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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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People are surrounded by advertising. This both affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays people spend more and more time on their phones or computers where a person could encounter a lot of adverts. These promotions have become influential on people’s choices and way of living. These influences could be negative as well as positive and in this essay I will present the reasons why.

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on TV in order to reduce the amount of violent crimes in the society. Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern days crime rates in some countries are at the point were arrest of the criminals does not seem to help as much as it did in the past. Therefore, the governmentgoverment are trying to fight the problem from its core. Some of them believe that displayed violence in movies or television is the part of the issue that is why they are debating on restriction of violence showed for the society. In my opinion it is not necessarynessecerry and in this essay I willi will try to justify it.

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Nowadays, more people are spending less time at home. Why do you think this happens? What effect does this have on individuals and society?

In the advanced era that started at the beginning of 21 century, both workers and students have tight schedules leading them to stay longer out of their homes. Such an effect of too seldom spent time at home may bring less care to people in their housing, including their family, and possibly unrecognize or not know each other's names between neighbours.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, people do the workout anywhere when they have time. Most people believe that doing exercise with a personal coach gives higher results for individuals. Personally, I believe this is a positive way of body development, and in this essay I will propose some reasons why people should hire trainers.

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Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think the changes have been very positive, while others believe they have been very negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion

In recent decades, due to many factors such as technological developments or globalisation, the lifestyle in current has changed completely, compared to the past. Although some people suggest that it affects the world negatively I strongly believe that such modifications of modern lifestyles allow individuals to live in a better world. This essay will discuss this view by using examples to support ideas and demonstrate points.

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Some People Think It Is Better For A Country’s Economy For People To Spend Money While Others Believe It Would Be Better For People To Save Money Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In today's inflation era, it is a debatable issue whether to splurge money or save money.There are few folks who are firm believers of the fact that the cash should be spent as it helps boost country's economy while others oppose this notion and promote saving. In the following paragraphs, both the arguments will be discussed and a logical conclusion will be provided at the end.

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You live in a small city. A local internet service provider is planning to launch 5G technology in your area. Company is conducting a survey to know public opinion Option A: Company should launch 5G for better communication Services.

I strongly believe the introduction of 5G to the City of Derby is a welcoming development that is crucial and helpful to our city in several sections and ramifications, and also other advantages out weight the disadvantage which can be generally seen as the increase in bills.

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Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?

It is considered many families tend to do whatever their teenagers want them to do and fulfil their requirements easily. This essay will highlight some points which are inappropriate for their children such as undervaluing the parents' respect and could have negative outcomes in the future like being unable to develop in work fields.

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In some countries, many people choose to educate children at home by themselves instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Education nowadays plays an important role in modern society. It is common to see parents sending their children to school instead of tuition at home. Some people believe that kids should be educated in an academic institution while others oppose that they should be coached at their house. From my point of view, although home-based tutelage has some advantages to a certain extent, it has more negative impacts on the next generation.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many opinions agree that it is important for experts namely doctors and engineers devote their career in the country in which they used to train . Meanwhile , others argue that they should be given chance to work in everywhere they want .

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People living in large cites today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

Day by day, the population in the large cities increase and the residents pay the cost of the resulted vital issues like traffic congestion , air pollution and insufficient vital services. In my opinion, the government should effort to promote people leaving back to countryside.

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Some people think that all University students should study whatever they like. Others belive that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss these both view and give your own opinion.

A sizeable number of individuals are of the view that tertiary institutions should allow students learn courses of their preference whereas some are of the perspective that studying valuable courses will be of great significance in the future including aspects of science and technology. In my opinion, I do agree with the latter school of thought and disagree with the former. My view points will be elucidated in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Today’s younger generation is becoming unhealthy, list down the reason for it and how can you resolve this issue.

The younger generation today is becoming increasingly unhealthy, and there are several reasons for this trend. One major reason is the sedentary lifestyle that many young people lead. With the rise of technology and social media, many youngsters spend long hours sitting in front of a screen, which can lead to a lack of physical activity and exercise.

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Some people today feel that physical money will no longer be used in the future. Others feel it will still have some uses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

These days, it is believed by many that the utilization of the traditional ways of paying would vanish in the few upcoming years. However, others discern that they would be of some use. I firmly believe that digital currency would grow to a certain extent without the disappearance of the tangible one.

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Many people believe that learning a foreign language is a very difficult task. What are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language? What is the best way to overcome them?

It is very common for people to experience difficulties learning a new skill that they are not used to it, especially if the skills are inherited from where they were born. On of the example of this skill is a foreign language. In this essay, I will give some reasons why learning other languages can be difficult and how to make it easier to learn.

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when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

In this modern era, the elderly tend to live with other old people in an elder care facility with nurses available to look after them. This facilities definitely need money to keep services running and most likely the source of fund comes from the government. Others suggest that the families of these elders are the ones who are responsible for the fees. There are valid opinions on both sides which I will explain below.

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Today level of sress at the work place are increasing trmendously. What are the causes? what are the problem can create?

Stress at the workplace is a harsh reality these days, however, stress is much more than just a few hard moments these days. It is giving birth to certain diseases. This essay will discuss why is this happening and what are the drawbacks associated in the forthcoming paragraph.

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Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The current development of robots plays significant roles for human’s future while there are some controversies which they might be disastrous for human race. There are valid opinions on both sides which I will discuss below.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is certainly true that economic growth is necessary. The main reason is that it can lead to increased job opportunities, high wages, and improved standards of living for citizens. One good illustration of this is America - one of the strongest countries in the world, which is extremely popular with modern society and well-paid workers. Another reason is that it is also beneficial for governments to have greater tax revenues. For example, the average tax rate of a normal worker in the USA face to is about 24,8% in 2022, this is not a humble amount compared to other countries.

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More and more people are opting for readymade food instead of freshly cooked food. Does this practice has more advantages than disadvantages? Discuss.

The phenomenon of some people think that readymade food would completely replace the freshly cooked food as our normal diet has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I personally believe that this living pattern would bring us more disadvantage than benfits.

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