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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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A recent survey shows that in many countries across the world people are generally living longer. But an increased life expectancy has many implications for the aging individuals and for the society as a whole. What are the possible effects of a longer life expectancy on individuals and the society?

Aging society is one important problem that most countries have to face. However, whether the aging individuals has effects for whole societies is a controversial issue. In my opinion, the elder situation has any negative implication in many countries.

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Advanced technology has brought many beneficial changes to the world. However, some old people today struggle with the use of technologies such as mobile phones and the Internet. How can the elderly benefit from using advanced technologies? How can the elderly be encouraged to use consumer electronics more often?

Technological advancements have been essential and beneficial for modern life. However, some elderly people have difficulty using technologies like mobile phones and the Internet nowadays. In my opinion, this development has made elderly people’s lives more convenient, and technology companies should create an application that can measure people's health everyday to encourage old people to use it more frequently.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages

It is essential for human beings to take risks, in their occupation lives as well as, their internal lives. yet, there remains some dissagrements on whether the overall impact of risk-taking in our daily life has been positive or negative, however, I believe that the advantages of this trend going on far outweigh its disadvantages.

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Some believe that standardized English exams, like IELTS, are just big business to make money. others, however, think that standardized English exams are important for society. Which do you believe and why Give explanations and examples to support your explanations with support your opinion.

Some people think that public English exam which evaluate individual's English skills has a sole purpose that make a lot of profits. In other hand, there are many protesters, like me, believe that it is a very useful tool to prove social member's English achievement and proficiency.

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Students in some countries leave school without good understanding of how to manage their money, What do you think are the reasons ?What are the solutions to this problem?

Nowadays, many students don’t have good management for their money when they leave school in some countries. However, whether young people need to learn how to manage their money is a controversial problem. In my opinion, college should provide a subject to teach people how to manage money and the students need to learn this knowledge.

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In many countries, the government likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both sides and giver your opinion.

The Governments in most countries are promoting and spending a lot of expenditure on Arts rather than on health and education, This has diversified opinions among some individuals. This essay discusses both sides.

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Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural back ground living together in the same country makes the country to develop faster.do you agree

Nowadays we live in a globalised society, where people who come from different cultures can meet each other and live together.

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Some parents believe that cell phones are harmful to children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Cell phones are the greatest invention in the 21st century, But some parents think that Mobiles cause trouble for their children. In this ,essay we are discussing both merits and demerits of the usage of mobile phones.

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We live in a modern world that the internet caused us to name world, world village. technology helps people achieve their goals. Some people believe we have many choices and I agree.

Firstly, we will be aware of the earth's changes just in several minutes, unlike in the past. We can travel everywhere, or even choose where to live and it is because of great advances in the transportation system.In addition, Nowadays there are many immigrants from different countries, they decided to leave their own countries although, It was not possible in the past. We can learn crucial information by searching the internet and trying to learn different languages using different applications. also, We even can see many places, far or close, without travelling there, and it is really great.

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In recent years, online education is becoming more and more popular. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays, there exist varying opinions regarding the reputation of distance education rather than traditional classes. Although online tuition has the both advantages and more downsides I lean a little bit toward to this rather than traditionally teaching.

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Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural back ground living together in the same country makes the country to develop faster.do you agree

Nowadays people are migrating from one country to another country in search of better lifestyle or job opportunities.Many individuals assume that kingdom grows very rapidly if the multinational and multicultural people stayed together.I agreed with the former statement.I will explain it in a successive paragraphs.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

In the last couple of decades, the trend of living in personal houses is declining all over the world. In many, countries people consider living in a rented apartment more beneficial than buying one. But, there are some pros and cons of residing on someone's else property. In this essay, I will explore both sides and draw a conclusion.

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Some people think should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artist should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

People often think that creative artists like painters and musicians get paid well like others. Many Creative artists are not getting paid well like movie actors and other creative fields. Nowadays people in creative fields are decreasing due to less pay.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Occasionally some works can be unpaid, while people try to earn money. Unpaid jobs not always describe a case with scam. There are also community services that help to improve the environment. Following the opinion this essay agrees that community service should be a compulsory part of high school.

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We live in a modern world that the internet caused us to name world, world village. technology helps people achieve their goals. Some people believe we have many choices and I agree.

Firstly, we will be aware of the earth's changes just in several minutes, unlike in the past. We can travel everywhere, or even choose where to live and it is because of great advances in the transportation system. Nowadays there are many immigrants from different countries, they decided to leave their own countries. It was not possible in the past. We can learn crucial information by searching the internet and trying to learn different languages using different applications. We even can see many places, far or close, without travelling there, and it is really great.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that if all the humans speak a same tongue, people will have higher living standard. Although I think unified tongues bring some advantages in daily life, I tend to believe fewer languages will have lots of bad impacts for ourselves.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that zoos help to preserve wild creatures, whilst others disagree and think that they are inhumane and should be abolished. While breeding programmes can contribute to the preservation of endangered species, I believe that the poor conditions that many animals held in capacity are kept in make the existence of zoos unacceptable.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything they want if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Some children are often told that they can get anything they want as they try hard enough. This message really affect them in making them succeed. However, it will also create them tough to embrace failure. In this essay, I will take a closer look at the aforementined key advantage and disadvantage.

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The destruction of rain forests to create land for agricultural use is a serious problem. What are some of the common problems, and what can be done to reduce them?

Nowadays, people are cutting trees to make landings for their own use. However, this situation is causing numerous serious problems. In this essay, I will explain some of the causes and solutions to reduce this problem.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

Nowadays the number of students for studying abroad significantly has increased.Accordingly; this issue can be considered a new social phenomenon.So; there are some advantages such as gaining a distinct cultural experience also it surely has disadvantages like economical problems due lossing lossing workforce in the future.

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