IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 836

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The rate of youth crime is rising in many countries. What are the causes of this trend? Suggest some solutions to decrease such rate.

The percentage of physical violations among the teenager is getting higher in most parts of the world. There are enormous reasons for this kind of scenario, but also there are some possible solutions to overcome this kind of situation.

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Other scientists think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous . Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this day and age through technology, we can identify if there is life on other planets. It is often believed that we should get in contact with other lifeforms out of the planet while others consider it would put us at risk. In the essay, I will show both points of view and then give my opinion.

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Artificial Intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. Do you agree with this statement? What is an alternative to traditional face-to-face learning?

Due to rapid increase in the technology and with the new innovation on daily basis aritificial intelligence is now getting more and more advance and it it's to be considered as they could replaced the teachers in the schools in the near future. I totally, disagree with this statement.

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Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

in the contemporary era, the building sites can be constructed by long planned period. Many advocate that if the companies build the apartments quickly as much as possible, they would attract more people who tend to buy these flats. In this essay I intend to delve into the merits and the demirts of both approachs.

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Some feel that movies and tv shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, certain people agree with the view that telecasted television shows and movies are good way to get knowledge regarding the historical event despite the fact that they are not completely accurate. While the remaining contradict the statement. According to my viewpoint, the second statement seems to be more rational. Further, I will explain both views along with my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs and thus will lead to a logical conclusion as well.

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In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development?

It has become common knowledge in some regions worldwide that children are given more liberty compared to several years ago. Although this might have some positive impacts in some cases, I believe that it would have destructive consequences for them in the not too distant future.

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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discus both views.

A the present, people are more consern about animals are getting hurt by living in the zoos but it another point is that certain types of animal also need to only kept by the zoo as well to prevent a danger from them. In this essay will examine the both views of the statement.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays it is common for many children to spend inordinate amounts of time on their smart phone. Lack of parental supervision and limitless access to the phone are the main reasons for this development. In my opinion, this is a negative development because it hurts the health and academic progress of the child.

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Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development?

An increasing number of people use technological products to interact with their friends or families instead of getting together in the real world. In my opinion, while there are some negative effects on people communicating with others, I prefer that people socializing on the internet could bring some positive advantages.

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Some people think that tourism benefits the host country. Others think that tourism causes problems for the host country.

In some respects, tourism has advantages for the host country, but in other respects it can cause problems.

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The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect. In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do? 1. Interrupt and correct the mistake right away; 2. Wait until the class or meeting is over and the people are gone, and then talk to the teacher or meeting leader; 3. Say nothing.

Mistakes are bound to happen in an individual's life, as no person is flawless. It can be due to stress and pressure from work or family, such problems arise. Therefore, it is very important to consider whether pointing out a fault right away, at the end of the class or saying nothing form one of the best things to do. Without a doubt, I believe that people should mark mistakes right away by their professors or leaders, as it produces a myriad of benefits for the class or during a meeting. I strongly feel this way for two reasons, which I shall delve into in the following essay.

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it is better to learn the way people lived in the past through films and video records than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

To begin, although both modes of information are very much important, I believe that it is better to learn the way people lived in the past through written documents rather than films and videos.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It can be acknowledged that prosperious nations have a tendency to use money as tool to come to the aid of less developed countries. I fully agree with people who says this is not an excellent method to prevent poverty and other remaining problems in poor nations. Therefore, it is suggested to give other kinds of help such as sharing education method instead of financial helps.

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Some students find more difficult to study at universities and colleges than schools. What are reasons for this situation? What are the solutions to solve this problem?

It is argued that many students of higher education tend to have more difficulties than that of school. I believe that there are some possible explanations of it and that some pro-active measures should be taken to ameliorate this situation.

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The idea of going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home beause of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in different culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

There is no denying that enrolling in foreign university is essential in shaping of people's future. However, many people claim that it is stressfull for youths to live in another country far away from homeland and their relatives. I totally disagree with this statement and i will explore my point of view in the forthcoming paragraphes.

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Some people believe that it is impossible to help everyone in need around the world. That is why governments should only focus on helping people of their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some believe supporting all societies that need assistance seems infeasible. So, authorities should take on the responsibility of meeting the needs of their compatriot. I agree with this and believe governments should pay attention to the demands of their society.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement?

Printed newspapers and books will not become a trend in the future, because there will be online versions of them, which are efficient and economical. I strongly agree with the stated issue, because as time goes by, people will choose the instant activity that will save much time and be free of charge.

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Government investment in the arts ,such a music and theatre, is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent agree with this statement?

The government has spent an amount of money for inhabitants' services as well as entertainments in nowadays. While I agree that it is important to budget the public services, I personally do not consider focusing on arts is a waste of money.

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Now a alot of people in college are doing academic study. We should encourge them to learn vocational skill ( like plumbers and electricity). Do you agree or disagree.?

Along with the development of the modern era, when people tend to acquire life-skills not only hard but also soft skills, it is very essential for them to learn about particular abilities to support their daily life. Having such capabilities to deal with the technical issues related to domestic errors such as electricity or water resistance are necessary. Thus, I completely agree that students in higher education should empower themselves not only with academic but also vocational abilities due to two major reasons. The rationales will be elaborated on through this essay.

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It is easier for wealthy people to maintain good health than it is for people who do not have large amounts of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

IN CONTEMPORARY SOCIETY IS WIDELY BELIEVE THAT THE HEALTH SHOULD BE MANTAINED BY INDIVIDUALS, SINCE IT PLAYS EXTREMELLY ROLE FOR THE HUMAN BEING. IN THIS STATEMENT, I WILL SHOW THE REASONS WHY I DEFENITELY BELIEVE THAT IT IS HARDER FOR POOR PEOPLE TO KEEP ITS HEALTH IN A GOOD CONDITION IN COMPARISSON FOR THOSE WHO ARE WEALTHY.

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