IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 85

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of Income. Unfortunately, tourism can be cause of lot of problem if its not well managed . What are the advantage and dis advantage in the modern world? Do you think advantage overweight the disadvantage .

The issue of tourism has been a disputatious and contentious matter recently. It has been argued that travelling has a major impact on both countries and people. Therefore, I tend to believe that both the benefits and drawbacks need to be examined in depth.

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In many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave in the first months after babies are born. Do advantage outweigh disadvantage?

There seems to be a debatable issue of whether mothers are entitled to stay away from official duties during the initial months when new born babies need maternity care in more nations. Letting females experience maternity leave provides them an opportunity to get adapted to their new life no matter how others strongly others oppose my notion. Now, I will make the issue clear in order to arrive at the last but not least conclusion.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend To what extend fo you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevaant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

This essay will open topic about working week and should it be longer or shorter. Aurthor opinions, that goverment have to make working week shorter during the winter and the summer time. I will explain and give some relevant knowledge from this topic.

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In modern world technology develops dramatically. Some people believe that this is good for traditional cultures, but others think it will lead to their extinction. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Rapidly developing technologies in nowadays world affects not only our lives, but more common things like traditional cultures. This problem might be arguable for some people in the way of iteraction for traditional cultures and dramatically developing technologies. In my opinion, such phenomena might be dangerous but useful for saving traditions.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is controversy about whether substantial salaries would benefit society at large or it is an issue that needs to be addressed. Although i acknowledge the benefits of equality, i believe the drawbacks imposed by it pale its benefits.

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Childhood obesity has become a growing issue that nearly two-thirds of children are now classified as overweight or obese in Australia. As a result, many believe that schools should take on more responsibility for monitoring what students eat and ensuring they get enough physical exercise. The question is: to what extent should schools be responsible for addressing this problem?

There are good reasons to argue that schools have a significant role in promoting healthy lifestyles among children. Schools are where children spend the majority of their day, making them ideal environments to encourage better dietary habits and regular exercise. With meal programs and physical education classes, schools can influence what students eat during the day and ensure they participate in physical activities. Moreover, schools can offer education on nutrition, helping students make healthier choices.

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People aim to keep a balance between their work and other parts of their lives, but few people achieve it. What are the problems in trying to achieve this goal and how can these problems be overcome?

Today,people always want to get a good balance between work and their lives,but in the competitive generation ,work has become massively stressful ,we will get less and less time to do our favorite hobby,we might feel exhausted.These social problems have existed for a long time,so choose work and lives,people have immense pressure in these problem.

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Nowadays, distance-learning have gained in popularity, but some people argue that courses can never be as good as those taken by attending a college or university in person.To what extent do you agree or disagree

In our contemporary world, convenient software has made distance learning programs increasingly popular . Some humans claim that this modern teaching way are not as good as traditional ones which encourage students to learn in school in person . I firmly agree with this statement there are many positive ways to study at the campus . In this essay I will completely justify my answers of this questions.

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Although many people value public parks, this space could be better used for the other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and build economics. To what extend do you agree or dis agree with this statement.

In this moder era, the growth of population is increasing rapidly. Some people say that public parks can be used for the different purposes for example residential areas or to develop buisness and build economics. I agree with this statement but up to some extent and will discuss following.

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Some people work for the same company or organisation during their whole working life why I don't see is dead. It is better to work for different companies discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people after getting in to a field would often consider it as a secure point and would never risk it as long as they do not have to. This, might cause the person to spend all his work years doing the same job. On the other hand, we have some humans who acctually like to jump between different work fields every few years. In this essay, possible causes heve been discussed.

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Some people regard video games as useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

Although some refer video games as practical educational setting, others, myself included, believe that these tools impact on people adversely, playing them, and its demerits far outweigh its merits.

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Some people say that that working at home is beneficial to the worker and the family while others believe that it is stressful to both the worker and the family. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals do home office nowadays, some people believe that it creates adrenalin rush to both the workers and the family while others contend that it is beneficial to the workers as well as their family. In my opinion, home is better for those persons who do remote jobs; however, who does job in a factory as a labour, it is necessary to do work in person.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Choosing a proper university can always be a big deal for the families all over the world. Except for which major to choose or which campus to enter, the biggest problem must be which city to choose. Judging whether kids staying at hometown or go out for another city is a question about thinking emotionally or rationally. But it is definitely true that the benefits of living away from home during university can outweigh the disadvantages.

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In the 30 years the world has seen an increase in immigration. Many people point out the benefits of this, whereas others believe the negatives outweigh the positives. Discuss both of these viewpoints and give your own opinions.

In the past 30 years, the world has experienced an increase in immigration. Many people believe that it is beneficial, while others believe that the drawbacks outweigh the benefits. I personally believe that while immigration is responsible for forgetting the traditions of the immigrants, it actually brings improvements in the lives of immigrants.

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Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate about whether school should be responsible to fostering children habit on healhty diet or it should be parents roles. While some advocate that school have essential role in navigating children habit others believe that parents are holding the responsible as the first place to learn. This essay will explore both perspective before presenting a reasoned conclusion.

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Too much emphasis is given for the education of students. More government money should be spent on free time activities for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate about whether government should prioritize educational funding or invest more heavily in recreational activities for young people. While I agree that leisure activities play an essential role in development of the youth, I firmly believe that education should remain the top priority for government spending. In this essay, I will elaborate on why education is crucial while acknowledging the benefits of free-time activities.

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Some prents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys ?

Busy life styles of majority of the global population has become a reason for parents to keep their children entertained by providing them with their desired toys. This essay brings up possible pros and cons of children owning large amount of toys.

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also caused problems that did not exsit before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

There is no doubt, that the Internet has changed the way of dissemination of information. However, it caused some issues such as the availability of not correct data and the fraud in the global network. I will observe this problems and find ways of solution.

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Some employers offer their employees subsidizedmembership of gyms and sport clubs , believe that this will make their staff healthier and more effective at work . Other employees find no benifit doing so. Discuss both views .

CEOs often register their workers on gyms and sport community refrain them to have sedentary lifestyle and stay effective in their job. Some workforce argue that it is beneficial because it can lessen the financial burden and support their annual habit. However the others see the program is useless because of unstoppable workflow and damage their well-being.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addiiton to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all thier time qnd attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There has been an ongoing conflict about whether university students could take not only mandatory couses but also addiitonal lectures during their education period. This phenomenon can be regarded as both favorale and unfavorable and it would be discussed throughout the essay. My opinion will be reflected the latter.

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