IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 630

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Wirte your personal statement why do you want to study MA Comparative Education in University College London.

I participated in a rally which has held on September 2, in front of the National Assembly building in Seoul. We were gathered to mourn the death of a teacher who recently committed suicide and demand the restoration of teaching authority. The acquaintances of the teacher came to the front and talked about her. "She was a bright person like a spring, versatile, who also has a passion for teaching." I cried much because we lost such a wonderful teacher. Why we couldn’t protect her from death? The place I’m working now is a dangerous place when I meet a student who hits and curses me. Also, it is a dangerous place where I may meet parents who report me for child abuse. However, still I love my work and my dream is to make it a better place.

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In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What types of changes are occurring? Do you think these changes are positive and negative

In the contemporary years, due to the evolution of society, there are some modifications both in terms of organization and task delegation in the family. Personally, I assume these developments as a neutral trend because of several reasons.

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In the recent times, the only way to see pieces of art or historical artefacts was by visiting public museums and galleries. Nowadays, people can admire them on the internet. In my opinion such places as galleries and museum should exist for finacial and enterteiment reasons.

In the recent times, the only way to see pieces of art or historical artefacts was by visiting public museums and galleries. Nowadays, people can admire them on the internet. In my opinion such places as galleries and museum should exist for finacial and enterteiment reasons.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days it is noticeable that a number of people around the globe are moving to urban areas from villages looking for a better life. This leads to reduction of the population in rural areas. This essay believes that massive migration to cities will bring a negative effect. Firstly, there is a shortage of skilled labor in rural areas; Secondly, moving to urban areas leads to overcrowding.

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WITH A FAST PACE OF MODERN LIFE MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE TURNING TOWARDS FASTFOOD FOR THEIR MAIN MEALS. DO YOU THINK ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH THE ADVANTAGES?

In the contemporary era, where speed is demanded all the time, many people eat more and more fast food in order not to waste time in food's preparing. In my opinion, one of us should invast on his or her main meal and try to keep it as healthy as possible, that's why I think that there is much more drawbacks than benefits of eating fast food.

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Young people often copy the behaviour of famous people, so celebrities should only be allowed to advertise healthy food or drink and should not encourage unhealthy habits such as smoking. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many celebs have to advertise only important things for health such as healthy fresh food, organic drinks, sports and other stuff, as many youngsters follow their behavior. I fully agree with this statement. According to this in the paragraphs below, I will discuss my point of view.

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Is freedom of speech necessary in free society? Agree or disagree?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is problem about freedom of speech viral in free society. Now people are beginning to realize that they can not express their opinion, because of some laws, which resrict freedom of expression. Personally, I tend to think that this laws are correct in our society,because no one can condemn someone arguing that he can express as liberty of speech.

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Is freedom of speech viral in free society? Agree or disagree?

To commence, this essay will examine how this topic affects different aspects in society .It is undeniable that expressing one’s own opinion has become symbol of our sovereign life.However,there is no absolute agreement on having attitude on people words or keeping your point of views in yourself.

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Some people tend to buy products or get services instantly, without waiting. Why is it happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

Individuals nowadays resort to purchase of different products and experience various facilities as soon as they are released in the market. It is caused mainly due to the reasons for extreme product obsession and the fear of missing out. In my opinion this proves to be a highly disadvantageous approach.

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Government spending on restoration of old buildings in cities should be stopped. Instead they should spend the money for housing and road development. Do you agree or disagree

There has been a recent debate about whether governments should spend the funds on further developments of roads and houses instead of the restoration of old monuments. Although I think it has both pros and cons and this essay explores my views with relevant epitome and well-defined conclusions .

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some people think that the advantages of sports products through famous sports players outweigh the disadvantages .To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is irrefutable that advertisement has a paramount importance for the organisation as well as the society,also. A certain segment believes that advertising of sports products by a popular play player has more advantages than disadvantages. I agree with this statement that; I would like to explicate about it in the upcoming paragraphs.

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The death penalty is a contentious issue in many states and countries around the world. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the death penalty is a polemic subject in different countries around the world. I strongly believe that the drawbacks surpass the benefits.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this messages?

It is true that in some communities with different cultures, people tell their children to make every effort to achieve whatever they want. This way of upbringing has several advantages and disadvantages which will be discussed in the following essay.

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These days many people prefer working at home instead of going to their working place. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, people have a different opinion about work,some prefer to go to the office and spend the day there.While others think working from home is the better option.Clearly, each one of them has a good reason to make that choice.

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‘Cannabis has been classified as a Class B drug in the UK since 2008 and carries a prison sentence of up to five years for possession.’ (Source: The Week) Many countries have decriminalised the use of cannabis and as a result have seen a reduction in drug related crime. Should cannabis and other soft drugs use be legalised? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There has been a recent debate whether canabis and soft drugs should be authorised by the law makers or not. Even though , It is proved extremely productive in the medical sectors such as for anxiety , depression and cancer patient. However, it has also the dark side which can lead to hazardous impact after misusing it . According to me it has both positive and negative impact .I will discuss my both views in this essay with relevant eptiome and well-defined conclusion.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Proper waste management of the residentials are rarely seen, normally. Sometimes the people living in a residential area may be concerned but the overall scenario is telling us something else.

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Many countries thought children have to do homework in their free time while others say children should do more outdoor activity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate among people according to whether it is better for kids to spend their free time on studying rather than playing.

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When students study a foreign language, they should also study the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak the language. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate among people regarding whether students need to study foreign cultures along with the language.

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More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is undisputed fact that a growing number of individuals have put their personal details online. While there undoubtly danger is this, I believe that convenience of putting such data on the internet outweighs the negative aspects.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the course of human history, people have been trying to increare their information in all aspects of life to survive. Like getting information about how to accumulate food in the past to how to step on the Mars now. By the same token some people are of te belief that sharing information as much as possible, would be good, while others claim that some information should not be shared becuure of their impertance. I would say both arguments have valiety, but I would lean toward the Former.

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