IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 658

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

One of the widely discussed tendency nowadays is the decision of the students who decided to take a gap year. This essay will highlight the merits and demerits of this trend.

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There is no need to attend a live performance (a play or concert) because seeing it at home on television is better. To what extend to you agree or disagree?

With the advancement of technology, it is much easier nowadays to watch live shows While sitting at home. However, there are a lot of people who believe that listening to a live concert has much more energy than listening at home.but, as far as I am concerned, I believe that watching life shows is much better than watching it on a television.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common for parents to teach their children at home instead of sending them to school. In this essay, I will explain why the cons of teaching youngsters at home overshadow the benefits.

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Some people say now that we can see films on our phones or tablet there is no need to go to the cinemas, others say to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, due to advancements in technology life is become much easier. Some people argue that, they can watch movies on their electronic gadgets rather than go to the movie house.While others find it difficult to do it. This essay will discuss both views and give my personal opinion at the end.

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international travel should be restricted, since this practice have impacted negatively to the environment.

It is considered that the international travel should be restricted, since this practice have impacted negatively to the environment. Even though I completely agree with this statement, nowadays the tourism and the growing of business, which is linked to the globalization has increased the vision of international travels.

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It is believed by many that those read for pleasure develop better imagination and language skills than people who prefer to watch TV. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a common belief that those who read for pleasure develop better imagination and language skills than people who prefer to watch TV. Considering the flexibility and effectiveness, I agree with this idea.

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some children spend long time on their phones. why?

Nowadays, children have the right to decide to do some activities they want to do in their spare time. Some children choose to spend long hours on their smartphones. In this ,essay I will explain why they are doing this and I think this is a negative development.

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The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut art and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree?

Some people believe that school curriculums should focus more on beneficial subjects ,such as information technology, than art and music, in order to prepare kids for the modern world. I disagree with it, and here are my reasons.

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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign language is a waste of time? To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some masses believe that it is not wise to study another language as it can easily be translated by technology. In my opinion, I disagree with this fact as it would lead not only to dependence on the internet but also digital literacy.

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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that these days you can find music everywhere play in our society and other cultures in the world. While it is a commonly held belief that psitive thing for the people and the communities as well, there is also an argument that music can bring only drawback impact on both. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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In past people feel difference in foreign culture. Nowadays, this situation is changed. What are the causes of these chnages? Do the advantages outweigh the disadavtages?

in the past people felt differences in foreign culture but things have changed since then. with the internet and global ,communication it's obvious that society are more connected than ever before. social media and instant messaging apps have made it so simple to connect and message your friends.

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In the future nobody will not buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In next year’s people can read books online freely and nobody will not pay money for newspapers and books. Some people claim that reading books and newspaper for effect on some businesses are not acceptable, other groups believe that online information not only is easy access but also it its free. In my opinion, I agree with this idea online book have significant advantage than paper book and newspaper.

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Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?

The number of people who live in rural areas are declining nowadays as individuals are prefer to go in the metropolitan areas rather than living in the countryside. Urbanization is a part of a good change for some developing countries yet it comes with some of the consequences. I belive, it leads to negeative impact as more and more housing will required to accomondate people in urban areas which can increase the cost of living for the residents.

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Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea, while others disagree strongly. Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion.

Some believe that nowadays, individuals rely on each other while others oppose that opinion. The contradictory views will be discussed along with my opinion in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress, but they should be concerned about the quality at work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are mixed opinions that people should pay more attention to the quality at work instead of focusing on the way that workers choose their outerwear. In my perspective, I partly agree with this phenomenon.

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All children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earliest grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

All youngsters around the globe should learn a foreign language such as French or Spanish in school especially, in earlier classes. In my viewpoint, I totally agree with this opinion due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue , but other consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Culture is a beautiful tradition of a people or a country. A gruop of people think that tradition will be affected if they are used to make money from tourist activities, wjeareas pthers believe that it is the best way to save traditional values. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide opinion

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some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discuss both sides nad give your own opinion.

some people believe that culture can be damaged as a result of using tourism income. Meanwhile, others consider that it would rather protect culture than leave it occupied. This writer agrees with the second statement and will explain it in the following essay.

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some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is very unwise to underestimate the important role culture plays in each country all over the world and for that reason, many questions are raised about how to properly protect cultural values. While many people think culture should not be used to take advantage of tourism revenue. It is considered by some people that tourism is the best option for many individuals to approach and preserve cultural values. From my perspective, I think that tourism plays an essential role in the culture and I will demonstrate my point of view during this essay.

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some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There are some arguments about the idea that touristry causes permanent damage to the ability of a nation or preserves the experience's value. Both of these views are true to some extent but I believe that the latter's cons outweigh the former's pros.

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