IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 623

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

As we come into the new millennium, the overcrowded situation in downtowns has become a whistle-blowing topic among both government and individuals. In my opinion, although such a phenomenon may drag people into adverse circumstances and damage their lives, there are many interventions that can be carried out to confront this trend.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Had fast food not existed, would many individuals overeating it in some lands have less health issues. The problematic nature of the mentioned type of food is being tried to be solved with policies like higher tax rates for it. The latter can be viewed as vital or not looking at its benefits and drawbacks.

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There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Nowadays, various kind of music in their individual ways can be seen extensively. Existing of music is a fundamental need for human beings with comprehensive reasons, and I would admit that traditional music is more important than international music.

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Animals are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

The extinction of animals has become a popular bone of contention. Some sections of society think that people should focus to save those animals who are beneficial to humans. I entirely disagree with this above notion as all animals have the right to live.

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Some people think that the increase in international travel has a negative impact on the environment and should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

While some people are of the opinion that travelling between different countries has a detrimental effect on the planet, others suggest that it does better than harm. I tend to agree with the second group of individuals since economical and cultural advantages have more weight in our life.

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In many countries not enough student are choosing science subjects at university. -What are the causes of this? -What are the effects on the society?

Science plays an important role in development of the society today. However, there has been decline a decline in people pursuing science as a career option. This issue can effect people at large. The viewpoints for the cause of this issue and effects of this issue will be examined in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

It's apparent that we need to recycle more of things which are found in rubbish because our resources are restricted and leaving them in our environment can lead to ecological damages. One part of society believe that the governments should make strict laws to obligate people for recycling their waste from home. Overall, I agree with this claim and I think governments can play a vital role in protecting our earth from pollution. In the following essay, my reasons are going to be outlined and few examples will be mentioned.

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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

Technology and computers are becoming an essential part of human life. In this tech savy world a lot of people have accessible reach to computers, that is to say children spend excessive time playing video games. This essay will look at the negative impacts for this and propose some solution to cut down bad effects.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Much debate has sparked whether spending four or more years at university to get a degree really is better than simply getting a job, like it is commonly believed. In this essay I will present both views and give my personal opinion.

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

People believe that education is essential for everyone. There are many varieties of assessment for student’s education level. I am disagreeing that formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Analyzing the education system, it is not fair view for all students to decide with the formal examinations as well as the limitation of the young children thinking will prove this.

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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People tend to have different views about the function of museums. Some think that they should be a place for enjoyment, while the others are certain, that it is important for them to be educational. In this essay I will discuss both views and state my opinion.

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Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

A certain point of inhabitance that the most of people in poor countries die because virus diseases .There for this people have not enough money for get their medication required. Even though Some one believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these country. They are some supporters for this version. even though this essay will have discuss with effects with a summary .

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Some children spend hours every day on smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, a lot of kids allocate considerably their time to cell phones. I think it has different drawbacks and different reasons. This essay will mention some of them.

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In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays, new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach?

In the past few decades, it is believed that lectures used to be the conventional teaching manner of numerous students. However, the application of cutting-edge technological advances in teaching is widely prevalent in this era. Despite its obvious benefits, there are certain inherent drawbacks that must be considered.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. in your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Although it is sometimes thought that studying the English language is more useful than knowing their mother tongue language. However , it can force die to their local dialect. In my opinion, I believe that knowledge of English is vital, but community should support and know their language, because it can led to different problems in their culture.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Obesity among children has risen sharply over the last decade in western countries. Such a trend is largely the result of a tendency towards convenience in society, yetits effects may be detrimental to children’s long-term mental and physical health.

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These days, people work in more than one job and often change carrier several times during their life. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In the modern era, many many kinds want to work in more than one job. However, often they change the career many times in their life. As every garden have it's weeds, similarly this situation is both benefits as well as drawbacks and this essay will highlights both the aspects.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People who leave in a different country,where they speak foreign language can have social problems. They,also might have practical problems. I agree with given statement. There are arguments on both sides; however, which i will discuss here.

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In some places, old age is valued,while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries older citizens play vital role whereas , other opine that youngsters are very crucial for their society. I also agree with the former view in this given statement. This essay intends to discuss my point of views in detail.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

New technology has effected our lives in different ways. There are always pros and cons of everything. The social media sites have a huge impact on human beings. Some people take it positively but others think that these sites have played a negative role in youngster's life. In my eye, twitter and facebook have both advantages and disadvantages.

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