IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 81

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays ,many people have to work longer hours and they feel stressed out than before.what are the reasons?what can employers do to make their life easier.

Nowadays work has a majority of time in our lives.So people spend longer hours at work and they feel more stressed than before There are many reasons for this issue add to that employers should find a solution to make their life easier.In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and I will highlight the solution.

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Nowadays, more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

Over the course of the last decades, finding a suitable job has become increasingly challenging. Many older job seekers have to compete with younger candidates for the same position, which can induce several problems such as large-scale unemployment and workplace conflicts for both individuals and societies. Therefore, some measures should be taken to address these issues effectively.

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Many government spend a lot of money on art.Some people think this investment in art in necesssary,but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many citizens presume it is necessary that the goverment invests a large sum of money into art, while on the other hand some assume that they should put the money instead into improving the health and education system due to the fact its more "beneficial", in this essay we will converse about both of these views with expressing my perspective.

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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experienc

The digital realm has benefitted our access to knowledge positively. I agree with this statement and believe that it has enhanced humanity in numerous ways. However, even though it laid the foundation for technological breakthroughs such as assisting instructors to teach via e-learning, it unabled people to work hard in terms of earn something.

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In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous peoples being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media have no right privacy. To what extend do you agree?

There is no denying the fact that the most captivating content in the press renvolves around celebrity and their lives.While it is commonly held belief that famous people loss their privacy the moment they get in the media , there is also an argument that opposes it.In my opinion , I consider although the well-known individuals choose career expose them to the society and become under the spot ,some privacy and limit require to ensure human comfort ,physical and mental health.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

In certain nations, students who just graduated from high school are adviced to take a gap year to travel or work. This essay will elaborate on the merits and demerits to this decision.

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More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or "remotely" rather than going into an office each day. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many people can work from home without going to the office. This has both advantages and disadvantages that should be considered.

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In modern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home

Nowadays, adolescents prefer to spend more time with their friends instead of with their families because of the improvement in technology compared to the past. Moreover, I believe that parents should not limit their children to hanging out with their friends in order to spend more time with their family.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In life there are times when unfavourable situations occur such as having a bad job or not owning enough funds. While some feel people should accept their fates when faced with these circumstances, there are opponents who believe that it is more profitable to try and change one's situation. This essay will elaborate on both sides of the argument and why I think it is better to accept bad situations when they occur.

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Some parents believe children’s leisure activities should be always educational, but others think it will cause more pressure on children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Competitive studying environment has had a demonstrable effect on modern society, especially with regards to children’s leisure activities. While some people believe that promoting education as a leisure activity for children is the best method to prepare for their academic success and protect them from inappropriate contents, others disagree with this point of view and argue that this method put more pressure on children, leading them to become stressful and depressed.

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Nowadays, more people are becoming overweight some people think that the solution is to increase the price of fattening food ? To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In this contemporary era, many human- beings are becoming obese and it has been argued that the answer is to increase the money of fast -food. I completely agree with this statement because it will decrease the demand among the public and there will be a drop in such meal businesses.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food. To extend do you agree or disagree

Consuming a large number of fast food will lead to health issues for people in some nations. Some people believe the effective measure is that the government should raise taxes on fast food. while this may be partly true, I would argue that there are superior ways to tackle this issue.

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Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Museums and art galleries should illustrate the native exhibits instead of supporting other cultures by showing their artworks and historical items. I partly agree with this statement because of the importance of protecting the local traditions but also due to providing a view to other nations.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given home work by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today’s education sector, distributing homework to students is widely implemented in schools, however a few individuals believe that it is unnecessary while the instructors argue that it is crucial for better quality education. In my opinion, I believe balancing between providing kids adequate time for themselves and giving out homework is crucial for their personal growth and development.

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Many people believe that social networking sites have huge negative effect on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world with advanced technology development, the Internet has been an inseparable part in our society, and one of its features is social networking sites. While they are widely used particularly as a platform for gaining information and communicating people, I believe excessive and improper these affect negatively to people’s health and society.

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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home/allowing students to study at home. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Over the last few years, more and more humans have been able to do their work online style without leaving the house. However , The point has some pros and cons .

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Some people believe that exams are an inappropriate way of measuring student’s performance and should be replaced by continuous assessments. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

The debate regarding examinations in schools has been ongoing for a while. Many people think exams are not efficient when it comes to accessing the students' knowledge, and suggest their replacement with continuous assessments rather. I completely agree with this opinion. I believe continuous assessments are a better way to measure the student's performance, as it gives students more time to effort on their performance or projects.

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Some people think that children should go to play way school before they go to primary school, while others the children should go to play way cho Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a debatable issue whether toddlers should start primary education directly or they should first attend kindergarten beide should fist step in the field of education. While some individuals think that ten before taking their first make kids stay with their families, I believe it is more advantageous better decision play way schools prior to primary education.

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There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Many people, mostly the old generations, think that music is not as important as education. This view is completely wrong, as music is a linguistic art, which can express people's feelings or opinions in enjoyable ways. Based on several research, though music our right-side brain is activated and balancing the brain work, considering that our daily routines tend to use left-side brain. Music is also the best platform to spread your ideas throughout the world compared to others such as novel or magazine, as the melody lyric distribute the massage better that non audio media, which might bore some people and somewhat could bring to misleading massage.

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Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (14th Mar) (GT)

While many people argue that car is the most beneficial way to travel in crowded places like cities, others believe that bicycle's advantages outweigths car's advantages. In my opinion, it depends on several factors such as the weather. However, bicycle gives the opportunity to explore the place in a detailed style. This essay will explore both notions and give my perspective.

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