IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 651

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Animal are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree with this.

As the development of our society, the relationship between humans and animals are becoming intense. Protecting animals has become a topic that people have been talking to. Some people hold the idea that humans should only protect the animals which are useful to humans, which is not persuadable to me. The reasons are as follows.

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Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage?

Nowadays, some high school seniors have a year-long break to work or travel instead of pursuing college. In my opinion, this will be more advantageous for them compared to minor disadvantages.

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Some believe that a student’s success is mainly based on the quality of their teaching while others think it has more to do with the student’s attitude. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Education is an essential part of one's life. However, the purpose served in educational institutions is often much debated. Many believe that the better the teaching style and resources, the better the learning is. Whereas, some people argue that success has a lot more to do with student's attitude. I personally think that a child is more responsible for his success.

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In some countries more and more people are becoming intrested in finding out about the history of the builiding they live in. What are the reasons for this. How can people research this?

Exploring the history of dwelling is becoming an area of interest among people in some countries.

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Imagine that you have become successful in any field you want. Make a short presentation of how you have achieved that

As a chef in my own Michelin 3-star restaurant, I would like to share with you my stories and how can I succeed as you can see.

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Courses and general online study have recently become very popular. However, some people still prefer to attend classes in person. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Some people believe that online classes have numerous benefits so they prioritise these kind of study, while the others are of the opinion that face-to-face classes have far more advantages. While on-screen classes have undeniable advantages, I argue that being in the classroom is a better way for learning efficiency.

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Some people think the government should spend more money on sport facilities for top athletes. Other people think the government should spend more money on sport facilities for everybody. Discuss both views

There is an underlying assumption that as much as possible should be spent on sport centres and arenas for the only best athletes. On the contrary, it is logical to conclude that sport facilities should be developed for everyone. In this essay I am going to explain further these both types of view.

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Money should be spent on creating new public buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that the government should invest money on the conservation and renovations of historic buildings. Others believe that this money will be spent on new public constructions.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

There is no doubt, English is a very important language for learning at school and some people consider that it is more important than their local language. In my opinion, society should try to ensure the survival of local languages.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the most crucial aspects of scientific research is increasing human life .Although there is some truth that the reason for studying science is to improve our life, that is not true that it is the only aim for investigating science.

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In some countries defence expenditure is an important component of national security. Every country should allocate a significant portion of its resources for this purpose. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are many crucial components to national security, but in some countries defence expenditure is the most important area to be supplied by their resources whereas some countries distribute it to other areas supporting national security. I must agree to the statement, the largest proportion of payments needs to be for defence expenditure.

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Many people try to balance work and other parts of their life. However, this is very difficult to do. What are the problems associated with this? What is the best way to achieve a better balance?

The world around us is changing continuously and to keep up with it we have to work hard as well as work overtime to maintain the phase. People try to balance between work and personal life, which is significantly challenging. However, it is not impossible to maintain a balanced life in a better way if individuals are willing to change their way of living.

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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.

Nowadays, many individuals claim that creative artists should have freedom of speech of their ideas (words, pictures, music or films). I totally disagree with this opinion, such as regulations may lead to misinformation, conflicts and even deaths. To begin with, influencers that will be allowed to speak everything might say unchecked information and spread hoaxes all over the world. For instance, popular internet influencer Logan Paul a hero of millions of young majorities said, that aliens are controlling the world without any relevant evidence. Moreover, thousands of people would believe him, creating a big community of disinformed people.As a result, politics will have to spend tons of money to fix that trouble and prove these statements untrue. Secondly, allowing idols to speak everything that they want might create a conflict between citizens or even nations. For example, many musician artists can include words about wars, families destroying etcetera, also affecting the listen...

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Some think schools should rewards students who have the best academic results, while others think it’s more important to reward students who achieve other types of success (such as sports, music, and good behavior). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The reward system has been practised since early childhood which encourages a child to do more and better ,especiall in school. This acts as a driving force for them to be the best they can be. Some pupils who excel academically have been rewarded by some universities while others believe that students who do well in extracurricular activities should receive more recognition.

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Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same jobs. What problems this causes? What are solutions?

In the last few years, increasing numbers of people have been seeking their jobs. As a result, the older individuals are in competion with the younger to get the recruiters convinced and allowing them to have an appropriate position in the company.This essay will discuss some major problems and it will analyse how this issue can be solved.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Humans have benefited greatly from science. Some would say that its most crucial aim is to improve people's lives but others would think otherwise. In this essay. I will be discussing why I believe betterment of human lives by the art is very important but should not be its only purpose.

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The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?

The age-old adage, "charity begins at home," underscores the fundamental role that the family plays in shaping an individual. While schools are formal institutions designed to impart knowledge, families instill values, beliefs, and personal understandings that often stay with an individual for life. The debate regarding the primacy of family education over school-based learning is an intricate one. While I believe that family education provides the cornerstone for character building, I also contend that school education is paramount for a holistic development.

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people feel that environmental issues should be resolved on a global level, while others think that national solutions are preferable.

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People are behind fashion.What are the factors influencing fashion?Is it good to be fashionable?Discuss both the Pros and Cons.What your take?

Fashion has always been something that has been liked by people. Many believe in good fashon sense while other people take fashion non-seriously. I think it is good to be behind fashion but mainting hygiene is more important.

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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

My journey began with a Bachelor's degree in Computer Engineering, a field that honed my analytical and problem-solving skills, leading to academic and professional success, but I couldn't ignore a growing sense of misalignment between my skills and my true passions. It was during the introspective phase that I realise that I am deeply passionate about holistic living, sustainable practices, and the interplay between business and the well-being of individuals and the environment. Recognizing the immense potential for positive impact at the intersection of business and sustainability, I decided to pursue a graduate degree in business to leverage my skills and education for a greater purpose – the promotion of holistic living, sustainability, and conscious business practices.

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