IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 911

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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the responsibility if bringing up children should be shared equally between father and mother

Father and mother are the founding stones for every child. Because both plays a pivotal role in nurturing their offspring. I completely agree with this statement.

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Some people say that the purpose of education for individuals is to be useful to the society, while others argue that the purpose is to fulfill personal ambitions of an individual. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Education is a big part of every person’s life. It is one of the fundamental steps to development and growth that enables individuals to acquire knowledge and certain skills. Some people believe that education serves to accomplish personal ambitions while others think that goal of education is to help society. In my opinion, academic knowledge can do both works.

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Some people say that having a lot of TV channels is good, while others argue that it reduces the quality of programs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 

TV can be met in every house. There are a lot of channels and people can switch between dozens of them for a long time. Although some people believe that it is a positive trend, I think that it can reduce the quality of programs.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to share freely. discuss both view and give your own opinion.

People support the idea that there are many positive views to share the academic knowladge such as, scientific research and business papers. Whereas, others argue that it is too crucial to public all sorces freely. In the following paragraphs, both views will be discussed in detail.

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Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money.  Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is every persons dream to travel around the world. Spending a lot of money on sightseeing and vacations around the world has become one of the favourite pastimes for most people. Although some people think that it is a waste of money, I think that experience gotten from travelling is worth the spent money.

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Some people say that public libraries should be free; otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the Internet allow easy access to resources. Discuss and give your point of view.

Reading stories told through black ink on white paper is one of the favourite pastimes of most people. For the millions of people around the world who love to read books, libraries are an important place. Many individuals think that people should have free access to libraries and books in it; however, others, including myself, believe that people should pay for libraries.

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In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

The process illustrates how plastic bottles have been recycled.

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Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation’s history. However, some people think they should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

The statement whether old buildings be protected because of their historical values or demolished and replaced with new buildings with many facilities has never ceased to provoke debates. Personally, I believe that maintaining some of these ancient buildings is essential, since these buildings have a wealth of historical values. However, not every building needs to be restored.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Majority of the time, advertisement has caught our eyes and persuaded us into buying the products. While some people said that it is becoming more common and that we had lost interests in. However, I still agree that if an advertisement has been done creatively and stood out from others, it will still serve their goal effectively.

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Many People aim to achive a blance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it, What are the causes of this? How to overcome this Problem?

It is irrefutable that in this contemporary era, In order to execute that there are many community's goal that equilibrium between work and lives, nevertheless only limited proportion of people success in it. This essay will look at the core reasons for this and propose some solid solutions.

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Some think that it is more important for children to engage in outdoor activities instead of playing video games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is vital that teenagers take part in outdoor sporting events rather than spending time on gaming consoles. This essay agrees with this statement because this trend will help children to keep fit and playing sports will make them better human beings. Firstly, outdoor activities are physically demanding, and when teenagers engage themselves in these events, will make them physically healthy. This is because taking part in outdoor events strengthens their bones and muscles. Therefore, it leads to children having a life free from diseases, such as being overweight. As an illustration, a recent study by Cambridge University found that children who take part in sporting events are more likely to live a healthy life than those who do not. Secondly, playing outdoor games will make children a better overall people when they become adults. This is because while playing group games, teenagers learn different traits like leadership, coordination and cooperation. These skills will ...

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First impressions are more important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing good job? To what extent do you agree?

There is a famous statement "First impression is the best impression" which is confidently true for interviews, few decades back with respect to the situations and compitation at that perticuler time periods but now I can strickly say qualifications and doing well is what that matter.

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Some think that the best way to stay fit is to join a health club or gym while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing staircases is enough. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed by some that the best way to stay fit is to join a gym or health club while others believe that everyday activity is enough to stay fit. It is my opinion that people have to join a gymnasium to remain fit. This essay will discuss the dissenting views on this subject while justifying my support for the need to join health club to remain fit.

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In the future,nobody will buy Printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

As time goes on, Newspapers will be outdated as every information individuals will need will be made accessible online at zero expense.

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The responsibility of bringing up children should be shared equally between father and mother

Father and mother are the supporting pillars for the child, both have the responsibility of raising their offspring equally between them.

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One part of people believe that they are allowed to make noise as they want, while another part think that it is better not to make noise in public places.

One part of people believe that they are allowed to make noise as they want, while another part think that it is better not to make noise in public places. This essay agrees that the amount of noise should be controlled. This essay will first look at what kind of problems can be because of noise and then discuss about why people should not make noise.

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One of the consequences of improving medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people support the idea that one of the reason why we have to improve medical technology and health care sevice is trying to make people live longer. From my point of view, even it may cause the future disceases, there are many positive sides for all citizen in this world.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.

It is often said that the funds should be allocated for the development of railways instead of roadways. I strongly disagree with the statement and this essay will discuss the reasons for my disagreement.

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It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about culture and people, because people can learn from books, films or the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

these days, online shopping is surprisingly much more famous owing to its easiness and comfortable. We can buy several things while we are sitting around inside our house. there are a lot of benefits of using this method of shopping, however, some drawbacks are influenced as well.

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Should people spend a lot on weddings and birthday parties

Parties are means of celebrating happy and memorable event with family and friends. Programs can be for different occasions such as birthdays and weddings etc.

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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

the responsibility if bringing up children should be shared equally between father and mother

Some people say that the purpose of education for individuals is to be useful to the society, while​ others argue that the purpose is to fulfill personal ambitions of an individual.​ Discuss both views and give your own opinion.​

Some people say that having a lot of TV channels is good, while others argue that it reduces the​ quality of programs.​ Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ​

Some people believe that it is good to share as much as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to share freely. discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of​ time and money. ​ Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that public libraries should be free; otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the Internet allow easy access to resources.​ Discuss and give your point of view.​

In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation’s history. However, some people think they should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many People aim to achive a blance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it, What are the causes of this? How to overcome this Problem?

Some think that it is more important for children to engage in outdoor activities instead of playing video games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

First impressions are more important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing good job? To what extent do you agree?

Some think that the best way to stay fit is to join a health club or gym while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing staircases is enough. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the future,nobody will buy Printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

The responsibility of bringing up children should be shared equally between father and mother

One part of people believe that they are allowed to make noise as they want, while another part think that it is better not to make noise in public places.

One of the consequences of improving medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.

It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about culture and people, because people can learn from books, films or the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

Should people spend a lot on weddings and birthday parties

Some people say that the purpose of education for individuals is to be useful to the society, while others argue that the purpose is to fulfill personal ambitions of an individual. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that having a lot of TV channels is good, while others argue that it reduces the quality of programs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 

Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money.  Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that public libraries should be free; otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the Internet allow easy access to resources. Discuss and give your point of view.