IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 829

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Women have the capability and the skills to take on leadership roles, yet they are not offered these positions. What is the root cause of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

In this era of globalisation, women have enough capabilities to be a leader, yet they are not offered in this postition. From my personal point of view, women are to emotional when dealing with problems and thus they are not suitable to lead certain group. This essay will further elaborate the reasons and solutions upon this matter.

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Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Argue for your point of view on this topic

Globalization refers to the integration between people, companies and governments on a global scale,many people assert that this phenomenon has a positive effect, while the rest of the people are against it .Both views will be discussed below.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some cultures, owning a house is a prominent purpose for a large group of folks and they prefer to purchase a house rather than being tenants . I see this phenomenon as a logical decision and in this essay I will scrutinize various angles of this concept.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion

One of the most widely discussed issues nowadays is sport complexes. It is undeniable that sport has beceome an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement on whether sport facilities providing should be for only to train top athletes or for everyone. Places like public gyms or fitness centres.

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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The technological advancements in the 21st century have been beyond our wildest expectations, and because of the phenomena such as the IT revolution, and globalization, the world has converged into a single geography. There are certain benefits and drawbacks to this, which will be enlisted in this essay, and finally concluded by a recommendation.

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Many people believe that lecture halls have been replaced by online learning. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The trend of having instruction online has been very significant and has been substituted with face-to-face interaction in the classroom as viewed by several schools of thought and in my opinion, I do agree with the motion put across. I shall elucidate my viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is it a negative or positive development? Give your explanation using some relevant examples from your experience.

Without putting the child under too much pressure he won't succeed in life and learn new things. This is the reason why parents nowadays put a lot of effort on their children. Therefore, this for sure is a positive thing to do.

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You live in a small town of 10,000 people. A large green area in the centre of town is undeveloped. The city has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like to have built in that area. Option A: Shopping Complex: This shopping mall would include restaurants, a large supermarket, and a movie theatre. Option B: Recreational Park: This park would include a sports complex, a large green area, and a small petting zoo.

While I do see the benefit of a shopping complex, I believe the recreational park option is a better choice because it helps improve both the mental and physical state of the citizens of Burton.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many countries are still developing countries and rely on the rich countries by gaining money from them. However, this method can't solve poverty problem. I'm agree with that point. The developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. There are several reasons support my poinion.

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Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The prices of the food were the most important factor influenced some people while choosing their meals. However, other groups were interested in different parts of the food produced process.

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Nowadays many people communicate using social media.Discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Social disclosure has completely changed how communities communicate with one another in today's modern world. It is a helpful tool for staying in touch with friends and family, but it also has both good and bad effects on society. The benefits and weaknesses of using social account for connection will be covered in this essay.

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People are surrounded by advertising. This both affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays people spend more and more time on their phones or computers where a person could encounter a lot of adverts. These promotions have become influential on people’s choices and way of living. These influences could be negative as well as positive and in this essay I will present the reasons why.

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on TV in order to reduce the amount of violent crimes in the society. Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern days crime rates in some countries are at the point were arrest of the criminals does not seem to help as much as it did in the past. Therefore, the governmentgoverment are trying to fight the problem from its core. Some of them believe that displayed violence in movies or television is the part of the issue that is why they are debating on restriction of violence showed for the society. In my opinion it is not necessarynessecerry and in this essay I willi will try to justify it.

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Nowadays, more people are spending less time at home. Why do you think this happens? What effect does this have on individuals and society?

In the advanced era that started at the beginning of 21 century, both workers and students have tight schedules leading them to stay longer out of their homes. Such an effect of too seldom spent time at home may bring less care to people in their housing, including their family, and possibly unrecognize or not know each other's names between neighbours.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, people do the workout anywhere when they have time. Most people believe that doing exercise with a personal coach gives higher results for individuals. Personally, I believe this is a positive way of body development, and in this essay I will propose some reasons why people should hire trainers.

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Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think the changes have been very positive, while others believe they have been very negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion

In recent decades, due to many factors such as technological developments or globalisation, the lifestyle in current has changed completely, compared to the past. Although some people suggest that it affects the world negatively I strongly believe that such modifications of modern lifestyles allow individuals to live in a better world. This essay will discuss this view by using examples to support ideas and demonstrate points.

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Some People Think It Is Better For A Country’s Economy For People To Spend Money While Others Believe It Would Be Better For People To Save Money Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In today's inflation era, it is a debatable issue whether to splurge money or save money.There are few folks who are firm believers of the fact that the cash should be spent as it helps boost country's economy while others oppose this notion and promote saving. In the following paragraphs, both the arguments will be discussed and a logical conclusion will be provided at the end.

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You live in a small city. A local internet service provider is planning to launch 5G technology in your area. Company is conducting a survey to know public opinion Option A: Company should launch 5G for better communication Services.

I strongly believe the introduction of 5G to the City of Derby is a welcoming development that is crucial and helpful to our city in several sections and ramifications, and also other advantages out weight the disadvantage which can be generally seen as the increase in bills.

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Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?

It is considered many families tend to do whatever their teenagers want them to do and fulfil their requirements easily. This essay will highlight some points which are inappropriate for their children such as undervaluing the parents' respect and could have negative outcomes in the future like being unable to develop in work fields.

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In some countries, many people choose to educate children at home by themselves instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Education nowadays plays an important role in modern society. It is common to see parents sending their children to school instead of tuition at home. Some people believe that kids should be educated in an academic institution while others oppose that they should be coached at their house. From my point of view, although home-based tutelage has some advantages to a certain extent, it has more negative impacts on the next generation.

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