IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 958

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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medical professionals such as doctors and nurses from poorer countries often migrate to rich countries. what problems arise from this situation? what measures can be taken to deal with it?

Nowadays, many people try to migrate from poor country to richer ones for various reasons, especially doctors and nurses. This situation seemed normal from the perspective of individuals, but has raised serious problems in the societies which those people emigrate.

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There are many different types music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

People move from one country to another country they need permission, but song can anywhere easily without barrier. Music is very important, and many types of music are exit in today world. This essay will explicate the importance of music and will give example ; also will explain the importance of traditional music.

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In some places, workers are required to retire at a specific age. In other places, workers can retire when they choose. In your opinion, should there be a mandatory retirement age for all workers?

Persons should not have to stop working at any particular age. I think it is unfair and unnecessary. Some people enjoy working, some others need to keep earning money, and need to have felt a pupose of life.

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Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Do you agree or disagree?

Homework and home-related tasks are two crucial aspects of the educational systems in the developed countries. While some families are trying to involve their child's homeworks as much as possible, I completely disagree with that opinion. I think, that approach results in some negative impacts on pupils, such as lack of independence and lower grades at school. In this essay, I will explain my view.

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news editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. what factors do you think influence their decision? Do we used to bed news ? would it be better if more good news was reported ?

In today’s world, the growing amount of news and information on media continues to influence public opinion. News editors are responsible for publishing news; however, political pressure, Target Rating Points (TRPs), and editorial bias could influence an editor’s decision. I think that for sanity to prevail, more good news should be published than bad news.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is widely argued that some people tend to accept an un appropriate situation, such as unsatisfactory occupation or shortage of money. However, the other people believe it is better to deal with them in order to improving such situations. In my estimation individuals should make effort to remedy bad situations.

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For some people, learning in a group is the most effective method while others prefer one-on-one instruction. Discuss both ideas. What is your opinion?

Every individual has different choice of leaning. For some people, it is better to group study while others prefer one-on-one instructions. The following essay will discuss why learning in a group is effective method and why one-on-one instruction is a good method.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are two views about whether adjusting a fixed and certain punishment for each crime or investigate and punish the criminals individually. This essay will discuss both views and in my personal opinion each offender should be considered as an individual and then have then punished.

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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that more people around the world prefer living in more developed cities, and this has ignited public debate about whether it is harmful to the citizens' health. Personally, while I disagree that all people will benefit from city life, I do believe the advantages of living in the big cities outweigh the disadvantages.

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The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever. Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary world, the internet has revolutionised the way people communicate with others, and changes the education systems and various other parties. Therefore, today humans believe that Internet is the mine to get information. Many people's opinions is that usage of the world wide web should be limited and the opposing party consider that it should not be controlled no matter what happens. However, I agree with the latter part as misuse of internet can lead people to serious consequences.

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Some people say that people should keep all their earnings and don't have to pay taxes to government. Do you agree or disagree with then statement

In recent world, goverments tend to raise tax rates and this is becoming a global issue particularly in developed countries. There is a school of thought that we should elimiate taxes. I am in an opinion that governmental taxation should be continued. This can be supported by analysing huge negative impacts it creates from a public service deterioration and a lack of resouce to protect country from outer threats point of views.

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watching television has affections children.Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays , Television is the most common gadget watched by each and every family , spending time with television some people believe cause negative effects television in children , While others argue that it is advantages outweigh the disadvantages . This ,essay will be considered in the following paragraph.

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Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers provide the best care. Discus both views and give your own opinion.

In modern times, many families have both parents working due to which parents are usually not able to completely take care of their children.They leave their children with grandparents to take care of, while others also choose the option of childcare.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be usefull in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Under the advanced technology, more subjects are opened for cultivating students to engage in the updated and useful industries. This is believed that undergraduates studying for knowledge in high technology are the best way to their development. I can not agree with those views, as every student should choose their field according to their interest.

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Should government make decisions about people’s lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

People have contrasting views, whether the authority or individual chooses their way of life. In my opinion, however, I think, if the former selects some of the ideas of living and let the latter decide the rest of their life.

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whatching television has affections children.Do you agree or disagree.

Every household in today's developing countries has new gadgets and one of them is the television. It is watched not only by young children but also by old people. It has different channels and shows and each one is for different ages. It agree with above opinion. However, like everything has a black side, it also has a negative side. In this essay , i will discuss the positive and negative effects of watching tv.

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Some people believe that their teachers should not give school children homework, others believe that homework plays an essential role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that their teachers should not give school children homework, others believe that homework plays an essential role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A controversial topic is in the discussion about who should teach children to be exemplary members of society. However, some individuals defend that parents are totally responsible for developing them to face the world. Others, on the otherwise, support that schools must invest more in tools to develop these little kids for having applied to strong minds. Let’s have a conversation about both sides.

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Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

It is often stated that famous TV programs made for mass entertainment should focus on telecasting crucial problems that are prevailing in society to catch the attention of key decision–makers easily so that they can take initiative to solve the issues. According to my opinion, I strongly agree this viewpoint as this approach may help to eradicate a few prominent social issues like brain drain and noise pollution. This essay will illustrate the reasoning behind my agreement with relevant examples.

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Loneliness is an increasing problem in many societies, especially among the elderly. Why is this? How might it be remedied?

loneliness is a serious issue in many societies specifically for elder or senior citizens. This is because nowadays kids leave their parent's homes after finishing their studies for their livelihood . Many children are opting for relocation to newer locations in search of better opportunities. Because of this parents are forced to live alone and face loneliness.

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