most optimal way to get a good job. In contrast, talents and experience have more importance for some people. I agree with the second view because worthy jobs require more than degrees such as reputation and experience in that sector.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school, and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more rather than compete against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opi

Some people tend to believe that contest between colleagues and teams is beneficiary. Others, in contrast, argue that working together instead of competing is much more helpful at the end of the day. It seems to me that the latter view is more rational as rivalry can result in emotional damages and the only person we have to compete is ourselves.

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Successful companies use advertisements to make more sales. What can make an advertisement effective? Do you think advertisemnts are a bad thing or a good thing for the society?

Advertising has become very popular these days because of the tough competetion in every industry. Promotion of the products is very beneficial for the consumers as well. I totally agree with the given statement.

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Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Living in the big cities can be quiet challenging to stay fit and healthy. Many believe that it has a negative impact on urban citizens health. I agree that the health services and facilities in urban centers are more advance and would give more benefits to its inhabitants. On the other hand, I believe that city life also detrimental effect on peoples health.

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Technology has brought many changes in our lives, especially in the educaion system. One of these is the introduction of online studies. Is this a positive or negative dvelopment? Give readons and examples from your personal opinion.

Technology advancements have made it possible for the society to get an education online, without the need to attend physically. While it's true that virtual classes are beneficial to society as they're flexible and cost-effective, they also possess major drawback, such as reduced social ability.

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In many countries, people are living in the thrownaway society where things are used for a short period and throw away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?

In various nation , humans are residing in the throwaway society in which products are used for a limited time and then discard it . The main causes for this is companies produce goods with a limited lifespan to increase sale and people prefer to latest design instead of quality due to this there are lots of waste production and it also impact the nature.

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Some people feel that playing computer games has a negative impact on children's health and social skills. Others say that it has a positive impact. Discuss both views

There is no doubt that these days the computer games have been playing a significant role in children's life . The question is , does that have a negative or positive effect on children's health and social skills? In this essay I am going to discuss both views.

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SOME PEOPLE DO NOT ALLOW CHILDREN TO PARTICIPATE IN GAMES’ SPORTS OR COMPETITIONS UNLESS EVERYONE GETS A PRIZE. OTHERS THINK THAT CHILDREN MUST LEARN TO DEAL WITH WINNING OR LOSING IN ORDER TO BE FULLY PREPARED FOR LIFE.DISCUSS BOTH THE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

Different people have different thoughts about the sport sector.Some parents think allowing their kids to partcicipate in sports whatever the results this makes them think sportive and other's think that the purpose of playing games is only a winning.In my point of view, the results are something we get for our performance it's need not be best everytime.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern times, there are a lot of burdens on the young generation to succeed in an academic sense. So , some people have an opinion that non-educational subjects such as physical education and cookery should not be included to the syllabus of the schools in order that children can focus on academic work. I completely don't support this idea and i will explain my thoughts on this topic

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Health care should not be provided for free. The health of the person is in his own hands, and they should pay for it themselves. What is your opinion?

Health care, nowadays, is the most concerning issue in the world. The health of the people is their responsibility only, so they ought to cure it for their own money. This essay disagrees with the statement. This essay will first discuss that there are some natural incidents that can not be controlled by humans, and then will show that the severe diseases require a lot of costs for the treatment.

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here is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern times, there are a lot of burden on young generation to succeed in an academic sense. So , some people have an opinion that non-educational subjects such as physical education and cookery should not include to syllabus of the schools in order that children can focus on academic work. I complatelly dont support this idea and i will explain my thoughs on this topic

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Some high schools require all students to wear uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school politics de you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Wearing of uniforms are a prerequisite to their students for some high schools. On the other hand, there other schools allows student to choose and to wear appropriate clothes in attending their class. In my opinion wearing of prescribe uniform is better than those who doesn't. School uniforms is an important image of a school that they are enrolled. This will also give student a sense of belongingness, pride as well as cost efficient and less hassle for student to think on what to wear every day in going to school.

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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write atleast 250 words.

It has been increasingly common for consumers to purchase a few luxury clothes, rather than a large amount of low-priced ones. This trend may be driven by various factors, and arguments are valid for both sides. From my perspective, it is more beneficial to keep a few expensive clothes.

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With the scale of globalization today, it would be of unquestionable benefit to have a single world currency. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

There is no doubt that the world population is fast growing. Therefore, globalization is rising on day-to-day basics, making the use of common currency worldwide prominent. While i agree that spending of single currency globally could be beneficial , especially in times of regional economical maintenance and could promote equality, i also believe that it could cause a loss in the market, especially for international traders.

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If old people are no longer physically, mentally, or financially able to look after themselves, younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As people grow old it gets tough to look after every aspect of life, some might struggle to maintain health and finances, at that time it should be a responsibility for the younger members of the family to look after the elderly. I agree with the statement, it is a moral obligation of the children to take care of their parents in old age.

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most of humans believe the government should need take care of human health but the other believe it is individual . discuse about both view

Different people in the world think it might be the Government's problem to take care of human health. However,it could be difficult to not refer to this concept to them but also is not all about the health programme which the Government provided.On the other hand, people need to keep themselves healthy before they require health treatment.

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