IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 801

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

upbringing plays a vital role in a society and parents and others should take it into consideration seriously. It is suggested that children must be taught that if they try hard they can succeed in everything. This statement has both benefits and drawbacks which in this essay will be discussed.

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More and more people want to buy famous brands ofclothes, carsand other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is undeniable that brands have taken a part in our community, Some people are wearing expensive clothes for showing off and others seek high quality. I think that This statement has a double-edged sword which has advantages and disadvantages.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think that it is a positive or negative development?

In recent times, different companies or industry owners often have claimed that their products have some novel and special features that make this product unique and outstanding. This essay will point out what might be the main reason for these types of assertions and promotions and also will indicate the writer’s opinion about this positive development.

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Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of pople's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

A large number of citizens think that government should get a wide part of population's wages to pay for essential public services such as streets and educational institutions while others believe that taxes are an unpleasant thing.

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Some people think that acess to internet is necessary to live a full life ? do you agree or disagree?

The debate whether Internet access is necessary to live a full life, as opposed to a life without it, has become a matter of discussion for many of the last decades. In my opinion, for the new generations, it would be more beneficial to have Internet access only if it is necessary. In this essay, I will examine both points of view and resent supporting arguments for my selection.

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During holidays or weekends, young people spend less time on outdoor activities in the natural environment, such as hiking and mountain climbing. Why? What can be done to encourage them to go out?

In this day and age, young generations are hardly interested in participating in outdoor activities ranging from hiking to mountain climbing especially during holidays or weekends. In this essay I will explain the reason as well as proposing several solutions.

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Some people think that renewable energy sources like solar and wind power should replace fossil fuels such as coal and gas as soon as possible. Others think we should continue to use fossil fuels while it is still cheap to do so. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Renewable energy sources like solar and wind power are taking place more and more in all chapters of our lives. Most developed counties try to figure out ways to increase these evolutionary methods, so as to prevent the environmental pollution that the whole world occurs. On the other hand, the world economy will have the potential view, to be increased, as fossil fuels such as oil and gas are cheaper. In this essay, I will examine both points of view and be supporting my own opinion.

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Overpopulation in the country is a serious issue that has given rise to numerous problems. Elaborate on one or two serious issues and give a plausible solution for them that governments can implement.

Generally people say that the population has been increasing day by day and it would be very precarious for the country. The above population in the country is a dangerous problem that has given rise to plenty of problems. This essay will further elaborate on major problems and possible solutions.

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Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of pople's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One of the most discussed societal issue is the number of people believing that a great proportion of people's salaries should be taken by governments to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools while other people don't. In my opinion, governments should not take a large proportion of people's salariers because taxes in most countries are already high and taking even more would decrease their disposable income. Also lower salaries would make it difficult for people to have a decent lifestyle.

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Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries.why is this the case? Is it a positive or a negative development?

It is undeniable that tourism has been increased since many years. It is generally believed that expedition of tourist industries can be observed in many developing nations. Due to some reasons they are improving the areas which brings some negative effects not only for country but also for other nations. It will be explained in forthcoming paragraphs.

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the top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilites. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Putting profits first is always favored by businesses, and they do not have to take social responsibilities. From my point of my view, I totally disagree with that statement and will tell why in the essay.

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People today are suffering more and more stress related problems than in the past. What is the cause of this? What are the possible effects of this development

Is it not a gruesome reality that a person who has good health has all the wealth? Without a skeptical, physical activities, play a vital role in ones life as they not only keep an individual healthy but also stress free. Despite of knowing the steps towards healthy lifestyle, our society is still plagued with anxiety and depression and undoubtedly, the ratio is increasing with the passage of the time.

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Some people think that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing contribute more towards a child's overall development. The school curriculum should provide more time for these subjects to be taught if the school wants all-round development of children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, childrens overall development concerns everyone. Some would argue that in order to enhance kids overall development, embibing with arts, drama, music and creative writing contribute in the development while others think it could not be enough. In my opinion, I believe providing more time for these activities is a complicated problem which might arise a contentious fight amoung parents.

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Bar chart - the components of GDP in the UK, from 1992 to 2000 Gross domestic product from IT and service inductry of the UK, (as a % of GDP)

The bar chart shows the components of GDP from the years 1992 and 2000 in the UK.

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More and more people today want to own famous brands of clothes, cars, and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive development? (250 words)

Buying products from well-known and famous brands is becoming popular day by day. Most people own this trend to improve their lifestyle and spend the lives they wish for.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The advertisement is the topic of discussion. Although some think people do not pay attention to Ads any more, myself included, believe that the community like to purchase everything by caring about the advertising process.

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“Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminals from society.” To what extent do you support this view?

It is true that the most common way to punish those committing mistakes is to transfer them to jail as they can be differentiated from the outside world. This phenomenon carries not only negative but also positive consequences. Therefore, this essay will discuss both perspectives.

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Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same jobs. What problems this causes? What are solutions?

In the present world, the competition between experienced and young workers has risen dramatically for the same job types. In this essay, I will discuss the leading causes of this outbreak, including overpopulation. This essay also concerns with a solution that can tackle this problem.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives do you think the advantages of taking risks outweight the disadvantage?

It is true that people take risks is a popular things in this society, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Although it has the disadvantages ,I would argue that the advantages outweigh it.

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Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is said that luck is the most important thing that a person needs to have in order to achieve his or her aims in life. In my view, I partly agree with this viewpoint because although luck is important, other abilities still play an essential role in a person's achievements.

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