IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 901

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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These days, more and more people prefer to use shared transport such as buses, trams or carsharing applications on their smartphones rather than driving their own cars. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

in recent times, the number of the communities who have used the public transportation such as busses, travel cars, and trains are increasing year by year. there are some the advantages from using sharing transportation, such as decreasing the number of carbon dioxide and the cost in daily. although, there is the disadvantage when using the public transportation such as wasting time.

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Forests are the lungs of the Earth. Destruction of the world's forests amount to death of the world, we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many governments and communities are worried about climate change. This winter Korea is abnormally warm. Decades ago, it was not uncommon that people to walk over the frozen Han River which is located at the centre of Seoul. However, it's being impossible to see the frozen rivers in Korea. Many activists condemn companies and governments that don't try to reduce the emission of CO2. Also, they insist that we should stop harvesting wood for human needs.

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Some people believe that women should be able to join their country's army and police forces. Others think that only men should be allowed to work in these areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, society think that women can also attend in an army as well as police departman since so many people start to want gender equality for everything. However, others believe that those are the works which men can only work. In this essay, I will discuss both of the views and give a logical conclusion.

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For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn more money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Earning more money is one of the best motivotators to work harder in this hectic life. While I agree that it helps people meet the basic needs. I also believe that there are other crucial factors to work hard.

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Countries should not waste money exploring space. Instead, we should spend money and resources protecting our planet and solving the problems that we have on earth

Solving the world's problems and protecting our planet should be done first rather than spending finances and resource on space issue. I strongly agree with this opinion and will discuss in this essay.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, many countries over the world have the same problem of students' bad behaviour in schools, even sometimes accompanied by violence towards teachers or school staff. This issue is very complicated and doesn't have an immediate, permanent solution. However, in this essay, I will try to find the root of the problem and suggest possible solutions.

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The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

The two bar charts indicate information regarding the number of married and divorced people over a period of 30 years in America and the proportion in terms of the status of never married, married, widowed and divorced.

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BULLYING BEHAVIOR HAS BECOME A MAJOR PRLEM AT SCHOOLS. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS TO THE PROBLEM?

A major issue in the present day is bullying behavior at school. This essay will discuss why this is the problem and sugguest some practical solutions.

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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer.

Although, Some people think that it will not be needed to keep public museums and art galleries in this part of world because of new advance devices like computers, smartphone in which individuals can get information regarding history as well as some beautiful art creativity with the help such a devices. However, In my opinion, I do not support to this argument to a large extent and my position will be elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

The advance of new technologies give us the possibility to make purchases by just tapping a botton and some people that believes this will lead on the closing of shops in the towns and cities in the near future. I strongly believe that this is a reality that will happen as a result of this new way of living.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using cars?

With the advent of technology, the world is progressing faster with several technological advances that have made our lives easier. Over the past three decades, the possession of cars has rapidly witnessed an unequalled rise which has consequently led to the heavy congestion on roads. I strongly think that the above statement is very true. The government should take necessary measures to discourage people from using cars.

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The two tables below show statistics of workers of foreign and US birth in the United States last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The data illustrates the comparison between workers of foreign and US birth in the United States last year. Overall, despite the huge difference in size between the two groups, they showed quite similar patterns in almost every division, especially in the unemployment rate.

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Some people believe that teaching music in schools is a vital part of growing up and human experience whilst others believe that teaching music in schools is a waste of time and resources

The world is now facing huge environmental issues, climate change and the disappearing of flora and fauna around the globe is an alarming problem that must be solved. Unfortunately, the main responsible are human beings, we took over the world and through industrialization and haunting are the cause why the earth is suffering like no other time. Thus, we owe the earth the difficult task of make some changes in order to improve the life of the animals and increase their population again.

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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

In recent years, the extent of crime among young people who involved dramatically increased in most countries. The origins of this situation seem to stem from three factors, while several remedies appear to be open to us.

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Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some today contend that medical professionals should take charge of guiding the health sufferers. In my opinion, doctors have other prior responsibilities than only giving advice to patients.

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All universities should have an equal number of male and female students in each subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For my perspective i don't agree with this topic that all universities should have an equal number of male and female students in each subject. Since their can score good marks in subject. And it's not must to have same number of students. Students should only concenterate on studies rather than focusing. On male and female students for my view there should be seperate classes for male and female students.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The bullying phenomenon is spreading all over the world. This event usually consists of discriminations, violent behaviours or insults. Nowadays it is an important debate, which is worrying adults even more every day. In the modern society there are two shapes of bullying: within the internet or physical.

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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The education system has two options to offer if somebody wants to attend to school. The first of them is a private school and the other is a public one, which is usually more common choice for most of the people. In second option we are not required to pay any fees,that is because the government is funding such an institution. In contrary, in private once each student have to pay every mounth a certain amount of money. So if the non-public schools are reciving money from the kids, why the authorities are still giving them money as well. This essay will discuss that issue. Althought, in my personal opinion, I would say such practise should iemmidiately banned.

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Women are better leaders than men. Do you agree or disagree

There has been an an assertion by some people that women are better at leadership compared to men. Assessing this statement critically, I would strongly agree with it.

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Science tells us about the activities which are good for our health and others which are bad. Millions of people all over the world know this and still do unhealthy activity. Why do you think this is and what can be done to change it?

In this modern world, day by day, scientists invent new information about diseases, our body, good and bad effects of our daily routines. Though these innovations are very valuable for our lives, majority of the human-beings neglect these novel ideas which have been proved by observing. I suppose that, why people don’t pay their attention for these healthcare improvements and, what are the changes, we must do to increase the awareness to prevent the unhealthy activities.

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