IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 910

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed

Self-employment is increasing these days with a lot of people choosing to pursue their interests independently than working for a company. Stress in workplaces and less salaries might be some of the major causes for the rise in this trend. Though, these look like some strong and meaningful reasons to quit working for a company to some extent, there are a lot of disadvantages.

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Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is considered that tourism industry is a major resource for country’s economy. However, some people think that this industry can cause negative impact on local cultures and country’s environment. I highly disagree with the second point of view.

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The death penalty is the best way to control and prevent serious crimes. To what extend do you agree?

It is commonly believed that criminals must be given death sentence in order to stop grave criminal activities. I agree with the given statement and there are two reasons why I think so and they will be explained in the next few paragraphs.

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International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel it is a positive trend but others don’t. Give your opinion

Nowadays, the international travels and tourism industry are the main sobject of debates in developed countries. Overseas travelers have many advantages, but it has got some disadvantages. This essay will highlight positive and negative aspects of global tourism.

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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays education system has been developed from a few yesteryears due to technological development in the education system. Same have been made positive and negative impacts on scholar learning. Due to this students are facing issues with their classroom attention. As well , low involvement in teaching also impacting the scholar understanding.

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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In order to persue a higher score in an exam, it is a controversial topic about which studying styles are the most successful method for learning. Some students are eager on a group study, whereas others prefers to individual study. In this essay, I will elaborate both viewpoints, which presumably I support the self studying rather than studying with others.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

It is argued by some educators that kids should be taught foreign language from primary level rather than a later stage. This essay is of the opinion that merits of this practise are worthy enough to neglect the drawbacks and the reasons will be elucidated further with examples.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam' How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

A Car is an incredible invention in the world. The amount of people who have their own car are steeply increased over these past thirty years which definitely affect to each countries' traffic. This essay will discuss about the fact that increasing car ownership leads to heavy traffic and suggest some policies for goverments to be able to encourage citizens to reduce using cars.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

In today’s modern world, immigration has drastically surged and one of the most common complication for migrant is lack of fluency in the foreign word which could further pose social and practical issue. I personally agree with the statement mentioned above as a lack of communication skills could lead to cultural shock and cause various mental health issues.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

It is argued by some commentators that kids should be taught foreign language since primary level rather than middle school level. There are several benefits and drawbacks to starting international lessons early, which will be further elucidated in this essay with examples.

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A person worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values such as honour, kindness and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly believed that today an individual's value is associated with his wealth and reputation in the society. Ancient traits like faith, goodness and self respect are no longer considered vital. I agree with the given statement and there are two reasons why I think so and they will be explained in the next few paragraphs.

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Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Children are the backbone of the country in the future, and if they have made a mistake. It's because they are still young to know what things are correct or wrong. Their parents should teach children about making decisions. To make them realize what the right things to do. The following paragraph will be discussing both views. Therefore, the conclusion will reach.

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Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people claim that it is more pleasurable and comfortable to watch a live event on TV. While I tend to agree with that idea, I would say that to be a part of one of those events is the best experience in one’s life.

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Some people believe time is money. Do you agree or disagree?

It is considered by many that value of time is equal to value of money.

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Most countries offer two education systems from which parents can select the form of schooling which most suits their own child. Compare and contrast State-run and privately-owned schools in your own country or in a foreign country.

In this modern era , education is playing a vital role in the life of every individual . Many nations provide two choices in the education system , guardians can choose a system from both of them for their children . There are many similarities and difference in those academic system

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In most successful organisations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers is important, other people say that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

People have different views about whether it is only communication between employers and staff member that leads to a successful business. While an effective interaction can provide several benefits, I believe that there are other factors that can make a company achieve success.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their life. Others think it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often argue that, there are some people who work their whole lifetime for a company. while other think that, changing job makes them more efficient. I am totally agree with first notion. In forthcoming paragraph I will explain both statements and give my point of view.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are some various points of view about positive or negative consequences of grouping people by music to clarified people cultures and ages. While there are some disadvantages to grouping people by music desires, personally believe the benefits are far more.

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Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people argued that television is handy to gain knowledge,however others believe that it is useful to spend your free time and entertain yourself,furthermore I strongly believe that tv can be the source to spend your time with your family and gather together after dinner for herbal tea,in this essay I will discuss both views in detail with relevant ideas and examples.

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: It is necessary for parents to attend parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?

The given topic is highly controversial . However , If a glance is taken at the pros and cons as this aspect , It is irrefutable to say that there are numerous a positive impact if parents take a parenting training course . So , I perceive that I agree with the statement and I hereby give the following arguments to support myself .

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