IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 937

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THE EDUCATION SYSTEM IS THE ONLY CRITICIAL FACTOR TO DEVELOPMENT OF A COUNTRY. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

The time of 21st century has witnessed of education development and technology. So, nowadays there are a number of different sectors available to develop a nation as compared to institutions. I disagree with the given statement and I will explain my point of view in the further paragraphs.

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Some people think the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, think there are better alternative ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, think there are better alternative ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Unemployment is a growing problem all over the world. What are the causes of this? What could be done to help tackle this issue? To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

In the recent modern world, the issue of unemployment is becoming more and more serious. Rapid changing industry structures, helped by the advent of the internet is the main driver of this serious problem. Also, unstable world economy due to the recent pandemic and wars are critical reasons as well. I completely agree with the idea that unemplyment is one of the most significant and growing world-wide issues and would like to propose some opinions on its causes and solutions.

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Across the world, local shops are closing due to losing customers to online competitors. What problems does this produce? And what solutions can you suggest to overcome them?

The online market has affected the local market around the world. This has resulted in problems such as job losses and creating a monopoly among a few companies. This can be solved by educating people to shop in the local and local market companies uniting together to get better prices. The advent of the online market has created a massive problem in the current job market. This new kind of trade has replaced human labour with high-speed computers etc. Traditional jobs such as salesman, cashier, janitor etc. positions have declined as there is no foot traffic in the local market. This has also resulted in the closing down of many businesses. Taking the example of the electronics segment in India, which has lost its 35 per cent market share to companies like amazon and Flipkart. Furthermore, the increasing trend of internet shopping has shaken the market dynamics by putting too much power in the hands of multinational companies and corporations. They can control market prices ac...

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communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication is short and basic. some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree?

In this burgeoning epoch of science and technology human dwells in a world that is perennially shaped by the latest trend approaches coming across the globe. whether regular use of short form is beneficial or not has certainly been a bone of contention. I totally agree with this notion.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Cashless payment is getting popular in recent years. It has been widely discussed whether it is a positive change or not. While there are disadvantages, I believe the advantages outweighs the disadvantages.

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IN THE FUTURE ROBOTS WILL DO MORE AND MORE JOBS INSTEAD OF HUMANS. DOES THIS DEVELOPMENT HAVE MOREADVANTAGES OF DISADVANTAGES?

Nowadays due to the technological advancement and varied developed devices lifes of people are getting more convenient compared to the past. Technological boom is apparently influencing humankind's live styles and performances. This leads to the phenomenon that furtherly robots will replace people's work. This essay will outline disadvantages of this concept and explore reasons and examples of it.

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Governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move from large cities to regional areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages？

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. This has more advantages or disadvantages

Nowadays work takes 40 hours of our life in a week, and it is important to work because in order to have a comfortable life and gain an esteemed position in society, we are required to have an occupation.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most debated issues these days is that people strongly believe that all university students should study whatever interests them. they think should be allowed for.

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Some people think new homes need to be built with private outdoor space such as A garden, yard, or balcony. Do you think this is more advantageous or more disadvantageous?

In this contemporary epoch,a number of individuals believe that newly constructed residences ought to include a dedicated outside spot, including a terrace, lawn, and backyard. I suppose there are far more major benefits to this system than downsides, notwithstanding a few minor problems.These essay will shed light on the valid standpoints for this claim.

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Some people think new homes need to be built with private outdoor space such as a garden, yard, or balcony. Do you think this is more advantageous or more disadvantageous?

• In our modern life, the majority of individuals believe that, new homes need to be built with personal outside areas such as a backyard, yard or veranda. I strongly believe that, there are a lot of advantages than disadvantages, because it is one of the most greatest ways of living a house with garden and balcony. In this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of constricting all homes with balcony, backyard and yards.

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In some countries, increasing number of health problems as a result of eating too much fast food.government should impose higher tax rate on fast food agree or disagree

In the contemporary era, there is a heated debate over the issue that many flok think that junk foods are the main reason for fitness disorders. To solve this problem, many people suggest that government should impose a high tax rate on fast food, so that the public could able buy them. I completely disagree about this notion and the following paragraph would highlight my perspective which leads to a logical conclusion.

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People can eat a wide variety of food that can be grown from other areas. As a results, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantage of this tend outweigh the disadvantage?

Thanks to developed transportation, many foods are exchanged and people enjoy various foods within their homeland. It may contribute people to less consume local foods. In my opinion, having foods regardless of origin could bring more benefits than negative aspects. This is because people could have meals in cheaper and more nutritional ways compared to the past.

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Some people believe that children should be taught a second language at elementary school. What is your opinion?

Many people believe that elementary school should give their students lesson about the second language. I agree to this statement because we are not losing anything or get any disadvantage when we were studying second language, instead it has a lot of benefit.

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People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?

Now people used to sleep less than they slept earlier. I think the main reason is faster rhythm of life. It most of all affects the person himself because of the worse health quality and productivity.

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Now a days, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before what are reasons ? what can employers do to make their life easier.

In today's present era, everyone is chasing name,fame and money. They want to fulfil their goal by doing work for a longer time, but it increases stress. Stress is a big problem, normal stress will be good but excessive stress invites many problems. This essay shall give reasons for causing stress in the workplace and also suggest some steps that employers can take to reduce it.

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Some people say that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's world, advertisement is everywhere to induce us for consuming more. Some people believe that advertisement has a huge success but other conflict this statement by saying that commercials are so popular and they no longer attrack us. This essay will explain the both sides of this discussion and provide examples.

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In many countries, people now wear western-style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

In the era of globalisation, communities are highly influenced by Western countries' attire instead of conventional apparel. However, In my ,opinion it is a positive development.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Using computers nowadays is very popular among people, especially kids. Some argue that this problem can harm children more than useful. In this essay, I disagree with this statement because the convenience of computers can outweigh the disadvantages.

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