IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 904

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of high school students having part-time jobs. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.

In this concurrent era, work is a necessity of life. There is a discussion going on, that many pupil like to do temperory work along with their studies. I will discuss both merits and demerits of this notion in forthcoming paragraphs.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise their products are new in some way

The new product is an important advertisement for companies recently. In my point of view, it is a drawback perspective to develop their business because creating a new product needs more budget and time for producing and advertising.

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Some experts believe it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The certain number of experts disagree with starting to learn an exterior language only at secondary school , they claim that it would be better if they begin it at grade school. In this essay, I will pay attention to both advantages and disadvantages of this statement, and compare them to find out which of them outweighs another one.

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some people say history is one of the most important school subject. Other people think in todays world subject like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

There some people who consider history as the major lesson to learn in school , while others give priority to science and technology . Although this essay will discuss bothe of these ideas , I am on the view that these two subjects are equally important in class rooms.

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A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause ? How might these problems to be reduced?

There has been a concern that a rise in the living standard in a nation is often good for cities instead of rural districts. Personally, lack of education resources in countryside and unbalanced incomes between both areas are the most serious problems, while increasing benefits and setting up occupation areas are two solutions to solve this development.

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More and more families are choosing fast food over home-cooked meals. What are the reasons for this and how can they be addressed?

Admittedlly, food is a necessity of life. There is a discussion going on, that number of families like to eat junk food more than homemade meals. The causes associated with aformentioned notion along with remedies will be enlightened below.

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Some people think that children of busy parents should be sent to day-care centres, while others believe that they should be cared for by their grandparents.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are two different views on who should take care of children whose parents are busy, one is that they should be looked after by day-care centres and the other is that they should be looked after by grandparents. In my opinion, I think it is best for the children's grandparents to care.On the one hand, some people say that these children should be taken care of by their grandparents. Firstly, the children will be able to bond with their grandparents, as they will have more time to spend with them, and the grandparents will be able to share their life stories with the children, so that they can get to know them better. Secondly, the children will be cared for more carefully because the grandparents will have more time and energy to spend on the children and the children will be cared for like a parent.

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Today, people's life expectancy is much higher than before. some believe that older people should continue to work. what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that average lifespan of human beings has increased with the advancement in It is irrefutable that average lifespan of human beings has increased with the advancement in medicine, leading to new discoveries and treatments, every day. I agree with the given statement that the elderly people should continue to work till a later age. I shall support my point of view in the upcoming paragraphs.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

making children recognize the difference between right and wrong at young age is important. In order to help them learn this distinction, punishment is necessary. However, In my opinion, while I belive that chilidren know how to differentiate right and wrong is significant, I disagree that helping children learn it by punishing is necessary.

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In some countries, it can be difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience. What do you think are the causes of this problem, and what measures could be taken to solve it?

There is no doubt that there are some countries that find it difficult to hire people over the age of 50 in their company at the present time, although they have great experience. By far, there are different causes and solutions for this problem. One of the causes is not being able to keep up with the conditions of the work, while one of the solutions is trying to make them have a job which is suitable for their age.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays certain amounts of museums are tend to require a payment for entrance.As I see,such system is devastating for humanity's enlightment whereas museums are being under the threat of no demand in visitors.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of difgerente cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music has great ability to get attention of people from all over the world..There are someone who believes that music is a best way to gather people without any discrimination of age and culture . I wholly endorse with statement because of two reasons

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The government should close companies that produce toxic waste materials without their own waste treatment facility in order to protect the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the government should abandon organisations which release poisonous wastes without having proper waste disposal facilities to keep the environment clean. I tend to disagree with this view. I am of the opinion that the government should not put a direct ban on firms releasing toxic pollutants. Ideas articulated further in this discourse will support my stand and at the same time highlight certain contradictory views that others in the society might possibly have.

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In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this?

Some times in a few points of the world, people are interested in knowing about the historical backgrounds of their residence place, While it is a strange question, but there are some reasonable rationales, that I will mention them in this essay.

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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

Parents are always concerned and protective about their children. Few folks allow their kids to do what they feel like and also agree to their demands. In this essay, we will discuss the reasons and consequence of this kind of parenting in the following paragraphs.

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Few countries think that people at the age greater than 30 can do things like vote for country, marriage, getting driving license etc… while most of the country oppose. What do you think?

It is universally accepted that, a man who are above the age 30 can do different things such as vote for country or marriage in the similar way getting driving license whereas, most of country are not agree with this view.I totally agree, with this notion that greater than 30 people can do everything for the reasone that life is long for living.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

No doubt, technology has changed the lives of people in different ways ,so many people assert that in upcoming years online publications will be replaced by printed ones.I completely agree with the notion , online materials will provide more benefits because of having reasonable prices and having advantages to the eco-system.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism out weight its drawbacks?

Nowadays, the majority of people all around the world spend their leisure time on travel and visiting world civilization heritage in different countries. There are variously culture and histories in the world and attract people to explore it. Tourism is a potential business and brings lucrative markets. In the mean time, tourism can also be detrimental if it is not managed correctly.

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As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that drivers should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays we witness powerlessly the increasing number of car and the consequential need to maintain the road systems. While some people argue that the government should be responsible for this commitment, others believe that drivers should pay for this. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favor of the latter.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Companies use the word 'new' to highlight products in their advertisement these days. There is a reason why they do this and I will give my reasons below. I would say that it is a positive development.

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