IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 80

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that advertising has a strong effect on a person’s decision-making process. Others feel that it has little or no real impact. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is often held that advertising have a significant impact at influencing customer to purchase items. While some people argue that advertising are predominant in persuading people to buy the products, others have opinion that other approach will be more effective. This essay will discuss both these points of view and give my personal opinion about the issue.

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Some pepole say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and becom disciplined. Others argue that teenagers should not sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work . Discusee both views and give your opinion.

Some people see that teenagers should find a job opportunity and gain financial returns after finishing school. In addition, they will acquire life skills and experiences. Others, think that they have free time in their lives to work in the future. Therefore, they should spend their free time with interesting activities with their friends. From my point of view, I see that students in advanced stages of their lives should get new skills and competencies through working.

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Some parents nowadays put more pressure on their children to succeed. Why is this the case? It is a negative or positive trend?

It is widely recognized that some parents in this day and age tend to apply more pressure on their offsprings to achive goal in life. This essay will explain reasons of this phenomenon before concluding that it is more harmful to children's overall development.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Secondary school is a one time moment in people's life, some of the people choose to do whatever they want. It could be focus on art and music or studying science and social. Some people argue that all students must study art and music. But, I think they do not have to, as they have their own expertise also they do not have much time in highschool.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

While the idea of banning all cars that burn fossil fuels and replacing them with electric cars has environmental benefits, a complete ban is not good at this point. I believe a gradual transition is more practical solution due to economic challenges and current limitations in infrastructure.

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Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen or pencil . What are the reasons for this? Is this positive or a negative development.

Nowadays pen and pencil are being used by small numbers of people. The development of technology is one of the many reasons behind this trend. In my opinion It is a posItive step.

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Celebrities play an important social role in the community. What are the advantages and disadvantages of being a celebrity

Today, being a celebrity in modern society has positive and negative sides . However, some of them enjoy being popular, also most of them want be private and personal freedom. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages .

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some that everyone should be entitled to higher education, and this should be made free to puilpils by the government without considering their financial capability. In my opinion, i agree that university education should be made free, because education is important for growth in every society.

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Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.

Some individuals assume that particularly dangerous criminals should be punished with death penalty, while others think that this type of punishment is not a clear solution. Even though it seems like capital punishment should scare potential maniacs from commiting crimes, most of the time, this penalty will cause them to commit even more bad things, since they have nothing to lose anymore.

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Some people think that parents should deal with their children's poor behaviour, while others believe it is the government's responsibility to regulate it. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

It is believed by individuals that parents should negotiate with their children's bad behaviour. However, others assume that improving kids' ethics is the government's priority. Both perspectives are significant and in this essay I will discuss them.

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Today there is increasing concern over environmental problems. While some people believe taht they must be solved on a domestic level, others think that only through international cooperation can environment issues be dealt with.

Environmental issues has become widespread concern about its threat. While some people believe that this problem ought to be tackled internationally working, others argue that environmental degradation is the responsibility of the country itself. Both of the aforementioned perspective will be disscussed in the following paragraphs along side with the reasons behind them.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that the primary goal of scientific improvments are increasing the qualities of individuals' lives. I agree with the idea in some extent. In my opinion, while it is true that any progress in science should facilitates our living but we should also consider the cost it takes and the side effects it can cause.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opionion.

There is an ongoing debate whether visitors should follow local people's habits. Some people believe that visitors should obey the local lifestyle, while other argue that the host country should be more inclusive to foreigners. This essay agrees with the first view.

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4. Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is beter to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

In the contemporary world, there are a few of people thinking schools should select students according to their

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

I fully agree that it is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is also necessary to help them learn this distinction. When I was a kid, I was quite a liar, I lied so much that I started believing in my own lies. Fortunately, I have my parents to teach me the difference between right and wrong. Every time I lied, my parents would make me watch a show where the liar’s nose grew longer as they lie, they also educated me on the reasons why I shouldn’t lie. It was a long and steady process, but I stopped lying. Now that I’ve grown up, I became an honest person. It’s important to teach them the difference between right and wrong at an early age so they grow up knowing what is wrong and what is right. A habit at an early age usually sticks with them as they grow up. Punishment is also necessary so that they don’t repeat their mistake and become a better person. Although punishment is necessary, I don’t agree with physical punishm...

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the most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Science play a crucial role in our modem society, it creates technology, medicine, and many more. Some argue that the primary goal of science must be to enhance the quality of peoples lives. I strongly agree with this statement because science mostly focused on innovation that could improve humans health.

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The increasing use of smartphones in education is helping students access more information. However,it can also be a source of distraction. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of smartphones in education.

The ongoing discourse concerning the rising of smartphones in Education is improve learning or distracts students attention has sparked fervant debates. While both viewpoints present valid arguments, I am to delve into each perspective in detail, ultimately aligning with the former position as the more compelling stance.

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It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

It is a common belief that some people are born with innate talents, such as sports and music. It is sometimes argued that any child can be taught to become a good sportsman or musician. I personally believe that although creative things like sports and music require innate talents, if anyone can be taught to become a sportsperson or musician, it is possible.

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Somefamilies people believe that children who are brought up in which don't have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up in wealthier families. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is widely debated that children raised in low-wage families are way more prepared for the life challenges than those who have been fostered in the affluent families. I partially agree, with the given statement and will give my opinion on both the facts.

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In many countries, people now wear western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than the traditional clothing. Why? (Reasons and relevant examples) Is this a positive or negative development?

In many countries, nowadays, people wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than the traditional outfits. This is because western outfits are comfortable and weather-friendly. I personally believe that it is a positive development because these clothings are suitable for workplace.

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