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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Why people who leave school are more successful compare to those who complete their studies. Give reasons why they are more successful and what is require to be successful.

Some people think that people more successful in life are early school leavers, the others may argue that different ways. This essay will discuss possible points of view and explain deeper reasons.

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some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools . others, however, believe taht boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed by some that a university degree can bring prospective work, while others think that it is better to skip university time and directly start to build a career. In my opinion, there are some jobs which require academic knowledges, but also there are others where more important long work experience then university background. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.

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Some people believe that students should be taught International news as a subject at schools. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people think that there should be a international journalism subject in their education.Other beleives that this will waste their child precious time.I would agree with this statement because every child has a freedom to choose. I would like to express my views by highlighting both the points and will also share my view in upcoming essay.

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Research shows that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people engage in unhealthy activities. What is the cause of this? What can be done

Undeniably, in modern era plenty of people doing activities, and they affect their health in good or bad ways on the body; however oceans of people are taking part in unusual activities. This article will deal with the trouble along with a solution

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Friends have more impact on the academic performance of students than their teachers do. Do you agree or disagree? Use details and examples to support your opinion.

In modern society, due to the global pandemic and technological developments, the need for online schooling has been increasing. This suggests that there are less interactions between students and teachers. Thus, I agree with the statement that friends have more influence on studious success of students than teachers do. I have several reasons to support my answer.

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some people think that it is a waste of time for high school student to study literature such as novel or poems.To what extent ddo yu agree or disagree

A section of society asserted that, to learn literature such novel and poems by high school-geors it's wastage of time.because, they believed students also can learn literature after the graduation l. I completely disagree with this statement owin of, they can enhance their vocabulary and mushroom their knowledge to learn literature.

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Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are wrong. Get ready to talk to an examiner about this issue.

"First impression is the best impression" some people believe that people can judge quickly to others characters which is look at firssst sight. Others think that first impression is not always correct and we cannot judge within a short period of the person's character. This essay will discuss it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Showing information is actual issue in our world where it has strong influence on people. There are various spheres of our life where information is more or less important for people working there on out of this. For this reason some people consider that it is good to share information while others think in opposite way.

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Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days health is a major concern and in the past few decades due to changes in living style and food consumption is drastically changed. Few people argued that it is the medical staff's responsibility to teach patients about their health. On the other hand, few believe that it is the patients' self-responsibility to keep themself healthy. I opine that it is doctors’ duty to educate people about their health. This essay will discuss this further in upcoming paragraphs.

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Technology has made man more social or less social Discuss both views and give opinion

In modern society, there is a controversial topic that technology makes people more social or less social. In this essay, I will examine this question from both sides of view and explain why I believe the former statement.

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Eating a balanced diet is the most important factor for a healthy life. To what extent do you agree?

Many people argue that the key to a healthy lifestyle is to consume equal portions of food every day. This essay completely agrees with this view, as the human body requires a variety of nutrients, which are delivered from the diet. However, the complete exclusion of a specific type of food source may lead to an alteration of normal physiology, therefore, a balance in eating is obligatory.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers. What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers, and what are some of the possible solutions?

A computer is a great innovation of science and technology become an integral part of our lives. Nowadays, a computer is widely used everywhere and learners became more dependent on computers . This essay will articulate some of the problems such as laziness and health issues and prepose some possible solutions to alleviate these.

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Traditional medicine, such as acupuncture and herbal remedies, is very popular in some countries. Those who practise traditional medicine claim that it is better than modern medicine in maintaining and improving health. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?

In the present times, medical science has made significant progress, especially in the pharmaceutical field. Therefore, traditional mendication is usually considered to be a thing of the past. Although most of the traditional medical remedies have been debunked, there are still some which contain authentic scientific reasoning and hence can not be completely discarded. In this essay, I will discuss the opinions suggested by both sides and explain why I disagree before my conclusion is reached.

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More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why is this? Who benefits from this, the communities or these young people?

Increasingly more young people from industrialized nations these days are travelling to underdeveloped parts of the world as volunteers to help with education and construction. While there are certain reasons that can explain their motivation, I personally believe that this phenomenon is of great benefit to both young people themselves and the communities they work in.

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Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the present-day world, crime is a serious problem that authorities are finding feasible methods to uncover such as taking advantage of technology's advances, which make the process of finding invisible marks easier. In my opinion, I strongly believe that modern equipment will provide the necessary tools to prevent felonies rising contribution by giving information on how new types of inventions aid to prevent them.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phones (cellphones) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

there is no doubt that online shopping these days is one of the most used trades on the internet. there are some believe that paying items with their mobile phone is more beneficial, others argue that this may cause a lot of problems to them. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of argument and explain my support to the former view.

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Men and women are capable of doing all jobs equally well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, we can see that people of both genders equally occupy various job positions. In my belief, although there might have been some physical limitations for women to carry out a number of heavy works, they could handle all of them because of four main reasons.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that, in recent days we have lot of options. I fully agree with the statement. It is true that we have so many alternatives in our regular life. Thus, I believe these options are making our lives a bit complex. These days, we have so many options in our every day meals. Not only that, if we want to buy any sort of things, we get confused due to major area of alternatives.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to young children).

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.A Few individuals think that all students university could study everything they want, while some people believe that they only be allowed to study future subjects science and technology. I personally with the topic , which students study whatever they like. We will look both sides in the course of the essay.

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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

Education is the one of the fundamental human rights for the children in order to succeed in professional life. Moreover, to make brighter career in particular field, primary schooling is mandatory to familiarize core concepts. It is agreed that learning should be provided to everyone without any cost regardless of their income. Analysing why tutoring should not be considered as leisure activity but as primary person freedom, as well as why it should not be charged heavily will be discussed with appropriate instances.

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