IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 801

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Teenage offenders should be treated in the same way as adult criminals. Do you agree?

Doing crime of any kind is very bad for society. I do not believe that teenage offenders should be treated in the same way as adults because sometimes teenagers do crimes without being aware that they are doing a crime.

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Today more and more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the travellers?

Due to recent advancement in our transportation industry, the advantages of being mobile are became significantly high. In this contemporary era, people, not only wants to explore their own country but also the entire world. In this essay, I will discuss the main reason of increase in travel with examples and benefits for the tralvel.

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it is the responsibility of the government to take care of the health of citizens or citizens should take care of their own health. Give your own opinion?

Healthy people are crucial for the development and prosperity of any nation, thus special attention should be given to the health care sector. Some believe that the government should be accountable for the health of its people while others argue that it is a personal problem. This essay dwells into both the topic and provides a personal opinion.

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the production of the world’s oil in three various section( OPEC Middle East, Other OPEC,Non-OPEC) in 1980 to 2020.

The given bar chart illustrates the information about the production of the world’s oil in three various sections ( OPEC Middle East, Other OPEC,Non-OPEC) from 1980 to 2020. The general overview here is that between 1980 and 2000 most of the world’s oil production came from Non-OPEC regions,while the majority of that was produced from OPEC Middle East between 2010 and 2020.

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After being punished, many criminals continue to commit crimes. Why do some people commit crimes even after having been punished? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem.

A significant number of offenders who serviced confinement sentences,leave prison to re-offend mainly due to lack of rehabilitation and influence of other criminals from jail . This issue can be mitigated by regular supervision by the authority once these ex-offenders are out in the society and provision of necessary skills training while in the lockup.

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the University where you studied he would like your advice about finding a place to live. write an email to your friend in your email describe where you live when you wear a student at the University recommend the best way for him her to look for the accommodation won him of mistake students make when choosing accommodation

I hope you must be doing well. First of all, congratulations on your admission to Harward University. Well during my university life in Haward, I lived in a PG (paying guest) which is situated on museum road. This PG offered me facilities that are vital to any university student like Wi-Fi, a cupboard and a few more.

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the seven various primary hobbies of the adult resident in a small Tunisian town in three different years with twenty years intervals,starting from 1980.

The given bar chart illustrates the information about the seven various primary hobbies of the adult resident in a small Tunisian town in three different years with twenty years intervals,starting from 1980. Overall, There was the same popular rate of all seven activities in 1980,after four decades, TV and Movies was the most favourite activity of adult.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Although, agreeculture industry has been growing, nations across the glob are still experiencing starvage. One of the possible reasons for why this topic is important to us is death or health problems and there are numerous number of solutions for it.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in devolped countries. What problems does this the cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

Today, many positions such as medics and school tutors are moving away to work in other countries because they can not earn enough money due to the economic country position. In this essay, I will explain the impact of this problem and the solutions that could be adopted.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with situation?

Due to lack of money, working conditions, also some other factors, forces well educated professionals such as teachers and doctors, to continue their job or company abroad.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

Nowadays it become common for students to attain colleges in others countries than the native one. Foe youngsters the opportunity to learn new languages and meet new cultures represent just a few of the benefits. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons why is for young people a grat opportunity to face with other realities.

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Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are controversial perspectives heating a debate over environmental protection. While some hold a strong view that politicians should liable for environment pollution, the opposite makes a statement that citizens can do nothing much. From my point of view, everyone hasto contribute to assists politicians to protect our environment.

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In many parts of the world, people search for family history. some people think that finding for the previous generations is a thing to do, but others think that it is better to be focus on present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has been witnessed that studying genealogy has become a controversial topic for the last decade. Thus, a section of community reckons that fathoming history of family has turned out to be beneficial, however another group of individuals deem that searching out about ancestors is sheerly worthless activity. In one view, it has medical advantages for a family, nevertheless, another viewpoint suggests that our upcoming events and happenings have tremendous influence on a millennial’s character, which is more superior in my perspective.

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Education is the single most important factor for a developing country. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, Some people assume that schooling has solely profound importance to improve an expanding nation. I strongly disagree with this statement and I will support my belief with instances.

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Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible. While others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that the early ages of educating children are one the most important part of their lives and it is a very sensitive issue. Some argue that it is more beneficial to begin teaching young people before they get to seven years old but others, like me, believe that it is the proper year to start learning academically.

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Some people believe that if a police officer carries guns , it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are a lot of police officers carry guns in different situations because their duty is protect to public from attacks but there are some individuals who give opinions that if any police officer carries guns. Due to this, it can encourage to violence on highly level. However, I do disagree with the statement because they want to protect people from rubbers as well as terrorists.

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In many countries around the world, life expectancyis increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

Medical care over the past century has improved dramatically. As a consequence, the world's population is increasingly living long into old age. Is this having a harmful effect on societies across the globe, or are there more benefits than drawbacks? One obvious issue with an ageing population is that it can create enormous demands on a nation's health service. As people live longer into their old age, the chances of them suffering from serious illnesses increases. As a result, the likelihood of them requiring medical treatment becomes higher, and it becomes more difficult to provide care for everyone. A further downside is that living longer does not necessarily bring happiness. By this I mean, an older person is unable to do many of the activities that they want to do, leading to the likelihood of depression and a deterioration in their physical health. Having said that, one obvious benefit to people living longer is that young people can benefit for a longer time fr...

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

It is not a secret to anybody that there are still millions of people in the world who suffer from hunger, despite the fact that there has been a great improvement and development in agriculture. There are many reasons for worldwide famine and there are some measures that people can take to solve this global problem, which I will discuss in this essay.

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In many countries, people decide to have a child at a later age. Why is this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

People in many countries now prefer to become parents at an older age which is an entirely different trend when compared to the past. A number of reasons are accountable for adopting parenthood at a later age. Such a development has both merits and demerits; however, its limitations are more than its benefits. One of the primary reasons people delaying having children is the increasing delay in marriages by youngsters. Young people seek more education and want to establish themselves in jobs and careers. Moreover, economic decline in some countries forces the people do not have children unless they have the necessary resources to nurture their children. Moreover, sometimes people themselves are not ready to become parents. For example, especially when women feel unable to combine work and family well, they choose work over family. Hence, this development is becoming more widespread. Undoubtedly, there are certain benefits of older parenthood. Older parents are financially...

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to successful career, while others believe that it is the better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.

Nowadays, many students concerned about their career paths. Whether it is school graduates or university graduates. Both of them provide particular benefits. Schools graduates can start the jobs at early ages, meanwhile university graduates can gain better education for better jobs available. In this essay, i am going to explain both views.

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