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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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it is important for people to take risks, of in their proffesional lifes and their personal lifes.

Many people advocate that, risk-taking is essential whether it concerns their professional life or private life. I agree with this statement. Despite the fact that, a risky decision may cause short-term setbacks, advantages greatly overweigh disadvantages, as I believe that it is not possible for one to have a prosperous life without it.

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some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centres is for privately owned vehicles to be banned, others however think this is not a realistic solution.

Living in the modern era is always fascinating to other people who lived in undeveloped countries. The high life of developed cities demands complete infrastructure where there is no issue of energy crises as well as travelling problems. Following are the key points to highlight the causes for this issue.

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a result of electronic technologies for instance the computer and television

As a consequence of electronic technologies for instance the computer and television, individuals do less physical exercises, and this is having a negative impact on their health. In this essay, I am going to explain both positive and negative sides.

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modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. this has have negative effect on their social lives.

Contemporary shapes of imparting namely email including messaging have decreased the quantify of time people pay out meeting with their friends, this has have a negative impact on their social existence. I strongly opine that, messaging and email can not influence on people's life and their relationships, cause of social medias, people can communicate with each other, even if, between them is a long distance.

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nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life. what are the reason? what are the effects on society and family life?

Currently, the number of men and women who make a decision to have a toddler later in their life increases significantly. This trend has many reasons such as the economic crisis moreover, a rising average of old is a negative aspect of that. In this essay, I intend to explain the reason and effects of that in society and family.

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Once children start school, teachers become a more important influence on children's intellectual and social development than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I partially disagree with the statement that teachers become a more important influence on children's intellectual and social development than parents once children start school. While teachers play a crucial role in a child's academic development, parents continue to be the primary caregivers who shape a child's overall development.

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Many think that religion should be taught in schools while others think it should be avoided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is increasing number of arguments that religion education should be promoted , while others believe it should be prevented. This essay will discuss both notion along with my opinion.

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These days many children spen a lot time playing video games and many parents feel this is very negative. Do you agree or disagree?

In modern times an increasing number of children are exposed to technology, not only for completing their schoolwork, but for playing digital games either offline or online. This has become a point of concern for many parents. With alarming risks involved in kids engaging in such games and the amount of time spent on computer games, it is with merit that guardians are concerned.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, the museum has become one of the most popular destinations for the tourism industry. Since then, many of them adopt an amount of money as entrance fees for visitors, in contrast, many of them do not have visiting fees. In this essay, I will explain in detail why I believe the advantages of taking money from regular people are more than its drawbacks.

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A report indicated that many children between 7 and 11 years old watch television and/ or play video games too much. How does the problem affect? what measures can be taken control of?

Electrical devices are present in our lives , they are used when needed. We find children using it when playing or entertaining themselves. However, it has some negative things. This essay will examine problems of the entertainment devices. Many of kids from the age of 7 to 11 spend a very long time entertaining themselves and wasting time. First of all, watching TV and playing video games like PlayStation affects eye health. Many child wear glasses. Second, they get back pain from sitting for long hours playing. Finally , due to this problem, they have to stay away from their friends in the school environment. There are many solutions or procedures for each problem. First , set a time in the day for the kids to watch TV or play video games. But only two hours a day are set. The second is to identify group fun activities between children, and parents such as painting , playing Uno and making a healthy sandwich. Also, the mother can set a day to visit their ...

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The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure,business and commercial purpose around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights? Do you think flight should be texed more?

When compared to what was used as the most effective modes of transport 100 years ago, it is obvious that the number of flights has increased much in term of travel purposes and in a wide range of the destination. In this essay, I will outline the main benefits and drawbacks of flight increment and explain why it must be taxed more.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language Is In order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Learning a second language gives a merit opportunity including augmenting communication skill, knowledge of different culture and so on. Meanwhile, some folks opine the reasons for those who learn foreign language with the aim only to be able to travel or to work in overseas country. In this essay both sides of the debate will be explained and in my point of view, there are many reasons to learn another language besides to be capable of living in non-native state.

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The lone chart below information on the satisfaction with education system in five different countries from 2010 to 2010.

The line graph provides data about how the height of satisfaction with the education system in Australia, Japan, Germany, Brazil and the USA changed, over a 20-year period, starting from 1990.

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Not long ago, people stored information in books. These days, people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The rise of the internet has revolutionized the way people store and access knowledge. While traditional books were once the primary source of advice, the internet has become the go-to platform for learning, research, and communication. However, like any technological advancement, the shift from books to the internet has both advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, we will explore these pros and cons to determine whether the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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mojdeh, 10:03 AMSome people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

In these days, experiencing other countries is an interesting activity among young people. There are two main ways to do this: traveling abroad and watching TV and the internet. Many people said that visiting other nations is abundant because TV and the internet provide all the information you need.

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The United Nations recently celebrated its 70th anniversary. What benefits has it brought during this time? Do you think the UN will last another 70 years?

UN, this giant international organization has been established since the end of the second world war and in recent years it has become a mature 70-year-old elderly creature. From more than half of the century, this global association has been trying to resolve national conflicts peacefully and expand welfare, health and tranquility all around the world. In this essay, firstly the advantages of UN existence will be counted and then we will shed light on remaining of this organization in the future of current modern world.

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The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure,business and commercial purpose around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights? Do you think flight should be texted more?

Humans never stop travelling worldwide when they have a chance to do so. Given the fact that economy is getting better and travel is getting easier with plane, the numbers of flights for all kinds of purpose have been seen increasingly worldwide over recently. In this essay, I will outline the main benefits and drawbacks of flight increment and explain why flight test must be done more regularly.

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Some people say football players who have talent are the best. Others say players who learn the skill are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion

This essay argued that sportsmen have special abilities in the sport. ,,However some of them also think also need more soft skills are encourage their aims soon as possible. I strongly agreed with the suggestions completely with both are important for every player and their team while these are the crucial points important for our team can win without any commitments.

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Students at school and universities learn more from teachers than other sources. Do you agree or disagree?

Students are the future generation who can shape our nation. Now a days there are a lot more changes in aour academics. This is for the betterment and success of the wards. It is often argued that pupils at educational institutions gain an extra knowledge from the lecturers than any other materials. I partially agree with the statement and the reasons are being substantiated in the paragraphs below.

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8.) The only way to improve safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree with this idea?

Currently, individuals lack driving responsibility despite many governments trying to solve the issues, therefore, someone criticizes that punishments should be stricter. I partially agree with this statement.

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