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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues facing the world today. What are some of the causes of global warming? How is it affecting our planet, and what can government and individuals do to solve the problem?

Global warming is one of the essential concern in our world today, and damaging our globe badly and dramatically. There are several causes and solutions, which can apply by government and individuals, of global warming. This essay will examine some causes and effects of global warming and will give easily appliying solutions.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that sugary products should be more expensive, and with this increasement in price there would be a consume reduction. I totally agree with this statement not only because sugar has a direct impact on the public health care system, but also because sugar has an addiction power and should follow the same rules as others vice products.

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While some people think that the problem with education in poor countries is the teaching methodology used, others believe it is the lack of resources that is the real issue. Discuss both sides.

Many individuals think that the bad quality of the learning method is the reason why cheap and poor lands have an issue with instruction, while others believe that it is the shortage of materials. In this essay, I will argue the statement made by both parts.

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These days consumer are faced with an increasing amount of advertising from various companies. To what extend do you think consumers are influenced by advertising? What measures should be taken to protect them?

Nowadays, advertising is a major strength of the business. Companies do advertising and over exaggerate the commodity's details to the customers on a daily basis. Excessive advertising can make customers feel irritated which companies need to understand. In the following paragraphs, I would like to explicate how customers get influenced and ideas to overcome these barriers.

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Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, some are not. Discuss both views and your opinion

Lately, planes have been widely utilised to delivery fruit and vegetables to the underprivileged nations. Some individuals hold the belief that importing agricultural cargo by the airway is beneficial, while others assume that it is not. This essay attempts to discuss both views and provide my perspective which is transporting agricultural goods by aircrafts is more advantageous.

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Some students travel abroad for one year before starting university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

People study overseas insearch of greener pastures,over the years the number of students who migrate abroad is increasing, a part of students go a year early to the country that they wish to study,this is highly beneficial because you will get to be familiar with the country before studies,you can also learn rules and language for that specific place however leaving early can also be stressful as one has more idle time which leads to missing home

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the value of taking risks is being promoted both in professional realms and in everyday life. From my personal perspective, the positive outcome of it definitely outweighs the potential damage.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

Recently, there have been fierce debates about where the focus of university students should lie, with various people providing different perspectives.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, in a great number of places across the world, there is a continuous exodus of people from the countryside to cities, which results in the decline of the rural population. From my perspective, this phenomenon is worth worrying for the reason that it can have lots of negative impacts on human beings.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent days, patients are trying alternative medical treatments and methods over visiting their general practitioners. The issue is that , arranging correct dosage for medicines and adjusting proper maneuvers should be conducted by healthcare professionals. Thus, I believe these people threaten their health through choosing alternative treatment options.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. What are the causes of this? Is this a positive or negative development?

It is true that in some nations, being a house owner instead of being a tenant is a crucial issue for people for a variety of reasons. It seems to me that is a positive situation. This essay will discuss reasons for this and why I believe in this way in further paragraphs.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

One of the positive impacts of a country's development is people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. I personally believe there is more positive development than negative development.

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Is it better for children to begin to learn a foreign language at primary school than at secondary school? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some specialists think that it is more advantageous for children to start studying a foreign language at primary school rather than at secondary school. Though there is a risk of failure and frustration, in my opinion, the advantage of teaching children a foreign language at their early stage obviously outweighs its disadvantages because they can learn fast enough compared to that of the other age groups.

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There are an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some people say that the best way would be to use death penalty as a deterrant, many people say that other measures will be needed.Discuss both views.

It is argued that we should punish the criminals or thieves, furthermore we have a lot of individuals that are under the influence of prison and governmental punishments. Also many people believe that fear of law can limit crime, in addition some parties try to pass laws for extreme punishments( like the death penalty).There are a lot of factors leading to bad behaviours and habits, but the judgment system can be sometimes motivating for crimes not deterrent. The thing that is important here, is the difference between the power of punishment and education.

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SOME PEOPLE BELIVE THAT CHILDREN SHOULD NOT BE GIVEN HOMEWORK EVERDAY, WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT THEY MUST GET HOMEWORK EVERYDAY IN ORDER TO BE SUCCESSFUL.

Education is considered as one of the most important tool for success. Most of the people hold a belief that homework to not be an everday task for school going children, whereas other vocalise by saying that it should be given everyday for improving children's academic performance. I opine that take home tasks are a must, for improving the understanding of the school taught topics into greater depths.

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Some people think that a person improves intellectual skills better when doing group activities. To what extend do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.

Some believe that clumping people together and having them engaged in group activities leads to enhanced intellectual growth. There seems to be a correlation between social engagement and motivation which in turn can lead to more occurrences of intellectual exertion, and by extension, improving intellectual skills. However, I beg to disagree because when it comes to the way our intellectual faculties chiefly develop and the nature of knowledge acquisition derived from our intellect, being active in a group activity is but a fraction of the whole process.

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Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, this is the information era, and people can see many advertisements in the mass media every day. As a result, some people think that we are becoming the same. However, I do not entirely agree with the view, although advertising influences people.

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow on are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Air travel for agricultural product delivery have increased in some nations where plants out of season are rarely thrive. It is believed that this is a smart move, whilst, others are strongly disagree with it.

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a controversial discussion about whether airliners have been the main harvest assistant towards uncultivated countries. In this essay, I agree that aircraft play an indispensable role in supervising the agriculture of these non-potential countries due to its agility and convenience in mobility, despite others contend that the limited quantity in transporting is a major hurdle in this way of supporting.

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Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Aeroplanes have been developing and becoming more popular, vegetables and fruits are delivered to some countries where such plants grow difficult or climate and weather are strict. A lot of people think that is a good way to provide fruits and vegetables but it still has many drawbacks. This essay will discuss both of views and give the author's opinion.

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