IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 831

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourist. Do the advantages of increased tourists outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays people are more into living and enjoying life. Gone are the days when people used to save money for their younger generations. In this , an essay I will discuss countries offering great travel plans to tourists.

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Advertising encourages customers to buy in quantity not in quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?.

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the advertisement effect on consumption. In my opinion, I consider myself an advocate of this idea.

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Some believe that success in life comes from hard work and determination. Others think that it depends on factors such as money and personal appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed by some that hardworking and determination have key role to being successful in life while others assert that money and individual outlook are more vital to reach achievements. Working hard and being decisive may present easy access to new goals which would bring triumphs. Looking from the other side to the discussion, personal appearance and money have an initial affect in the way of success.

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Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In some region of the world, limitations have been done for using alcohol in terms of users’ age while other countries do not use laws about this subject. Age limitations may be beneficial to young individuals in favour of preventing harms of alcohol and delaying probable drinking habits in the future. Avoiding strict rules about this case may bring in reduction of using of alcohol among young people too.

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Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Is it a positive or negative development?

There is some debate about whether building accomplished gymnasiums and sporting equipment for athletes supports some countries achieving global success rather than making an investment for everyone. Provision for competitors should be treated the same as the bulk of population.

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. What are the most serious problems associated with obesity and what solutions can you suggest?

It is true that in developed countries, Obesity is a huge peril for teenagers. Because it can leads to seak adults in the future. In this essay I would say about the problems might created by obesity and I will suggest some solutions to tackle it.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with healt problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

Clearly, alternative ways of treating illnesses have gained quite a popularity over the last years. It is increasingly diverting many people from conventional doctors, and although it may have some advantages, the change may cause certain repercussions.

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Many museums charge admission fee while others are free. Do the advantage of charging people to visit a museum outweigh the disadvantage?

Museums are one of the most important part of every countries to show their culture and ancient times.Meanwhile,some museum around the world have no permission fee.On contrary,some museums have entry fee.I think there are some merits and demerits in both of them.I am going to discuss both in this essay with some releavant examples.

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Some people think that children should follow their parents’ advice, however, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people claim that kids do not know the proper direction to choose, parents play a role in giving instructions and recommendations to their children, while others think that it is not necessary. In this essay, I agree with the topic and I will discuss both views and give my opinions in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that government should be held responsible when problem of homelessness and unemployment arise. Do you agree or disagree?

Homelessness and unemployment are the main problems that many countries of the world are going through. There are many factors responsible for this situation including the government. Many people believe that the government should be fully responsible for this. I don’t agree with that , the reasons for the increase in unemployment and homelessness are numerous and it cannot be one reason alone nor can the government alone be held responsible for this issue.

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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our life. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative trend?

It is generally acknowledged that the demand for robots is going up, therefore, the lifestyle starts to depend more and more on the technology industry. With great expectations for the next few years, these innovations may simplify or even make a revolution in some life sectors, such as education, health, transportation or even parenting.

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Some people prefer to live in a house while other feel that living in an apartment has more advantages. Discuss Advantage and disadvantages

The discussion about the accommodation issue is becoming overwhelmingly popular among the poblic. According to some, people ought to live in house, other people belive that there are more advantages for citizens living in apartments. In my opinion, apartment and houses are both have advantages and disadvantages aspects.

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These days many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, more and more people have changed their shopping styles from the in-store shopping to online purchasing. There are sort of advantages and disadvantages of e-commerce, while I believe that the advantage of on-line shopping outweighs the backwards.

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Parents should not pressure their children to choose particular profession. Young people should have the freedom to choose path they like. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Employer should focus on personal qualities over qualifications and experienced when choosing someone for a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In today's modern world, in many societies, focusing on visual qualities instead of qualifications and experiences to hire one as an employee has become widely common.In this regard, I strongly disagree with this point for a number of reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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some people think that public health is the responsilibility of the government while others think that people should be responsbile for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A healthy lifestyle is essential for personal well-being. As per people's views, it is the responsibility of the government to provide quality services,on the other hand, individuals should be held accountable for their energy.

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Some people say that children should play games which require teamwork such as football and basketball whereas, some think they should be doing individual sports such as swimming and running. Do you agree or disagree?

Sports play a vital role in our life.A group of individuals fathom that kids should play football ,cricket and basketball because they need teamwork ,while others believe that games like swimming and running are good for children.I completely agree with the first statement because teamwork can teach valuable things like leadership,good communication,strong bonding and so on.

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The cost of living is higher in many countries. What is the effects of higher prices to individuals and society? What is the best way for people to deal with this problem? I

TOur agency is excited to develop and conduct a marketing communication campaign for the new computer laptop by the well-known manufacturer in Uzbekistan. With its latest energy-efficient laptop battery technology that can last up to 21 hours with a single charge and its powerful processing CPU chip, this new laptop is set to revolutionize the market. We will work to develop a suitable name for the product and ensure a good marketing and promotional mix for the product.

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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There seems to be a common agreement that women are better at taking care of children compared to men and thus they should put more time and energy into baby caring. I totally disagree with this statement and I believe that women should be viewed equally with men in work and life scare.

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In certain countries famous festival witch attract million of people on site. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such popular festivals

The popularity of international festivals has increased immensely over the past few decades. These festivals, sounding benign and all entertaining at first sight, have also brought impediments on their own. Therefore, the focus of the following paragraphs will be to examine the success and failures of organizing kind feasts.

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