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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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happiness is considered very important in life. why is it difficult to define? what factors are important in acheiving happiness?

Happiness is a very complex thing to define. according to each people, the concept of happiness is different. Some people are happy when they achieve high achievements, while for others, happiness is simply living together with their loved ones. Although everyone's concept of happiness is not same. in my opinion, happiness will be based on two basic conditions, the first is economic, the second is health. people who have both of these factors are more likely to achieve happiness

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some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. others think that the true function of university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. what, in your opinion, should be the main function of the university.

certain folks around the world argue that task understanding should be tough alongside learning programs in colleges while others believe that the main function of a university is to teach all recruitment in their own schedule, even if it is beneficial or not for an employer. From my point of view, universities' main goal should be teaching admission solely education. The impending essay will discuss both sides with a logical conclusion.

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What events have you been to that were a complete shambles? What happened?

It was my brother's wedding 15 years ago. Since he was the first in the family to get married, we had no experience with organizing the event. Besides that, because of cost savings, he refused to hire any organizer team. It started with the number of guests who were more than invited. The consequence was not enough places to sit and enough food to be served. The event was the sit-down table (Chinese dishes) for around 10 people per table, so normally people come with their group, so they didn’t want to mix around with others; it was chaos because the only person that knew "who was who" was the bride and groom. Taking photos with the bride and the groom is another disaster. Traditionally, guests will take photos with the bride and groom at the backdrop in front of the event. Therefore, with the number of guests and poorly organized, the queue was long, so people were standing everywhere. It was a mess. I didn’t mean to whinge, but the wedding was a shambles. I was so gutted, it was s...

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habits. On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more safely. Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence. There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences. The aim of these punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences. As a result, we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that they follow the rules more carefully. On the other hand, I believe that safe driving can be promoted in several different ways that do not punish drivers. Firstly, it is vitally important to educate people properly before they start to dri...

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Should the government support artists such as musicians, painters and writers? Is it economically beneficial or it is just wastage of money? Why or why not

Art is a vital part of our culture and tradition and artists act as servants of artwork. It became a debatable issue whether helping troupe is effective or is just ruining the economy. In this essay, I will outline the reasons behind the fact that ,why Government should support craftsmen.

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Space travel has been possible for some time and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

With the help of technology, travelling in space has become possible nowadays. Some individuals believe that upgrading this form of tourism is crucial for human beings. In my opinion, I am convinced that other core issues of nature are much more important to take care of than this trend, therefore, it is a negative development overall because of the following arguments.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

Today cost of living become more expensive than it used to be. As a result, no one will dispute the importance of salary, however, in my opinion, it is not the main factor to keep employees engaged. In this essay I will discuss why I think job satisfaction is far better than a big salary.

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2- Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea, some think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that plastic shopping bags are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, so it should be prohibited. While I agree that plastic bags have cause lots of issues, I believe that it still have positive role in daily life.

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Scientists agree that many people are eating too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that these problems can be solved by educating people to eat less junk food. Other people believe that education will not work. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

In the present situation, junk food has become a hot topic among all over the globe. While some people argue that encouraging individuals to be equipped with knowledge about the impacts on human body by intaking processed foods is the key method to aid people having clean diet, others point out that it would not be effective. In my opinion, I strongly believe that education will not influence people to have a healthy diet.

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In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.

Nowadys, the number of out of school youth who are jobless is increasing. The rise in youth unemployment iss going to negatively affect them in many aspect such as lead more crimes and get mental diseases. This cause by they do not have enough money to continue their studies and vacancies in companies with high requirements for their degrees. To solve this problem government need support urgently needed to ensure the future of the young. This essay will discuss the problems as well as possible solutions for this issue.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the life of every person there are unexpected situations from which it is difficult to find a way out, such as an unsatisfactory job, redundant or lack of money. By handful of people, it is believed, that in bad situations it is the best to accept. However, other think that is better to try and improve such situations. I consider, that it is the best to find a way out. I live by the principle of one wise quotation: Give up only after the fight.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

Nowadays, tourists who visit to foreign countries produce large profits all over the world. On the other hand, some people are anxious about its affection to local residents and the environment. Personally, I think that the disadvantages of international beyond the advantages.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In recent years, many people decide to be a self-employed workers and not to continue working in organizations. The main reason of this situation will be the severe environment for workers, and the risk of unstable self-employed business will be the down point.

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Many believe that individuals can do little to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a real difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that only governments and large companies can help in improving the environment on a massive scale and individuals can bring up the fewer improvements. I completely agree with this opinion and think that government and large companies can make a huge difference in the environment.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Numerous employees enjoy serving in one long-term company due to its conveniences, however, some workers prefer experiencing more differences and novel challenges from various institutions. I personally believe that this is all about personal preferences, and I strongly opine that the two scenarios are justified as long as the individual is truly happy and keeps growing in their authentic ways.

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Some groups, such as poor people or people from rural area find it is difficult to access the university education. Universities should make it especially easy for the students come from the rural areas get an access to the university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, studying university degree is not as luxurious as it used to be in the past. Although more and more students are joining university, there are still significant barriers for people who are not rich and lives in a rural area. I strongly believe that universities should encourage those students to start their degree and to fulfil their completion.

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In education or employment, some people work harder than others. What are the reasons for this? Does hard work always lead to success?

We can observe that a group of people always work with great exertion in education life or in employment. I think that working hard is the key to the success, nothing is easy. But it has also the norm, overworking can have some undesirable effects on health.

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Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a countries success, while others think that other factors can be used to measure a countries success. What are these Factors? Which do you think are most important?

a small proportion of the population argues that countries' development is rooted in financial success whereas others disagree with them. there are other key points to be considered in this case and in my perspective, the most prominent one is having a massive population of well-educated people.

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Write about the following topic: Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, in this modern era education Play important role in human life. History subject show the details of the freedom fighter and nation history it important children should learn it. While, some people believe that it is waste of the time they can learn another subject like, science and computer that i will discuss the both views in further paragraphs.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve a crime. Do you agree or disagree?

Thank to, modern technologies the crime rate is significantly decreased so, so they are one of the best obstacles in front of criminals. From my perspective this point of view does not reflect the objective reality, therefore there is not any prover shrink crime rate and furthermore, criminals have modernized simultaneously with their methods with the policies.

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