IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 907

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Unhealthy eating has a negative effect on both individuals and the society in which they live. Some people think that the government should tax unhealthy foods while others believe that a 'fat tax' is unfair and unnecessary. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

People have different opinion on either government should lay tax on junk foods or tax free because huge consumption of unhealthy diet leading to beginning of diseases. Nowadays, most of children looking on purged packet food as a daily routine instead of homemade items. The upcoming paragraphs has explained about impact of tax on unhealthy nourishment.

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Some people believe that in order to reduce crime, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion.

Some individuals think that to shorten crime rates convicts must have extended prison sentences, mean while others believe that there are other ways that can be done. In my essay I am going to open up this topic more. Starting with a discussion of why certain people believe that longer prison sentences will reduce crime, when others think otherwise, then followed by my opinion.

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Many governments spend a lot of money on art. Some people think this investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The question of whether to spend money on art or to invest them in healthcare and educational systems is extremely topical today, as so many countries are struggling with problem “how to raise the standard of living?”. Both sides of this argument will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.

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Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that we need to stick to a healthy lifestyle, which helps us stay mentally and physically strong. And the question of whether to establish laws that balance our diet or to leave this decision to society is extremely topical today. I tend to feel that law is one of the strongest ways of making public control their ratio.

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Due to the effect of globalization, the culture of some countries are influenced by others. Some people think this is a natural process. Others think this is a threat to cultural identity. What is your opinion about this?

It is believed by some people, that the cultures of many countries have been affected by the effect of globalization and it is a process of nature while others think that it is a danger to cultural uniqueness. In my opinion, I think that it is a natural incident that we are not capable of stopping, and at the same time it may results a threat to actual cultural events.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that these days the environment is suffering from crucial problems and we must pay attention to it .The question is what is the main cause of these issues is it the decreasing number of particular species of plants and animals or there is more vital problems? In this essay I am going to discuss both views and give my own belief.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is always argued by many people that the best way of securing a good future depends on graduating colleges or utniversities, however others believe that starting work after school is a better option. From my prespective, completing university is the most useful way in an academic career.

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Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent times our interactions, drugs and transport systems relies on machinery.Some people believes that our dependency on automation in these areas has pose a harmful problem.In my opinion, i disagree because technology has brought positive impacts to these fields rather than being harmful.This essay will highlight and explain further in the subsequent paragraghs.

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Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other people think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

There is no doubt these days some Childers can’t handle any kind of problem by themselves. The question is, it’s because the method of the parents commands them to do things? Or the teachers' way of teaching?

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is argued that some people believe cities should allow for places for graffiti while others think it should be stopped. I think that it should be accepted because of two reasons: human right to express feelings and opinions, and its beautiful design.

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Many people consider that the function of a building should be the primary consideration at the design stage

When considering construction, the whole process must be well organized and experts' ideas and knowledge put together with owners' ideas. Most individuals concerned about the usage of a building should be at the initial design level. I think it is important, because huge effort, commitment and budget will be worthfully in the end.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

"Nowadays, traveling to other countries is increasing dramatically, and most of the people belive that when someone wants to Start a new life in a foreign they Should respect and obey their traditions, I totally agree with this statement that when you go abrad the country you should be familiar with their customes and rules, while I partially disagree with this because of some religeous customes in other country.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Printed newspapers and books will not become a trend in the future, because there will be an online versions of them, which are efficient and economical. I strongly agree with the stated issue, because as time goes by, people will choose the instant activity that will save much time and be free of charge.

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Doctor recommend that older people should exercise regularly. However many of them do not exercise enough. What are the cause? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

Physicians recommend that senior citizens work out frequently, ,Nevertheless there are many older adults who do less exercise. There are certain factors that this could result in, ,however there are particular means of addressing them.

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Computer games are played by all children of different nationalities. But parents think that they are not very educational and are harmful. What do you think about.? Give opinions with examples.

It has been argued that their is many environmental problems that we have to face,while others says that the most issue is the extenct of special types of plants and animals. In my opinion, I believe that we have more serious issues ,which are more dangerous than the death of some animals.In this essay I will further address both sides and explain with examples.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

People have various opinions regarding a person is ingenious while he is born or every child can be instructed for being specialist in a particular area. In my opinion, through practice and determination, any child can become a successful artist or sportsperson.

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People say that success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

There are some debates about success and failure. Some people believe that, being successful is all about hard work while others prioritize the talent of the successful person. I personally agree that, the principal cause of being success is hard work and dedication. The following essay would explore both points and provide a personal opinion.

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Some people tend to take temporary jobs, for they have time to do other things. Do the advantage outweighs disadvantage?

In the modern era, working for a short time becomes popular. Some people believe that it has a plethora of benefits such as earning money fast when you needed urgently, rehabilitating your life in special cases and so on. However, there are arguments like low-salary, unstable life and no career promotion. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of one coin and draw my own opinion.

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Today a lot of different cultures and ethnic groups live together in the country. Do you think it is a positive or negative development ?

Nowadays, numerous people from different backgrounds like cultures and ethnics live in harmony in many countries. Therefore, there are several benefits which cause me stand on a position that earlier trend is a positive development. Then, in the following paragraphs, I will elucidate my perspectives.

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Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that have been scientifically proven to be bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern is gorvement should forbid food shops selling any products proven to be harmful for people’s health. However, there are a lot of bad food and drinks creating significant benefits for countries. In this essay, I will argue that this is unlikely to happen.

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