IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 634

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking risks can lead to fundamental variations in both professional and personal aspects of life. As we know, there are vivid advantages to taking risks, like achieving new opportunities and improving life levels, otherwise, there are irrefutable negative aspects, including isolation from society and financial bankruptcy.in total I think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages.

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The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this modern world,smoking is prohibited in some places.Many folks argue that the usage of smartphones is as antisocial as smoking.So,they urge the government to treat the usage of mobile phones in the same way as smoking.I completely agree with this notion and this essay will try to explore the merits of banning mobile phones in certain places.

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

In today digital's age. the influence of social networking to private relationships and public is a recurring argument. This writer argues that the benefits of making new friends around the world and updating many news outweigh the drawbacks of potential social media distraction.

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Companies now prefer to hire people with good social skills as well as good academic qualifications. Do you think that social skills are now getting more important than educational qualifications?

Finding the best qualifications for companies to hire their employees has grown to be a pressing matter lately, and some companies contend that hiring people with excellent social skills and good academic aspects is a priority. Responding to the issue, I tend to believe that social skills play a more essential role than academic ones because social skills such as adaptability and resilience skills may have profound impact on employees’ productivity.

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the process of Pu-erh Raw tea and Ripe tea. make a summary regarding the given diagram

The given flow chart illustrates the steps of making Pu-erh Raw Tea and Ripe Tea. Overall, it is readily apparent that the processes of making Ripe Tea and Raw Tea are the same in the first three steps, but from that point onwards, there are few differences that are apparent in both processes.

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Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course in university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

Nowadays the employment market is full of vacancies, where an educational degree can be either required or not even mentioned. It leads me to believe that employers are more oriented on personality traits and work experience.

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Some people believe that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Being able to speak multiple languages is very common these days. In some countries, it is even a necessity to be able to speak more than one language. Learning a foreign language is highly encouraged, even more so from a young age. Whether to start learning a foreign language at primary school or secondary school, has both advantages and disadvantages. Although learning a foreign language at primary school has its disadvantages, it is my belief that those disadvantages do not outweigh the advantages.

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Nowadays, as a part of education process, students work at a company for a short period of time

A common trend occurring frequently around student’s short-time work which has the benefit of earning valuable experiences was outweighed by the lack of money and reduced bargaining power.

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*Tourism is always a force for good which enables people of different countries to understand each other. To what extent do you agree with this idea? You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

It is argued that the vacation industry is good for bonding relationships of different cultures. In my viewpoint, there are both benefits and detriments to this idea which I will illustrate in this essay.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the evolving landscape of education families increasingly find themselves at a crossroad: opting for cozy conditions of home education or embracing the longstanding tradition of sending children to school. Some argue that teaching children at home provides an ideal environment for their development, while others believe that attending school is essential for a well-rounded education. I am going to discuss the advantages of each approach in this essay and support them with examples from personal knowledge.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There is no denying the fact that due to the rapid technological revolution, which impacted the cities around the world in the first place, this huge improvement has encouraged rural people to move to cities.

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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. “Parents should not pressure their children to choose a particular profession. Young people should have the freedom to choose a career path they like. To what extent do you agree or disagree?” You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence

Nowadays, parents should not force their children to pick a certain job because young people should have the freedom to pick their desired career path. I agree with this statement because there are two reasons why young people should pick the desired career path by their own choice without forcing from parents's choice.

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Development in tourism offer very little direct benefit for residents who live in these areas. To what extent do you agree?

There are some people who think that the locals who live in places of tourist destinations have tiny advantages. However, cultivating tourism helps them grow their economy, from my perspective, I agree that constantly improving tourism industries is important because they can make more income.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The juvenile years years indeed a delightful time for the majority of the crowd. However, some people belive that a mature life brings more happiness despite greater burdnes. In my opinion, I completely agree with the first statement and I am going to elaborate on both persepectives in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?

The state of the art technology, it is a common activity that the internet and computer games are accessing to a big figure of kinds. It may bring violence to children as this topic is concerned. This can be overwhelming to a new generation which can be tackled using appropriate measures.

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Many people today prefer to eat locally produced food. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages for the environment and economy?

A growing number of people nowadays opt to consume food produced in their local area, which may negatively impact the environment and economy. However, I believe that this will not cause damage to the environment and affect economy.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and work place tidy with everything organized and in the correct places. What is your opinion about it?

Nowadays, most people usually spend their time with work. Hence, important to keep your home and work places keep clean and tidy with everything organized and in the correct places. I completely agree with this statement. Beacuse when we arrived at home or somewhere with cluttered situation, it's can make add to the bad mood.

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Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer neccessary. Do you agree or disagree?

We live in a world that is majorly consist of technological advancements that help us through our daily life. One such accessibility that it offers is the efficiency of information gathering. Because of how interconnected we are in today's world, news and informations from one side of the globe could be heard from the other side. Technology had also push a hole through time and is apparent by the ability for us to easily discover articles that is so far back in the history. However, despite the many advantages that our gadgets have provided us, I still stood upon the importance of books and libraries and believe that they are not irrelevant to this day.

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Deforestation is indeed a critical global issue with various causes and consequences. Here are some key factors contributing to deforestation and potential solutions:

A major phenomenon that affects and destroys the forests all over the world is called deforestation. This is mainly because of a lack of controls from the governments and the increased rate of population density. However, there are some possible solutions which should be implemented to deal with this.

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Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A faction of people hold the notion that proverty and crimes are positively correlated. I strongly agree this veiw and this essay will delve in to some possible reasons of this argument.

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