IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 620

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

As society develops, it has brought about an increasing number of issues related to transport and accommodation. Therefore, companies are being encouraged by some governments to relocate to the countryside. In this essay, I will discuss that the urban citizens' lives may be less convenient

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new research has shown that overeating has become a bigger problem than hanger. What are the reasons of this problem? and how could be solved?

In this contemporary epoch, the over consumption of food has become a controversial argument. Whilst there is a general tendency towards the spontaneous consumption of dietary products, I reckon that advertising campaigns have encouraged individuals to consume different kinds of dietary goods, and the state involvement is the drastic remedy of this issue. In this essay, the main reasons behind this trend, along with the possible solutions will be further elaborated.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Over the last decades, there has been a leap forward in the mobile phone technology with countless advantages. A lot of juveniles, today, spend their time on their smartphones, and this situation can stem from several reasons. Both the reasons and my view is elaborated further passages.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign languages can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this competitive world, many people want to study or work abroad. However, some people believe that living in a country where the language is different can lead to significant problems in society, as well as practical problems. I totally agree with this idea because of some reasons.

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Some people spend a lot of money attending cultural or sports events. Is it a good or a bad thing?

There are folks, who generously spends on recreational events. However, excess of everything is bad even if it is on some personal or public events. Though attending recreational and supports events is a good activity to stress out and to see your favorite game/ culture.

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There are different types of music in the world today. Why do we need Music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays

There are various genre of sounds over the globe. The world is becoming a small village due to the area of globalization. Old era music have more importance than the now a days tunes due to its importance of connecting the youth with their roots. In this essay I will discuss my point of view with some examples.

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Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

Although, nowadays it is popular among people to occupy a sophisticated condominium instead of choosing simple houses, there are lot of reasons for individual choices. In my preferences, I still love to stay at old fashion house in which I will give some details in the next paragraphs.

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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.Why do you think that is?What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

Art is an important part of all cultures worldwide. But nowadays fewer individuals appreciate art and choose science, technology and business. I agree with this statement and I will clear my view in an upcoming essay.

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Providing a national system in a country where the unemployed receive a regular payment only encourages people not to seek work and puts an unreasonable strain on a country’s financial resources. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

Providing a financial aid to unemployed people is mostly found in developed countries mainly in Europe. I support this initiative only when the funds are given to the right group of people.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Over the last decades, there has been a leap forward in mobile phone technology with countless advantages. A lot of juveniles, today, spend their time on their smartphones, and this situation can stem from several reasons. Both the reasons and my view is elaborated further passages.

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Some people prefer to use energy-saving modes of transportation like hybrid cars and bicycles. Others prefer the usual mode of transportation like buses and trains because it is fast and efficient. Which mode of transportation do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

People use transportation means to travel from one place to another. Some are keen on using traditional methods of transportation such as buses and trains while others prefer to use modern means of transportation which are innovative. I strongly support the latter approach which is energy efficient.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In resent years,with the development of society, life becomes more and more convenient.However,this has also led to an increasing number of children developing bad habits due to the convenience of life. I agree that both schools and parents have a responsibility to address this issue.

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There are fewer controls over the designs and construction of home and office buildings. People can build them however they like. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Houses always played an essential role for the mankind. Our ability to build shelters helped us to enhance dramatically and to settle down our superiority above all other living species on Earth. However, a barely controlled construction process can produce dangerous results.

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In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?

Brain drain is huge problem for poor countries .As every year thousand of skilled manpower like Doctors, Engineers and IT professional migrate to devleoped countries like Uk, Germany, france, Neitherland in Europe and Usa, Canada in North america. It is big challange for poor countries to make them work for their home countries. Lets discuss in detail.

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Some think that residents should responsible for keeping their areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

There are few people who argue that citizens are responsible to keep their neighborhood neat and clean. While, some of them believe that it is only the responsibility of the government. Making the environment clean is the equal responsibly of both the parties i.e. the residents of the area as well as the government. I also agree with the foremost statement that being the inhabitant of the any residential area, keeping the area should be the priority. Similarly, government should play their roles to maintain the cleanliness of all the areas of the country.

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These days older people who have retired often choose to spend money on them. For example on holiday, rather than save money for their children. Is this a positive or negative development

Nowadays, it is common practice for retirees to use all their funds for self enjoyment instead of saving and leaving and leaving an inheritance for their offsprings. I think this is a positive development because it allows elderly people to enjoy the reward of their labour and also instill the habit of hardwork on young folks.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people are with the opinion that home is a better place for children's growth while some believe that educational institutes would play a significant role in this context. However, in my opinion both the places have their own importance for the child's development.

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In some countries, people waste a lot of food which is bought in shops and restaurants. What do you think are the reason? What can be done to solve this problem?

In many countries all over the world, restaurants throw away a huge percentage of the food which is considered to be left overs. This essay will discuss a couple of reasons behind this problem and suggest some ideas to solve this issue.

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Some people believe that companies should hire young people. Others say that older experienced staff should be hired.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Companies nowadays are having different opinions about hiring people of different age groups and their experiences. Some prefer hiring the young generation to work and some go for the experienced generation.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In today world, it can be deniable that music is one of the vital part people's life since it generates both entertainment and relaxation. Some people claim that songs pull people regardless of their cultures or ages together, the critics argue that music is only used for entertainment purposes. In my humble opinion, I believe that music is one of the best means to connect society around the world together.

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