IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 85

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people suggest that it is better for children to be brought up the whole family including uncles, aunts and grandparents, rather than just the parents. Do you agree or disagree?

I strongly do not agree that it will be better for cildren to grow up with a big family, including grandparents, uncles and aunts.

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With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends, which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

Currently, there is an increasing number of adolescents who are able to meet and chat with friends online in an unsupervised way, and it could lead to potentially dangerous problems. Parents monitoring and well developed Internet chatting environment could deal with this problem.

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Write about the following topic: Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals agree that home is best place for offspring development in case of learning, while, some people thought that it is important for children to do schooling. Both of these methofs have pros and i will share my opinion in the essay below.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?n?

The possibilities of all vehicles will be driverless which mean all people transported with will be passengers. In my perspective, the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh its drawbacks in both time and cost saving.

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Sugar consumption is too harmful. Some say it is government’s responsibility to limit sugar intake, while others say it’s individual who are responsible. Discuss both views and give you opinion?

The consumption of sugary foods and bevarages has drastically increased in those last few decades. Sugar intake upon a certain level is proven to be harmful for our health. For this reason, some people believe governments should ramp up their efforts to limit sugar intake in people diet, on the other hand others believe that it is a personal choice of each individual. I strongly agree with the second position because each citizens should be free to take its own choice in how he feed himself.

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Some think that governments should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there are people who suppose that the government have to help with the money to the elderies, whilst others are convinced that all of the people have to concern to their status by themselves. On this essay I'll discuss both points of view, and try to explain my own.

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Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is bette to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

Nowadays, the trend of getting higher education in university has become more common. Regarding this, there is argument about whether finishing a course offered by university can guarantee a good job or starting work after school and gaining experience in workforce is more beneficial. While some advocate for studying in university will equip student with more knowledge, others believe that the study case and real case are differents. This essay will offer both perspective before presenting a reasonable opinion.

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Some people think city planners should create more green spaces and plant trees. Other believe that they should focus on building new home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It has been argued by many people that town architecture should leave space for green areas, whereas others deem that they ought to pay attention to constructing new buildings and homes. This essay believes that city designers have to keep greenery areas in mind while designing a city plan.

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In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing high speed railway lines for inter-city travel. Others believe this money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that it is better to allocate a significant amount of money to building high speed railway lines for traveling between neighbourhoods in city. Some others claim that this budget should be spend on old public transpot improvement. I agree with the opinion of the benefits of spending money on new transportation system for some reasons which will be discussed in this essay.

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Some university students to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is believed that qualification is more crucial than take other subjects to adding the college students their primary subjects. There are arguments on both sides of this very topical debate, and I will discuss them now.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are various purpose of science innovations. In fact, I strongly agree that science discoveries and inventions should made to help people achieve a better live for two main reasons.

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In many professional sports, there is an increasing number of athletes who use banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?

Using banned substances is a growing trend among athletes to enhance their performance. This essay will discuss how pressure of public is the main cause of this problem, and how harsher penalties could be the possible solution.

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Health services are a basic necessity. However, private companies have made them quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages?

In the contemporary world, it is true to say that health care services are an essential fundamental. Nevertheless, there is a conflict that the price has been made by private corporation quite expensive for ordinary people. It seems to me that there are more benefits than drawbacks. This essay will discuss both pros and cons from the situation mentioned above in the following paragraphs.

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Nowadays people research their family history, some people say this is useless and we should instead focus on present and future generations. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A curiosity about one’s past is always been people’s gene. While the family history can tell useful information about the medical conditions or habitual effects, current and future circumstances are more important than the past, because the current situation is different from the past to be based on. While I understand that presents are more important because historical gene issues can be prevented and cured by regular check up by modern technologies, the history of family tells necessary information about the critical conditions or specific behaviours that people may not aware about. So, people can make adjustment in their behavioural acts in this present phenomenon which could affect the future.

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IT IS COMMONLY BELIEVE THAT NOWADAYS MAIN FACTOR THAT AFFECT A CHILD’S DEVELOPMENT ARE MEDIA,POP CULTURE AND FRIENDS.A DIFFERENT POINT OF VIEW IS THAT FAMILY PLAYS THE MOST SIGNIFICANT ROLE.DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

In modern days, some people believe that media, pop culture and friends are often regarded as major factors influencing children's development, while others would believe that the family plays a more significant role. This paper aims to discuss which side of the contrasting views plays a bigger role in a child's development, as well as giving some personal opinions.

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Should students be allowed to choose which classes they take, or should they be required to take the same classes as everyone else? What are the advantages and disadvantages of each approach to education?

Some people are wondering should they only take the classes that they like or take all of the classes. At school, students must take all of the subjects. Otherwise, at university, they do not need to join all af the classes. This essay will examine the merits and drawbacks of it and conclusion will be made.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition totheir main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days some people are interested in studying some extra and additional subject except their man subjects in the universities. on the other hand, from some experts and students' point of view, if someone give their total attention to one subject. he/she will be more successful in desire subject.

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Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping kids with school work, others think that they should allocate more time to play sports with their kids. Discuss the both these views and give your own opinion

Parents should invest more time in helping their children with school work because it helps to make the parent-child bond strong. Parents should be the primary teachers of their children because they understand their children better than their teachers. Moreover, when parents teach their children about their school stuff, children quickly learn them. It is because they love and trust their parents more than their teachers. In Japan, for instance, parents are advised to help their children with their school homework because children feel more encouraged to concentrate on their studies if they are taught by their parents. Therefore, I think that kids should be taught school lessons by their parents.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Government funding is the most crucial decision for any goverment or municipal authority.

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Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food?

It is inevitable that food production process is crucial as it can affect the food nutritions. However, some people feel that there are a lot of people these days who just choose their meal based on its price instead of pay attention to the way their food is produced. In my opinion, price is indeed an important aspect of served foods, but nowadays people start to consider other aspect on choosing foods.

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