IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 806

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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เนื่องจากที่อยู่อาศัยเป็นความต้องการขั้นพื้นฐานของประชาชน รัฐบาลควรจัดหาที่อยู่อาศัยฟรีสำหรับทุกคนที่ไม่สามารถซื้อได้ คุณเห็นด้วยหรือไม่เห็นด้วยในระดับใด?

In today's world, we cannot deny that not everyone can have or afford their accommodations, that are the cause that impact for the figure of homeless people has rapidly increased a lot from the past. Both views of these contrasting views will be analyzed and also my opinion is given in this essay. Personally, I will go on with the positive side that governments should offer adjustments to them.

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Human being is never happy with what they have or how much they have. Why is that so? How can we be pleased with the things we have around us? What should we do to achieve the ideal things that we want?

Everyone defines happiness in a different manner. it is often argued that the process to achieve on a goal is difficult and most importantly people always don’t appreciate once they achieved it. However as to whether it is a blessing or curses, there arises a heated debate among people. As far as I’m concerned, I personally feel that people can learn to appreciate things by comparing with the vulnerable ones and it is always possible to achieve on our dreams by different strategies.

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The news has no connection with most people’s life and it is therefore a waste of time for most of us for reading newspaper and watching television news program. What extend do you agree or disagree?

People get many news through different platform. The news has no connection with most people's life and it is therefore a waste of time for most of us for reading newspaper and watching television news program. To a large extend I agree with the statement and my point of view regarding this statement explained in the following paragraph.

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better life to be alive than now.

The advancement of technology and science has made a dramatically changed in this society. It is often argued that this changes will be beneficial to human such as increase life expectancy. However as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far as I’m concerned, I personally agree that the invention of technology has made our life convenient and the advancement of treating cancers in human being.

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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, continuing education after collage is more popular. People do not have the same ideas about the purpose of university education. While there are those who argue that the main reason of this type of education is better employment opportunities, other claim that holding a university degree is beneficial for graduated and where they live in many great ways. I agree with the second group.

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In some countries , the government promote public transportation and discourage the private vehicles what are the advantage and disadvantages?

In many countries, communting by public transport is encouraged than driving personal cars. There are both negative and positive impacts to this matter. This essay will discuss both sides of the coin.

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Countries are becoming mor and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

We are living in a modern society so countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. I strongly believe that this is a positive development and I will support this view and my reason will be explained in the following paragraph.

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These days too many people maintained that helped by relying on doctors and medicines rather than by following healthy lifestyles. Do you agree or disagree.

In today's era, it is true that higher positions are presently held by senior people in many organizations. While some persons consider that adult masses would demonstrate better leadership, it is my opinion that seniors have more merits over the young in leading a company.

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Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people's health, more and more people are eating it. Why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?

It is an irrefutable fact that worldwide consumption of junk items has become a burgeoning issue. Although, medical professionals have restricted the use of unhealthy meal options yet, the choice of having such items is on the rise. This essay shall further put forward plausible reasons for its popularity among society as well as shed light upon the possible solution to resolve the issue in ensuing paragraphs.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think that the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is perceived that people need to take risks, both in their working environment and their private lives. This essay will examine why the benefits of getting risks outweigh the drawbacks.

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Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion?

Many countries waste a lot of money to explore and investigate Space, though there are more pivotal subjects and categories than searching space. There are those who think that governments around the world should prepare and expend bills for more essential things than researching outside of the earth. In my opinion, money should be used for projects which are related with individuals in the country.

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Some people believe that it is better to stay with one company during a career. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While continueing one job through the life is better way in view of human resources, changing job is one of the most effective way to broaden one's horizons. To aquire a wide range of knowledge and possibility, I almost disagree with this statement.

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Every country should produce enough of everything that the country needs so it does not have to rely on imports. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

For countries not to rely on import they need to manufacture enough goods of all that they need. This essay totally agrees with that statement. I believe that producing sufficient amount of products will make countries independent from imports from other places. In addition it will make nations prepared for anything that might happen in the future.

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Some people think that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writings can be stored electronically. Others think that printed books still play important roles. Discuss both views.

Some argue that digital books will be dominant as all written data can be stored in the digital format, while others insist printed books will keep playing an important role. Although the latter point seems to be persuasive, I largely stand on the point that lightweight devices with limitless functionalities will soon be more prevalent.

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In this essay I'm going to talk about if graffiti should be allowed or denied in certain spaces. To some people this type of painting is a way to express themselves in the form of art, on the other hand a large group of people find it offensive and disrespectful. In my opinion this way of expressing themselves is good but on the other hand it should have specific places for it.

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Hello my name is Manuel and In this essay i’ll talk about a very polemic topic around the world. I'm talking about the graffiti spaces. This topic is very controversial because some people don't like to see the cities painted and some others think painting walls is art and they should have their own spaces to do their paintings.

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‏Every year thousands of students go overseas to study. Although many benefit from the experience, others go home disappointed. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying in another country?

Study abroad is always considered as a dream to everyone. It is often argued that study overseas have more cons compared to the pros. However, as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far as I’m concerned, I truly feel that study abroad indeed allow graduates to receive a higher job opportunity but it’s drawbacks shouldn’t be denied.

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Employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress at work. They should only care about the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some companies have rules for workers to wear an office uniform to have credibility with clients or beholders, but some entrepreneurs did not require or fix the clothes for their employees. They can ensemble whatever they want. I probably going to the positive side that employers do not have to worry about what are they going to wear, but should concern about the results of their work. This essay will discuss the topic and give some explanations to explain.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As an introduction, during the promotional process most of the companies try to convince public that their products are new. I believe that it is a good thing as it can lead to increase marketing. Hence the businessmens use this to make a good profit. In the following essay, I will discuss some positive and negative points regarding this issue.

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Some TV programs, video of violent games and other leisure activities are harmful to children. How harmful they are ? What can be done to solve these problems ?

In order to build a beautiful society of tomorrow children must be taught good values. However, an easy access to the internet has made today's children more violent, vigrous, restless beacuse of the content shown in the movies,the web series and few games. It has very destructive effect on the mind of youngsters. Both the negative effects of it and their solutions are dicussed in the following paragraphs.

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