IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 827

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think hard working and determination lead to the success. Others feel that money and personal appearance is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a common discussion among folks that achievements are due to industriousness and steadfastness, while some thought that it is because of having huge sums and a person’s look. In this essay, I will highlight both sides’ arguments along with examples and personal views.

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Discuss advantages and disadvantages of children to make own choices

People make various kinds of decisions in their life that might have negative and positive effect. Children are encouraged to make decisions according to what is right for them and it can have some pros and cons for them. In this essay, we will elucidate merits and demerits of making their own choices in the following paragraphs.

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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the cause? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In my opinion, more people will explore different places in the future, due to the access to travel is even more easier for everyone, such as, you can travel by car, airplane, bus, bike, it is up to you. We need understand that the world is not just our city, our community or simply our country.

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In the past, the role of a teacher was to provide information. Today, students have access to a lot of information. There is, therefore, no role for teacher in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?

Early twenty-first century majority of the admission gain their knowledge from their teachers, but the modern world has totally changed due to the invention of information technology,it has taken number one place among the vast majority of students in the world, therefore,I mostly agreed that in current education ,system part of teachers involvement has been reducing significantly.but I also believe the learning styles vary from person to person and also some parts of the world teachers are still playing a major role ,especially in third-world countries.

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nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties having enough sleep what are problems caused by lack of sleep? what can be done about this lack of sleep?

In this contemporary era, people are of the notion that they are having difficulty in sleeping which are due to various reasons. In this essay, we will elucidate the reasons in detail with relevant examples in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why?

Some people believe that country investment in developing path system could have more flaws, while others suppose that enhanced public transport structure is more useful. In my opinion, more finance should be involved in increasing the number of buses, subways and trams, than promoting better options for personal autos.

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Some people believe that educating children altogether will benefit them. Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special courses. Discuss those two views.

Some people believe that it is beneficial when all children are taught altogether whereas other people think they should educate separately, I will discuss both scenarios and provide my perspective.

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Human interaction in the early stages of life is utterly necessary because it helps children develop a wide range of skills. In this framework, friendships allow kids comprehend personal boundaries and enhance their solving problems skills, for example. I firmly agree that studying with a group of students in a school can be more beneficial for the pupils than learning at home. In this context, this essay will discuss the boons of face-to-face learning with the pitfalls of online study.

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Nowadays , distance- learning programs have gained in popularity , but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, most universities provide distance education to students. It is a great option for the ones who are working professionals and can't attend live classes due to their jobs. Online learning is common nowadays on various other platforms as well like Udemy, Linkedin etc. Consequently, in this essay, I will discuss its pros and cons and will share my opinion on this as well.

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Most countries want to improve the standard of living through economic development, however, others think social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

The majority nations in the world desire to increase their living standards by expanding their economies, but some worry that doing so could destroy societal value namely morals value, people health and environment

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Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature and history of their own coun- try, rather than the literature and history of other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

History is the important part of every nation, as it help to connect their citizens to the past. However, there is discussion between masses about pupil learning, that the need to know only about their own country history rather than others. I am partial to this notion and I will discuss about this in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think the government should pay for healthcare and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion?

There are argumentative conceptions heating a debate over the responsibility of the government for its member. While some hold a strong view that it is necessary for the government to provide financial support for healthcare and education, the opposite makes a statement that whether to bear responsibility for authorities. I would contend that the state should support financially partial of these fees but not all.

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In many countries, crime is increasing. What are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

In most countries in the world crime rate is becoming pervasive. I believe that it is triggered by several factors, not only individual-characteristic but also financial factors. In the forthcoming, paragraphs I will discuss both causes and propose measures to widen job opportunities and free psychological counselling to curb the crime rate.

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Some people think that money is a one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?

Many people believe that much money is a major reason for happiness. But I don't think that people can be happy without money in their lives now, therefore so many proof to it.

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More developing countries are given aid from international organziations to help them in their development plans. Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinio

In this day and age,it is widely recognized that the majority of companies are assisting to the less economic nations for improving of their infrastructure and living standards.However, certain section of civilians think that the financial support is paramount,but another citizen thought that more practical help and valuable suggestion are very significant.In the forthcoming paragraphs,i will discuss both the views and eventually i will provide my opinion.

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Some people think employers should not care about the way employees dress but the quality at work. To what extent do agree or disagree?

In this contemporary epoch, a number of individuals opine that employers should not care about the way of their dress code, nonetheless,the quality at work. I deem that wearing uniform and non-uniform codes are equal advantages towards employees such as loyalty, cooperation and so on.

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In many countries people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways,what are the causes and how can it be solved?

There is increased rate of health issue that are related to people’s lifestyle. In this essay,

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In some countries, boys and girls are educated in different schools rather than in the same school. What are the advantages and disadvantage of this?

We all are well informed about the fact that there is diversity in languages, races, cultures around the globe. However, most are unaware of the fact that there is diversity in the structure of educational institiues and their regulations around the world. It is observed in some countries that boys and girls are educated in different schools or colleges while educational institues of some other states opt for both the genders to study together.

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Some people think history has little or nothing to offer, while others say the study of the past helps us understand the present. Discuss both the viewpoints and give your opinion.

The revolution of technology in recent times drove people to consider some subjects to be irrelevant to the current needs of the world. One of the subject which is under heavy criticism is history. While some preceive that study of history keeps people connected to their culture while some believe that it is not the most intriguing and reliable subject.

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In some developing countries it is difficult to get good teachers to work in rural areas which can have a negative impact on the education of children in those rural communities. Why do you think good teachers do not want to work in rural areas in developing countries? What could be done to solve this problem?

In many developing countries, survival has become very difficult in rural areas due to unavailability of basic facilities. One of the examples is absence of good teachers in educational institutions. Although this a serious problem, measures can be taken to resolve this issue.

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