IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 630

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some companies sponsor sports and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the present age, whereas enterprises should invest in sports and sports stars has sparked much debate. Some people assert that it may contribute to the success of a business whereas others claim that this type of marketing strategy makes people buy purposelessly and therefore causes harm for nature. I am also convinced that such promotion is of no value for the majority of humanity, as well as our planet.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governaments to make it a legal requirement To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

There are few numbers of people exist who think that the ratio of recycled waste is lower than what it is supposed to be. In the below, I'll depict my idea about this thought.

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Parents should encourage children to spend less time in studies and more time in physical activities. To what extent do you agree?

In the modern world, admission to top universities is seen as a key step to success, and many parents, in order to achieve this goal, force their children to study more. However, some people believe that guardians should encourage children to exercise more, rather than acquire knowledge. From my point of view, Iagree that children should spend more time on physical activity.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are a variety of views about sharing information in the academic world. Some views are that we should share the information as massive amount as possible in the academic world. Nevertheless, some people say that people can not share too much information since some information is too crucial.

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In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree?

It is broadly believed that academy education ought to provide free of charge tuition for everyone. Although I support this view, somehow, I assume that this could be a problem if each university applies this impractical view due to the government should take the burden. Therefore, there should be criteria for those who could get this benefit and the reasons will be elaborated on the following essay.

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Addiction to the internet is a wide spread problem. What problems does this cause ? What is a suitable solution ?

In recenrt years, teenagers adicting to the internet has become among the prevalent issue around the world. This problem is able to lead to the low efficiency in work and study, and lack of experiences in a wide variety of aspects of life, yet it can be addressed by organizing more public events.

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Addiction to the Internet is a widespread problem. What problems does this causes? What is a suitable solution

In the modern era, the issue about people who are addicted to the Internet is spearded around the world. This problem is effect to the human habits and the affect to physical and mental health. But, there is a way to handle this problem is to force themselves to act more discipline by making a time schedule.

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You recently bought an item of clothing from a shop. You discovered that it had a fault and returned it to the shop for replacement or refund. However, the assistant told you that this was against the store's policy.

On Friday 3 nd February, I bought a yellow long-sleeved jacket from your store.The jacked was medium-sized and made from cotton. It cost $59.95 and it was not special.

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Although many people value public parks, this space could be better used for the other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and build economics. To what extend do you agree or dis agree with this statement.

There is no denying the fact that public parks it is a crucial thing for the community. While it is a commonly held belief that there is another use for the space that will be more important like a residential area, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that public parks have many benefits for individuals and communities.

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People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

There can be little doubt that life quality of those who live in urban areas is significantly worsening. This problem is attributable to air pollution and limited living spaces but cannot be alleviated effectively by persuading citizens to migrate to the countryside in the writer's view.

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Some people do not like changes and prefer to do things they are good at, while other people like taking risks and trying new things. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's world half of the human civilization do not want changes in their life and prefer to work at the same things, while other people are risk taker and choose to try new things. In my point of view, I believe it is better to take the risk as many as possible to enhance our career-life in the future. Hence, both sides will be discussed before drawing a reasonable conclusion in the upcoming paragraphs.

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SOME PEOPLE DO NOT LIKE CHANGES AND PREFET TO DO THINGS THEY ARE GOOD AT, WHILE OTHER PEOPLE LIKE TAKING RISKS AND TRYING NEW THINGS. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

Day by day the world is changing, people have to adopt the changing world. However, some people do not like to change from thier comfort zone while others accepting the risk and change their life acording to the current situation. I personally believe we want to take the risk and try to get the better opportunities.

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Many students find it difficult to concentrate at school. What are reason ? what could be done to solve this problem

In recent times, many students have been disturbed at school, this is an alarming problem. It is caused by several factors and there are some solutions to resolve this issue. There are some reasons why students are unable to concentrate on lectures. Firstly, the principles of school are unrestricted and the convenience of electronic devices, which make students bring mobile phones or playstations to class, it is comprehensible that pupils are easily attracted by these things during lessons. For example, almost all cell phones nowadays are portable so they can be hidden in the backpacks of students and used in class without the experience of teachers. Secondly, several pupils come to school when they lack sleep leading to distraction and bad academic performance. Overloading homework and deadlines force pupils to stay up late to complete, hence it is impossible for them to be alert enough to acquire knowledge. In order to solve these mentioned causes, there are some effective solutio...

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Many manufactured food and products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

The majority of manufactured foods and drinks contain high levels of sugar, which contribute to numerous health problems. To encourage people to consume less sugar, it is suggested that sugary products should be made more expensive. I completely agree with this statement, and I will explain my reasons in this essay.

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Behaviour in schools is getting worse. Explain the causes of this problem and suggest some possible solutions.

The way how students act at school has been changing in a negative direction. This essay will discuss the problem of not spending enough time on raising and controlling kids and solutions for this.

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In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, the issue has been brought into focus as people possess their first child when they are older than their parents in the past. There are a lot of factors affecting this problem, but I think this has more benefits than adverse for modern style of living now.

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In today fast-paced world, many individuals struggle with delaying or postponing tasks.

Leading a hectic lifestyle, these days, many people find it difficult to overcome procrastination. The root cause for this is the responsibility for heavy workload constantly, yet it can be solved by breaking down big tasks into smaller chunks.

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50/ Nowadays in many countries young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. What are the reasons for this? Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt the number of young people who migrate from rural areas to urban areas has increased tremendously in the recent years. While some think the disadvantages of this phenomenon outweigh the merits, I agree with those who argue that the merits outweigh the demerits in many ways.

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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Childcare appears to be a pivotal task to communities and parents therefore should attend courses to be prepared for it. Personally, I completely disagree with forcing them to take lessons on how to be a good parent.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional and their personal lives. do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Risks play a crucial role in every individual's life who wants to see growth in their respective fields and their life. Though, few individuals believe risk taking might navigate them in a more ambitious path in both professional and personal life , I do not agree that the advantages outweighs the disadvantage. Moreover, it can also have a few detrimental effects in life and this essay will support this argument.

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