IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 802

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives

In modern societies, it becomes very common to be seen about the advertisements. Some people say that advertising encourges us to buy things that we really do not need, others claim that advertisements spreads the info that new products may improve our lives. To my perspective, I agree that the advertising encourage us to buy stuffs but not really need.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the population in particular countries contain a great number of youth contrast with the number of older people. Personally, the advantages such as decreasing the rate of extinction and being productive outweigh insignificant disadvantages.

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Being celebrities such as famous sports person or celebrities bring problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

In this modern scenario,many individuals are influenced by their favourite celebrities in both positive and negative manner,but many famous people enable complications to multitudes in terms of their wealthy and lifestyle.moreover,they also furnishes benefits such as insipiration,having a goal and maintaining time management.this essay will go into better detail with my subject view.

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In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?

Nowadays, people leaving homes at an early age - is quite in a vogue. Some people consider that staying away from home in young age either to study or for work has more advantages than disadvantages. In my opinion, leaving parents behind and moving apart has many drawbacks than benefits.

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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the environment as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

There are a number of people who believe the only way to maintain good health while benefitting the environment at large is by refraining from eating meat and fish. In this essay, I will discuss this thinking and share my opinion on my matter. Firstly, I will consider the environmental benefits of being vegetarian. Then, I will consider the health implications of eating a meat-free diet. Environmental benefit is major factor that leads people to choose a vegetarian diet. The source of all non-vegetarian food is animals and to eat a non-vegetarian meal means to kill an animal. Many people think of it as an ethical issue which is why they find it difficult to eat fish and meats. For example, it is now widely known that feeding a cow costs a lot of money due to the amount of food needed to be grown to feed the cow. It is much more environmentally friendly to eat vegetables than a cow.Some people shift towards vegetarianism due to health concerns believing that eating too much...

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In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

In recent times, it has been noticed that people tend to be distant to their neighbours as compared to the close proximity shared in the past. In this essay, I will explore the reason for this trend and suggest possible solutions.

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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this contemporary era, travelling becomes so easy and cheap that anyone can travel and visit another country. Some people think that international tourism cause problems among different natinalities, however I tend to disagree with this thought. In this essay, I will discuss my opinion with a few examples.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

A group of individuals present the view that the best solution for the people who are unsatisfied with their job or salary is they accept the circumstances. Whereas others believe it is better to people try more to make a progress .I strongly agree with the latter opinion.

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Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine. Why do you think this happens? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?

Elderly people are often advised to exercise routinely by health care providers, however, many aging patients couldn’t keep up with their exercise tasks. Boredom might be the number one reason for this laziness. By introducing social elements into rountine tasks, we could help more individuals to stick with their exercise schedule.

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It is sometimes suggested that primary school children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Primary school pupils should be taught how to grow vegetables and keep pets. In my opinion, it has more pros than cons. In this essay, I will outline my view of this point.

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the alteration of the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The given maps illustrate the alteration of the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. The general overview here is that there was a noticeable transformation after the construction take place and the different changes can be seen in the addition of extra facilities.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Nowadays, there are more and more crimes appearing in big cities and even in the countryside, there are a lot of reasons for them to appear. Also, there are still some solutions for the crime to reduce the percentage. The reason and the solution will be shown in the essay.

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People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In the recent years people have been handling credit cards in order to make online transactions. It goes without saying that it is unsafe to pay by credit card, despite of this purchasing via card has more beneficial features in comparison with traditional method of payment. This essay will discuss positive and negative sides of expending to acquisitions using bank card.

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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

Supporters of this viewpoint say that some people like to try new experience , like visiting various locations and tasting new food. However,other people do not like to make changes in their routine. Both sides have their own pros and cons, therefore, before communicating on my view, I will discuss both views in the following paragraphs.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Environmental problem has been a controversial issue, some people think the major problem nowadays is the loss of endangered species of plants and animals while some hold the view that there are else things that are more crucial in regard to this issue. I agree with the latter thought and am going to express my opinions in the following.

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not need to contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely disagree with this view. For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families who pay for private education. Firstly, it would be difficult to calculate the correct amount of tax reduction for these families, and staff would be required to manage this complex process. Secondly, we all pay a certain amount of tax for public services that we may not use. For example, most people are fortunate enough not to have to call the police or fire brigade at any time in their lives, but they would not expect a tax reduction for this. Finally, if wealthy families were given a tax discount for sending their children to private schools, we might have a situation where poorer people pay higher taxes than the rich. In my opinion, we should all be happy to pay our share of the money that supports publi...

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Task 2: Employers should give their employees 4 weeks holiday each year so that they can do the job better.To what extent do you agree with this suggestion.

In this day and age, having short term vacation might cause a controversial problem while other assume that employers might last their day off to 4 weeks. From my point of view, I do believe an increase of vacation might be a legal right of each citizen.

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Some people believe that technology has led to many positive developments in their lives, while others think technology is gradually taking over control of the way people live. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this day and age, a group of people assume that technology has visible benefits, by contrast, othes think that modern technology is dominating people's regular life. From my point of view, this essay would demonstrate both sides.

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In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary era, frequent changes happening in everything, including the family structure and the roles of family members. In this essay, I will discuss what and why changes

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone would learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There has been a growing interest in learning foreign language, which is showed by the emergence of new learning platforms. Many people believe that the demand for learning foreign languages is due to travel or work purposes. However, others argue that working and traveling are not the only reasons for a person to learn a different language. Both arguments will be examined in this essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

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