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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.

When choosing a suitable work-for-life career,people have different mindsets.It is thought by some people that the amount of salary should not be concerned as the key factor to getting a successful job.On the other hand,people believe that only the huge burden of money can lead the direction to a higher position in life rather than any other responsibilities.This essay will depict each corner of both sides and explain my own opinion.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case？ Do you think this is a positive or negative situation？

countries tend to choose not renting a home but buying one as an essential choice. In my opinion, this trend could be positive because people can meet human natural desire to feel safe and to live without stress.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case？ Do you think this is a positive or negative situation？

Selecting aplace to live in is a huge decision making. People in some countries tend to choose not renting a home but buying one as an essential choice. In my opinion, this trend could be positive because people can meet human natural desire to feel safe and to live wiyhought stress.

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Although countries with long average working hours are economically successful, this often has some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that long average working hours can bring economical success. Some people state that there are several negative points that can influence individuals socially. I agree with this point of view and believe that doing a lot of tasks and being much time away from family can affect a person negatively.

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5.A. More people are traveling today than ever before. Why do you think this is? What are the benefits of traveling for traveler

As part of a refreshment public nowadays travel a lot just to get a break from their hectic or busy soul schedule. In today's life, nation are well aware that going for a break will get them back more energetic and refresh their mood.I will

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others, however, believe that government should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In the contemporary epoch, there is irrefutable debate among folks regarding maintaining and taking care of their personal health and food habits. In this discourse, I am going to canvass the stated theme and elucidate copious motives and then interpret why I reckon that it is an affirmative or cynical initiative in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Title: More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks

More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks

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Title: More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks

There are a growing number of students studying abroad in both college and university education. I believe experiences gained and language improvement are the major advantages but the money spent and family connection might be the negative impacts of this scenario. However, I personally view that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks which will be discussed in this essay.

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Nowadays parents give more freedom to their children than in the past. is it a positive or negative development. Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

At present, parents are more friendly with their children as compared to ancient. Although, if they get more freedom the possibility to come under bad companies will increase, however, it also helps them to enhance their hidden talent. In the forthcoming, paragraphs we will discuss all the views of the essay.

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With the widespread use of interent , more and more peolpe choose to work from home. Do the advantage of this trend outwight the disadvantage?

To begin with, everybody knows and is aware that technology such as the internet poses many benefits. Its widespread of it leads to various angles of change, such as working from home. Time-saving and employee safety is a crucial in productivity moreover, these two factors are definitely the main pulling points for the public to opt for this trend.

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The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary era, smartphones have become more prevalent and altered people’s lifestyle as well as the business. Although there are some adverse ramifications owing to the popularity of short-sighted in youngsters, it is opined that there are more benefits due to the convenience. The essay will discuss both the pros and cons and also the consequences of this phenomenon in detail in the subsequent paragraph.

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School teachers used to be sources of information; however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before due to the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion?

Educators used to be the main sources of data,conversely, a section of society opine that they are not as significant as in the past as a result of a lot of data on the internet.I oppose this view because they are needed to help us achieve our goals and they give authentic information.This essay will explain in detail the reasons for my stance as well as examples in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Others believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both and give your opinion

One common topic among friends is whether it is better to have pals of like minds or to have the ones with different opinion most of the time. In this essay I will give my stance about each of these points after taking a few paragraphs to talk about them.

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Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Between all the ways of communication it is argued that spoken communication is more powerful that the written communication. In my opinion, as much as written communication can be useful, I think spoken communication has lots of advantages that makes it more powerful.

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People should never eat meat because raising animals for human consumption is cruel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons r your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary epoch, there is irrefutable debate among folks regarding meat consumption by humankind. In this discourse, I am going to canvass the stated theme and elucidate copious motives and then interpret why I reckon that it is an affirmative or cynical initiative in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Many processed foods and ready-made meals contain preservatives and additives . what are advantages to this? Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the contemporary epoch, there is irrefutable debate among folks regarding the ready-made food trend culture across the globe. In this discourse, I am going to canvass the stated theme and elucidate copious motives and then interpret why I reckon that it is an affirmative or cynical initiative in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes, what are the causes? How should these young criminals to be punished?

Despite the fact that social advances have brought about many benefits to people’s daily lives, the rate of crime has not efficiently been curbed, but rather been aggravated. This essay will first analyze all the possible causes of the problem and then come up with several feasible solutions that could be adopted in order to avoid the aggravation of the situation.

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Nowadays, some people believe advertising is useful and informative. Others believe advertising gives false information about the products and increase the price of goods.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In spite of the fact that world is undergoing various changes in recent year, business remains the most heatedly discussed issues, especially the one related to advertising. Some people argue that advertising is conducive to capture the useful and informative information, while others believe that not only advertising gives false information but also raises the price of commodities. From my perspective, advertising have pros and cons.

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Although more and more people use public transport. some city streets are still overcrowded with traffic. how can this problem be solved? what is your opinion and relevent example.

Public transport is often promoted to mitigate traffic congestion ,still the problem persists. To resolve this issue other alternatives must be implemented which I will highlight in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

In the contemporary epoch, there is irrefutable debate among folks that students to pursue the course art and music in high school. In this discourse, I am going to canvass the stated theme and elucidate copious motives and then interpret why I reckon that it is an affirmative and cynical initiative in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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