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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

A lot of people have difficulties getting enough sleep and I can relate. In our modern world, there are a lot of negative factors that can influence on our sleeping behaviour. On my point of view, the first and the main problem is a blue light from our smartphones, laptops, TV screens, iPads, etc. There were a lot of different experiments that showed the negative influence of using devices before getting sleep. The solution is to avoid looking at the screen before two hours when you are going to the bed. Also, try to leave your phone in another room. It will help you not to touch it after every received notification. Mode "Do not disturb" can help you as well.

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism of their teachers. Others think it will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In the age of modern century, education became a heated topic. Some individual hold the belief that we should provide an incentive for student to give remark or condemn their teachers while others disapprove of these actions. This essay will discuss both view and give my personal opinion

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impacts of aging population

The duration of life time has increased because of advanced facilities in modern world. This can lead to several issues like overload on medical care , but that can be tackled by adopting several measures like introducing pension schemes and improving health care facilities.

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Nowadays for many people the Internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in the future and what is your opinion?

these days people have different views that internet takes the place of consistency books. In my point of view that regard of the many threats that all books are strong in the future as it was in the past.

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it is important for people to take risks, of in their proffesional lifes and their personal lifes.

Many people advocate that, risk-taking is essential whether it concerns their professional life or private life. I agree with this statement. Despite the fact that, a risky decision may cause short-term setbacks, advantages greatly overweigh disadvantages, as I believe that it is not possible for one to have a prosperous life without it.

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some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centres is for privately owned vehicles to be banned, others however think this is not a realistic solution.

Living in the modern era is always fascinating to other people who lived in undeveloped countries. The high life of developed cities demands complete infrastructure where there is no issue of energy crises as well as travelling problems. Following are the key points to highlight the causes for this issue.

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a result of electronic technologies for instance the computer and television

As a consequence of electronic technologies for instance the computer and television, individuals do less physical exercises, and this is having a negative impact on their health. In this essay, I am going to explain both positive and negative sides.

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modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. this has have negative effect on their social lives.

Contemporary shapes of imparting namely email including messaging have decreased the quantify of time people pay out meeting with their friends, this has have a negative impact on their social existence. I strongly opine that, messaging and email can not influence on people's life and their relationships, cause of social medias, people can communicate with each other, even if, between them is a long distance.

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nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life. what are the reason? what are the effects on society and family life?

Currently, the number of men and women who make a decision to have a toddler later in their life increases significantly. This trend has many reasons such as the economic crisis moreover, a rising average of old is a negative aspect of that. In this essay, I intend to explain the reason and effects of that in society and family.

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Once children start school, teachers become a more important influence on children's intellectual and social development than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I partially disagree with the statement that teachers become a more important influence on children's intellectual and social development than parents once children start school. While teachers play a crucial role in a child's academic development, parents continue to be the primary caregivers who shape a child's overall development.

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Many think that religion should be taught in schools while others think it should be avoided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is increasing number of arguments that religion education should be promoted , while others believe it should be prevented. This essay will discuss both notion along with my opinion.

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These days many children spen a lot time playing video games and many parents feel this is very negative. Do you agree or disagree?

In modern times an increasing number of children are exposed to technology, not only for completing their schoolwork, but for playing digital games either offline or online. This has become a point of concern for many parents. With alarming risks involved in kids engaging in such games and the amount of time spent on computer games, it is with merit that guardians are concerned.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, the museum has become one of the most popular destinations for the tourism industry. Since then, many of them adopt an amount of money as entrance fees for visitors, in contrast, many of them do not have visiting fees. In this essay, I will explain in detail why I believe the advantages of taking money from regular people are more than its drawbacks.

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A report indicated that many children between 7 and 11 years old watch television and/ or play video games too much. How does the problem affect? what measures can be taken control of?

Electrical devices are present in our lives , they are used when needed. We find children using it when playing or entertaining themselves. However, it has some negative things. This essay will examine problems of the entertainment devices. Many of kids from the age of 7 to 11 spend a very long time entertaining themselves and wasting time. First of all, watching TV and playing video games like PlayStation affects eye health. Many child wear glasses. Second, they get back pain from sitting for long hours playing. Finally , due to this problem, they have to stay away from their friends in the school environment. There are many solutions or procedures for each problem. First , set a time in the day for the kids to watch TV or play video games. But only two hours a day are set. The second is to identify group fun activities between children, and parents such as painting , playing Uno and making a healthy sandwich. Also, the mother can set a day to visit their ...

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The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure,business and commercial purpose around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights? Do you think flight should be texed more?

When compared to what was used as the most effective modes of transport 100 years ago, it is obvious that the number of flights has increased much in term of travel purposes and in a wide range of the destination. In this essay, I will outline the main benefits and drawbacks of flight increment and explain why it must be taxed more.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language Is In order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Learning a second language gives a merit opportunity including augmenting communication skill, knowledge of different culture and so on. Meanwhile, some folks opine the reasons for those who learn foreign language with the aim only to be able to travel or to work in overseas country. In this essay both sides of the debate will be explained and in my point of view, there are many reasons to learn another language besides to be capable of living in non-native state.

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The lone chart below information on the satisfaction with education system in five different countries from 2010 to 2010.

The line graph provides data about how the height of satisfaction with the education system in Australia, Japan, Germany, Brazil and the USA changed, over a 20-year period, starting from 1990.

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Not long ago, people stored information in books. These days, people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The rise of the internet has revolutionized the way people store and access knowledge. While traditional books were once the primary source of advice, the internet has become the go-to platform for learning, research, and communication. However, like any technological advancement, the shift from books to the internet has both advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, we will explore these pros and cons to determine whether the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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mojdeh, 10:03 AMSome people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

In these days, experiencing other countries is an interesting activity among young people. There are two main ways to do this: traveling abroad and watching TV and the internet. Many people said that visiting other nations is abundant because TV and the internet provide all the information you need.

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The United Nations recently celebrated its 70th anniversary. What benefits has it brought during this time? Do you think the UN will last another 70 years?

UN, this giant international organization has been established since the end of the second world war and in recent years it has become a mature 70-year-old elderly creature. From more than half of the century, this global association has been trying to resolve national conflicts peacefully and expand welfare, health and tranquility all around the world. In this essay, firstly the advantages of UN existence will be counted and then we will shed light on remaining of this organization in the future of current modern world.

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