IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 62

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that criminals should be given longer term imprisonment, so as to reduce the crime rate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern society, people prosecute the idea that criminals should be taken longer time of imprisonment to decrease the crime rate, however, this essay disagrees with the given statement because long imprisonment does not guarantee success in future for ex-prisoners ,furthermore,isolation is affected people in jail doesn't help to integrate into the community after many years.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are ways to bring people closer. Hence, many argue that music is one of the ways to bring them with diverse cultures and ages together.

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In the opinion of some people, internet has narrowed the gap among people in the world by increasing social interaction. To what extent do you agree/disagree with this view?

Some people believe that the gap between individuals has become larger due to social interaction in this modern world. I completely agree with this notion due to the internet makes people can interact to each other without being presence, and it can be solved by keeping physical interaction among them.

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Many people around the world use social media to keep in touch with other people and get the news. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Recently, a lot of people are using social media to find information or to talk with friends. There are advantages and disadvantages of using social media, for instance, it is very easy to find out about the world however, some people get into trouble because of cyberbullying.

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Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their works from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employees. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, most companies give their employees option to choose their workplace, they can work from home using technology or go to offices where everybody work together. Some people believe that home office system should be more common among employers. This essay completely disagrees with the statement.

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It was common in the past for people to retire at 60. Now more and more people are choosing to continue working past the official retirement age, with some countries even increasing the official age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree with this change? Why?

In every country on the earth, there is disagreement around the topic of retirement age. Few years ago, the retirement age was 60. However, In this era, some folk prefers to work after their retirement limit. Notwithstanding this situation, In some some nations government are climbing the retirement number. In my contention, I totally agree that government should increase the retirement age.

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In the past, when student did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantage and disadvantage of this development?

Scholars used to continue their studying in their country in some years ago. However, these days more and more students tend to apply for foreign universities around the world. That is to say, there are various opportunities to study in abroad. It is clear that there are some plus points and downsides of studying in other countries. In this essay, I will present some significant benefits and drawbacks of this decision.

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The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The narrative to minimize traffic in urban areas by implementing mobility restrictions recently is a hot discussion among citizens. Activity that supports traffic such as going to school or work is need to add some restrictions, for sake of reducing traffic. Objectively, there are some benefits, however i partly disagree with some extent for this solution.

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Many people believe that the government should provide free healthcare for all citizens. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? ar least 250 words

A proportion of societies believe that healthcare should be chargeless for all citizens. In this essay I will discuss about two aspects of this important subject after that, I will enhance my personal opinion for this subject.

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A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, many countries are investing a gargantuan amount of money into looking for oil. Given that the world's oil resources will fall into shortage at the end of the day, people think that we should rather spend the money on finding new energy resources such as wind and solar. In my opinion, I completely agree with this perspective, as clean energy are more eco-friendly and not influenced by another countries' social conditions.

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Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I disagree with the statement that individuals should not pay texes to the state. The government only take taxes who earn enough money. So that they can give a certain amount for the state.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are n ow "one big traffic jam''

It is apparent that traffic congestion is now crucial issue around the world, caused by increase the number of car ownership. In my point of view, I agree with this statement and some of solution should be held by government, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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As a country develops, more people are able to purchase a car. Do you think that the positive for the individual outweigh the negatives for the environment?

It is a topical subject if the need of buying a car is enough to make it because of the harmful effect on the environment. When countries improve the citizens have to adjust. It is very often connected with traveling because of industrialization. I concur that nowadays being able to arrive quickly is more important than the cost that the nature pays.

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in the future nobody will buy printed newpapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been contended that online reading will certainly be the futuristic dominant, and all physical books and newspapers will be obsolete. While i acknowledge the significant role of internet in modern society, i am of the opinion that technologies will never be able to replicate the experience of reading physical contents thoroughly.

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The picture shows coffee bean production. Write an Essay Describing the picture in 150 words.

The diagram illustrates the process of coffee production, which consists of growing coffee beans, transporting, and grinding.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

At present, numerous individuals consider that hard working has priority over enough resting.

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Organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problams. What can be problams associated with organizing a large family event and what solutions can you suggest? Write at least 250 words.

organizing for an enormous ceremony like birthday or wedding, can cause many vital issues. In the following essay I’ll discuss the reasons for this and how to problem could be solved.

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describe the table, how the unemployed spent their time in UK last year

The given table compares jobless women and men in terms of which activities they did on a daily basis during the previous year. Overall, it can be seen that house chores took most of the time from women, compared to men.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of differenr cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The role of music in the world today is widely debated, with some people claiming that it is indeed a way for gathering the heritages and generations. However, I personally do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views on whether should our daily activities environments, such as work or school be competitive, or we should try to help each other and be more cooperative towards our colleagues or classmates. I would argue that, although competition has its own advantages but being able to cooperate well with each other is indeed, an essential in human's life.

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