IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 651

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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“The Growth of online shopping will one-day load to all shops in towns and cities closing “Do you agree or disagree.

There is a huge demand of e-tailing around the globe due to the electronic service progresses in favour of people's energy and time. But it also has another negative side effect. One of them, end of the existence of all marketplaces, shops in urban areas. I totally disagree with this evidence, as far as many shop centers have to function as a storage and for other needs.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People exposed to a foreign culture using unfamiliar language are thought to have a rough time blending with the environment. Some severe public issues or practical problems might be bothersome if people cannot convey the information precisely. The statement makes sense to me that I will discuss in the following paragraph.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. So, sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

Nowadays, sugary food has been popular because it has some demand in the market. Food and beverages, which include large amount of sugar are produced by many manufactures but they promote many diseases, so there is an argument that sugary products should be high expensive to reduce people's buying. I agree with this statement and this essay will discuss reasons for that view.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

It is often argued that loss of biodiversity is the key factor for environmental issues. I completely agree with this opinion and think that biodiversity is much more important to reduce environmental problems.

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The desire for higher status or great wealth than others is what motivate most people to succeed in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I am completely agree that, the motivation to success for individuals is produced by their willingness to achive a greater position or better income. This caused by multi function parameters like family, society, psychology to name a few. In this essay I will disscus around the education, psychology and family aspects.

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In some countries, people these days spend very little time with their children. What are the causes of this? Whom does this affect more, parents or children?

There is no denying the fact that parents recently are spending less time with their children compared to the past years, in this essay we are going to discuss the causes that might be happening as an impact of this act, also we will also explain the effect on parents and children.

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Television dominates the free time for too many people It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others Do you agree or disagree Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In this era, television plays an essential role in the globe. TV helps to provide news channels, entertainment videos or cartoons for children. To the larger extent, I agree with this statement that it makes people lazy and do not allow citizens to socialize with others but the other side cannot be neglected and I will give my reasons in-depth in subsequent paragraphs and Lastly I will come to a logical conclusion

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In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In this contemporary era, wearing western-style dresses is an ongoing trend in numerous nations. There are several reasons behind this phenomenon, however the main culprit is the cultural shift due to the internet. Accordingly, this issue might have a detrimental impact on the traditional identity of many people.

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Some people think that going to a fitness center regularly is unnecessary. Instead they believe the combining occasional exercise ( such as going for walk) with a balanced diet is enough to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a common belief that a combination of a healthy diet and a conventional workout is enough to keep fit and stay lean, so going to a gymnasium is unnecessary. The writer contends that for the sake of good health, people should visit fitness centers due to the advantageous impact of changing their lifestyle rather than doing occasional exercise.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the future all vehicles will be driverless, and there only passengers inside these cars. I believe the advantages of this scheme outweigh those downside ones due to their active working.

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Many people believe children should begin learning a foreign language in primary school instead of secondary school. Do you think the advantages of learning a foreign language in primary school outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people insist that learning the second language at the early stage of the children development, which is primary school, is beneficial to them. Personally, I look at the bright side to the positive impact it makes on the students. Therefore, two perspectives of mine will be illustrated in the following paragraph.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have negative impacts on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this state-of-the-art era, the development of technology, such as social media, has brought two side effects on young generation, positive and negative. Some individuals argue that this development leads to various bad impacts, while others show the reverse. I will show my greater tendency on how social media is beneficial for them.

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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Thebefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Instead of focusing on their own status via flashy fashion, students should invest their attention to material in the classroom. Hence the choice of making students all have to wear the same uniforms is rightful thing to do. Personally, this implementation has my full support as not only it can help eliminate negative discrimination against each other but also build up the high educated environment for learners as well.

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Some people rely to much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. What problems could this approach to Healthcare cause? How might they be solved?

People trust doctors while they do not think about their own health.And this dependability can cause some serious problems. This following essay will discuss the main issues and suggest some viable solutions.

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most people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. why? do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples,e.g from your knowledge or experience

Most people marry at later age, so they decided to have children at later. In this case, there are few reasons are working behind this changing societal norms and priorities.

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Organized tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment?

Making trip to isolated places and society is becoming a new famous trend of travelling currently. Although it gives a good economic impact for the area and people, I belive that it brings many bad impacts on the village and the community such as social and environtmental issues.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have negative impacts on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The social media usage such as Twitter and Facebook have its positive and negative impacts for the youngster and their ability to build personal relationships. In my opinion, social media usage for youth can have more positive impacts than the negative impacts

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Some people feel that courses can make anyone a teacher, while others feel an excellent teacher can't be made by pursuing a course. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The number of couses are increase for being a teacher. However, while a group of people consider that courses can not make a good teacher when you completed that, l agree with those who feel that only courses can make you a tutor.

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One of the major issues facing the world today is overpopulation. What problems arise from this situation? What measures can be taken to deal with this?

Nowadays, overpopulation is one of the biggest problem in many countries. This essay will discuss the negative issues associated to this, and also what can be done to solve it.

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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagress with this statement?

Learning the language of English by staying in an English-native country is the best choice to enhance speaking skill, however there are other alternative ways to learn foreign language. I could not agree more with the statement and will explain the reason in the following paragraphs.

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