IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 969

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Mostly the popular issue in metropolitan areas is traffic jam since many people prefer to live in this place to get better life. Because of this issue there are any two problems that give bad impact in the earth , but there have two solutions to tackle these problems.

Mostly the popular issue in metropolitan areas is traffic jam since many people prefer to live in this place to get better life. Because of this issue there are any two problems that give bad impact in the earth , but there have two solutions to tackle these problems.

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Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this and suggest solutions

The world has been witnessing few significant changes in youngsters life. Most of them egazing toward the bad offends,which effect in rising of misdeeds among metropolis.This eassy will articulate causes as well as solutions in looming paragraphs.

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People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?

Advertisements influence the human being drastically in the last three decades .It provides a strong impression on our lives, as most of the time we are surrounded by ads. I believe that, it has ample of positive impacts when we compare it with the negatives.This essay will discuss the effect of Advertisements on humankind in either way, whereas there are high advantages as compared to demerits.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Apart from making profit, firms must play an important role in social responsibilities. In my opinion, I agree with this statement as corporate gain money from society, therefore it should also returned back it to society.

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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, education and training are better solutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are several crimes happening all around the world. Most countries use imprisonment as a punishment for people who are identified as a defendant by law . Some countries have good facilities for prisoners and some countries do not contain the basic facilities for prisoners. Most countries try to rehabilitate and empower prisoners during their jail time by introducing different pathways. There are a lot of people who have committed crimes because they have financial problems fulfilling their daily needs. In my opinion education and training provide the prisoners to empower their lifestyle and prevent further crime in future and it will be a great solution to reduce the crime rate in the country.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, there is a growing awareness among parents that visual stimulation from television and computer games is having a negative side to their children's behavioural growth. While some argue that it has little to no effect on kids' motoric skills, I believe that spending more time playing games and watching television would bring more disadvantages to younger generations.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems asa result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, many public are missing the opportunity to perform physical activities in the course of their working day or in their leisure period. Consequently, they suffer from many health-related issues. This essay will discuss the reasons behind it and remedies that can be taken to address the issue.

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In spite of technological developments in transportation, many people believe that a bicycle is the best way to reach any destination.What are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle nowadays?

It is true that scientific advancements have progressively increased the development of a multitude of transport facilities. However many individuals think that the cycle is the most efficient means of mobility for travelling. This essay will discuss both the merits and demerits of using them in the forthcoming passages.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and the disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

It has become easy access to reach anywhere in the world. At present time, many people are going to places where conditions are difficult, like the Sahara desert or Antarctica. We will discuss the pros and cons for tourists who visit these corners of the earth.

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Some people think that giving aid to poor countries has more negative impacts than positive ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some people that to help poor countries have much more drawbacks than positive sides. I totally disagree with this phenomenon and believe it should be the best solution to overcome for decreasing poorness.

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the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

The given map illustrates a reconstruction plan for a house,compared to the current one.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that circumstances of individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding on the punishment

Nowadays, crime rates are increasing at an alarming rate. So, it is essential to punish culprits to maintain law and order in society. According to my point of view, before taking any verdict it is also very important to consider the circumtances and motivation of crime.

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Fewer and fewer people want to become teachers especially in secondary schools. Why this happening and what can be done to tackle this problem?

It is irrefutable fact that nowadays more and more people are not interested to become educators especially secondary school. But it is not good thing for education of society. In this essay I will highlight principal causes and give solutions to resolve them .

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In some cultures children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.

In some countries, people generally tells their children that they should try hard for attaining whatever they want Which I believe has many negative effects on children's life.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

Plastic is made by petroleum, a scarce source, and it takes millions of years or even more to degrade. We, as a society, have been debating about different ways to save our planet, but the truth is that we can start with small attitudes on our daily routine to improve our planet and give the next generation a chance to experience life as we know it.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss these two views and give your opinion.

Majority of population might concider available sport equipments a perfect way of improving people's general health. Some believe the otherwise and count on other factors too. These two opposite point of views will be discussed below and end with a personal belief.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than working in a company or organization. why be the case? what could be the disadavntages

Today, investing money and days in their own business is a dream for most folk rather than spending days on a job for a monthly income. In this situation, there could be plenty of advantages and disadvantages. Still, I would prefer to go with my own effort due to the self-satisfaction and flexibility which I'm having in my own place.

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The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it now. What extend do you agree or disagree?

According to some people, in future, humans will be less healthy than they are today. I agree with this argument to a great extent. Health depends on a variety of factors like regular physical activity, nutritious food and freedom from stress. Unfortunately, today people lead a sedentary life and suffer from high levels of stress.

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Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead do?

These days, consumerism among people has increased and they do not keep their old assets for a long time, but in the past, the public used broken products after repairing them. This issue has surrounded several reasons, and has affected society and nature almost negatively.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, in the evolutionary age we are living in, a lot of technologies surrounds us, in order to make everything accessible and easy to reach. The future plans predict that after few years, there will be no need for printed newspaper or book, and everything we need will be online and free to obtain. I personally can tell that the presence of actual book and newspapers is vital and essential and cannot be ignored. This essay will argue the advantages and disadvantages for this process.

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