IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 977

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that zoos help to preserve wild creatures, whilst others disagree and think that they are inhumane and should be abolished. While breeding programmes can contribute to the preservation of endangered species, I believe that the poor conditions that many animals held in capacity are kept in make the existence of zoos unacceptable.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything they want if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Some children are often told that they can get anything they want as they try hard enough. This message really affect them in making them succeed. However, it will also create them tough to embrace failure. In this essay, I will take a closer look at the aforementined key advantage and disadvantage.

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The destruction of rain forests to create land for agricultural use is a serious problem. What are some of the common problems, and what can be done to reduce them?

Nowadays, people are cutting trees to make landings for their own use. However, this situation is causing numerous serious problems. In this essay, I will explain some of the causes and solutions to reduce this problem.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

Nowadays the number of students for studying abroad significantly has increased.Accordingly; this issue can be considered a new social phenomenon.So; there are some advantages such as gaining a distinct cultural experience also it surely has disadvantages like economical problems due lossing lossing workforce in the future.

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Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one?

In most schools all over the world, students have their own mobile phones regardless of their ages. While these devices can undoubtedly play a pivotal role in safety, communication and even learning, many schools have chosen to restrain their use on campus. In many view, this is a positive statement and can bring benefits not only academically, but also physically and in terms of socially.

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In many countries women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first few months after the birth of their baby. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In my view women should be given time to spend with their newly born babies to take care of them until they grow to a certain months old however there are limitations for providing long term leave for certain women who just got concieved might effect their financial situation if thier family completely depends on them economically but if right amount of time and care is not given to the child they might fall terribly ill.

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Some people believe that iPad is good for user and have a lot of benefits. Do you agree?

Some people are of the view that iPads are beneficial for users in many ways and other is the view that it has negative effects on a person's life. In my personal opinion, iPads have more advantages as compared to disadvantages.

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Some people think that one good way to promote world peace is through international sporting events, while others think that it is not. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals think that one good way to promote world peace is through international sport activities . but others think that is not, I agree a little ı don't agree little because there are many ways to promote peace such as cultural food festivals and visiting other countries.

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it is a fact that people nowadays are under a lot of pressure and their lives are becoming increasingly stressful. what could be the possible reasons for this? what are the some solutions to adress this issue?

These days, stress is an irrefutable part of our life, and people for different reasons have a lot of stress. This essay will mention some of the reasons and solutions for the stress issue.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

Worldwide obesity has nearly tripled since 1975. People from all ages are affected by this problem. The fundamental cause of overweight and obesity is an energy imbalance between calories consumed and calories expended and it should be controlled at the individual level and by the food industry.

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As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

As society develops, it has brought about an increasing number of issues related to transport and accommodation. Therefore, companies are being encouraged by some governments to relocate to the countryside. In this essay, I will discuss that the urban citizens' lives may be less convenient

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new research has shown that overeating has become a bigger problem than hanger. What are the reasons of this problem? and how could be solved?

In this contemporary epoch, the over consumption of food has become a controversial argument. Whilst there is a general tendency towards the spontaneous consumption of dietary products, I reckon that advertising campaigns have encouraged individuals to consume different kinds of dietary goods, and the state involvement is the drastic remedy of this issue. In this essay, the main reasons behind this trend, along with the possible solutions will be further elaborated.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Over the last decades, there has been a leap forward in the mobile phone technology with countless advantages. A lot of juveniles, today, spend their time on their smartphones, and this situation can stem from several reasons. Both the reasons and my view is elaborated further passages.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign languages can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this competitive world, many people want to study or work abroad. However, some people believe that living in a country where the language is different can lead to significant problems in society, as well as practical problems. I totally agree with this idea because of some reasons.

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Some people spend a lot of money attending cultural or sports events. Is it a good or a bad thing?

There are folks, who generously spends on recreational events. However, excess of everything is bad even if it is on some personal or public events. Though attending recreational and supports events is a good activity to stress out and to see your favorite game/ culture.

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There are different types of music in the world today. Why do we need Music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays

There are various genre of sounds over the globe. The world is becoming a small village due to the area of globalization. Old era music have more importance than the now a days tunes due to its importance of connecting the youth with their roots. In this essay I will discuss my point of view with some examples.

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Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

Although, nowadays it is popular among people to occupy a sophisticated condominium instead of choosing simple houses, there are lot of reasons for individual choices. In my preferences, I still love to stay at old fashion house in which I will give some details in the next paragraphs.

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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.Why do you think that is?What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

Art is an important part of all cultures worldwide. But nowadays fewer individuals appreciate art and choose science, technology and business. I agree with this statement and I will clear my view in an upcoming essay.

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Providing a national system in a country where the unemployed receive a regular payment only encourages people not to seek work and puts an unreasonable strain on a country’s financial resources. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

Providing a financial aid to unemployed people is mostly found in developed countries mainly in Europe. I support this initiative only when the funds are given to the right group of people.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Over the last decades, there has been a leap forward in mobile phone technology with countless advantages. A lot of juveniles, today, spend their time on their smartphones, and this situation can stem from several reasons. Both the reasons and my view is elaborated further passages.

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