IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 621

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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write your personal statement. Why do you want to educate in here?

I often contemplate about the following questions: “Why is education unequal to students all over the country?” and “Why is the Korean government not protecting teachers from the infringement of teaching rights?”

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millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. some peope argue that the money should spent on improving living standards on earth. do you agree or disagree

many people believe that the huge amount of money should be spent on space research everyyear. whereas others think that it is more nescessary to spent thes money on improving iving standards on earth. it is the the opinion of this writer that money should be spent on improving living standards on earth rather than on space research.

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To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement that oil, jungle, water, and other natural resources are being used too much? What are the main causes of this issue and what do you believe is the best possible solution? Provide reasons and examples to support your viewpoint."

It is true that, oil, jungle,water and other natural resources are being used too much.The main cause of this issue that people try to build new cities even in forested areas and the best possible solution is governments should do much more to curb the exploitation of these non-renewable resources.

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Some people believe that residents are responsible for keeping the roads clean and others say that it is the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Public space always maintains issues. One of them is keeping the roads clean. Some people assert that is the goverment's responsibility. However, in my point of view, residents are responsible for this matter. Accordingly, this essay is going to discuss both views on this issue.

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Millions off dollars arre spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standard on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays , space industry is being invested by the government with millions of dollars for exploration . In contrast , some people think that the money should be used for improving living condition on Earth . This writer argues that the money should be used to explore the space .

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In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the cause of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

The high quantity of vehicle makes heavy traffic in several big cities and there are a few causes that led to this mess. Some actions can be done to tackle this chaos caused by high volume.

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Some people believe that new technologies like mobiles kills social interaction . Do you agree or disagree ?

There is an underlying assumption that in the contemporary era up-to-date devices, like smartphones can do harm to the social connection between community. However, there are not only demerits in using modern gadgets, but also some hidden benefits which I am going to explain further.

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on inproving living standard on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that the research on space every year should be spent millions of dollars, but the others inviduals that the money use for improve living standards is more useful than this. In my opinion, I believe that use money for both because when we invest for each thing, we will be received various benefits.

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on inproving living standard on Earth. Do you argee or disargee?

Many people believed that the research on space every year should be spent millions of dollars, but the other inviduals that the money use for improve living standards than this. In my opinion, I believed that use money for both because when we invest for each things, we will be received various benefits.

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Millions of dollars are spent on spacer search every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Millions of dollars are focusing on outer space research every year. Many individuals believe that the living of standards on Earth should be improving by spent money on it. I totally agree with this statement and I will give my opinion in this essay.

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Millions of dollars are spent on spare research every year . Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth . Do you agree and disagree?

Every year many millions of dollars were invested in the amount of cash that was not being used for research. Many think that the fee should be invested in developing the quality of citizen’s life in that country. Whether or not, to invest fund in spare research is a controversial discussion point, this writer argues that the government should have a solution due to what they need not for the majority of people.

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In the future, the reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many individuals think that going to a shopping mall is not only to buy things, but also for entertainment. In this essay, I will show reasons for this opinion and include why I agree that way.

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Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not able to pay their debts back. Do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?

Acquiring a credit card in the current day has become a straightforward process, offering users better access to finances and allowing them to make transactions with ease. Despite the potential complications that may occur for people who are unable to repay their debts, I feel the benefits of credit cards much exceed the drawbacks. The convenience that credit cards provide is one of its key benefits. Users may use credit cards to make transactions without carrying huge amounts of cash, reducing the danger of theft or loss. Furthermore, credit cards enable users to make purchases online or in other countries, which simplifies transactions and increases access to a broader choice of items and services. Credit cards can give financial flexibility by allowing customers to cover unforeseen needs and pay off the debt over time, reducing possible financial stress. Another significant benefit of credit cards is the consumer protection they give. Many credit card providers provide fraud prot...

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Some people believe it's the responsibility of the government to take care of its peoples health . Others believe individuals should take care of themselves. Give views of both and your opinion

In this day and age human beings have devided their opinoins regarding the responsibility of the government to provide free healthcare. Nevertheless, some individuals believe that people have to be obliged to check their health conditions by themself. I will elucidate both standpoints in expanded detail and provide my personal opinion.

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Billions of dollars are being wasted on space research. The money used could be better if used to improving condition on people on earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Space research has spend a lot of money while those money spent can actually be allocated to help condition on the earth in several area and make the earth worth living for the next hundreds years. Some people worry too much about the future and neglect the current urgent situation which is global warming.

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. It is difficult for people who live in cities to get enough physical exercise. What causes and solutions can be taken to solve the problem?

In the current world, physical activities aren't much in practice. This essay will discuss various reasons and enumerate the causes why urban residents have difficulty working out regularly. In addition, there will also be some solutions to it.

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Some people prefer to shop in supermarkets, while others like shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion

As technology become advanced, many people choose shopping by online, while the others still go to the supermarket for buying groceries. Despite each view's stance, it is apparent that both have their own reasons and benefits.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

With the rapid technological advancements, it indeed appears that our younger generation are more exposed to technology, especially smartphones. This habitual changes have both positive and negative effects on the children itself and this essay will discuss about this.issue.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while the other believe that it is better to get a job straight after graduating from high school. Discus both views and give your opinion.

There is a prevailing debate regarding career advancement. Some argue for education and pre-employment studies, however, others state for swiftly obtaining employment after school graduation. While both perspectives hold merit, I wholeheartedly opine that education is essential for certain professions that require a solid foundation.

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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In a lot of countries children are occupied in something similar to a paid work. While somebodies consider it totally incorrect, others are convinced that is beneficial work experience. In my opinion, i believe that having a paid work job prepare teenagers for their further future life, by building them as an independent individuals. However, this may have a negative consequences on their childhood.

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