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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some people agree that advertisements are useful for TV viewers, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt about the fact that why advertising is more useful for television viewers these days, while some folks argued that announcements have a lot of negative impacts on their life. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with this statement due to many reasons which will be described in the following paragraphs before the conclusion is reached.

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In the future more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

In the future some people will opt to spend their vacation in their home country rather than visiting abroad. I disagree with this statement. I hold this opinion because many people travel to experience and explore the cultural heritage of other countries. Furthermore, nowadays the cost of transportation is cheaper than before.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

In the modern era, the use of the internet has made our lives more convenient, and one of the areas where this is most evident is in online shopping. This development has sparked a debate about whether online shopping is a positive or negative trend. In my opinion, despite some minor drawbacks, online shopping is overwhelmingly a positive development that brings significant benefits to consumers.

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Currently, majority of people are willing to travel around the world to visit the sight seeying places because it is much more easier now as apposed to past. There are several benefits of tourism and there are outweigh the drawbacks.

Currently, the majority of people are willing to travel around the world to visit sightseeing places because it is much easier now as opposed to the past. There are several benefits of tourism and there are outweigh the drawbacks.

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It’s important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Character and personality form since childhood and the crucial step in bringing up a person is talking about acceptable and the opposite behaviour in the society. In my opinion, the punishment should not be detrimental to children, instead parents should communicate with their children and study them about life's values and principles.

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Nowadays some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

‘Do you like going to the museum or galleries?’ With the technological advancement, people can view artworks, historical relics and other exhibitions online at any time. Some argue that public museums and art galleries will be out of the picture sooner or later, since the public no longer needs them. However, I believe that there are still big differences between the real object and the digital one. Moreover, the atmosphere in the museum cannot be easily replaced.

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.Some people think learning history in school is important. Others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this day and age, more and more people have access to academic training with various subjects being taught in school. While many individuals believe that learning history in schools is crucial for students, others argue that children should focus on subjects that are beneficial for their future progress.

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It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the relationship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

It is often believed that taking a loan from a friend can result in damaging that friendship, I partly agree with is statement. In my opinion, having money matters between friends can make the bond complicated, but at the same time, your peers can understand your troubles more than anyone else. This essay will further explain the reasons in detail.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it has become a trend amongst people who choose international destinations over domestic ones to plan a vacation. I presume that Inclination towards foreign travel will be exponentially increased in the future. However, it would affect human beings’ choices to travel within the country. I disagree with the statement and this essay will speak about the points with relevant instances.

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In some counties young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing vhigh school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?

In recent times, around the globe, youngsters are motivated for about a moment to work or travel between finishing secondary faculty and proceeding to tertiary institutions for studies. The merits of this development are, it makes them learn a skill and prevents boredom, while the drawback is that results in involvement in crime and low academic grades. This essay will explain the advantages and disadvantages and a logical conclusion will be drawn.

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Some people think that we should divide students based on their academic ability, while others think we should educate all students together. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Academic capacity is highly valued by educational institutions since it could provoke profound influences to young individuals regarding their future careers. Despite some perspectives suggesting that schools should group students based on their performances in academic subjects, I am personally in favour of coeducation, since it provides a better study environment.

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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industries and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this ?

In most under-developed nations, there exist the problem of rampant pollution which over the years, has taken its toll on our environment. The only way to partially alleviate this negatively escalating situation is to educate the population about the despondent situation that we as well as our future generation may face.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It has been vital for the human being to jeopardize their lives for achievement in private and career sides. Even though living in a safe zone will lead us to a tranquil life, it is a definite outcome to be stuck in a position where no progress occurs. We will have been happier to allow ourselves in a selection environment in contrast or evade it.

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All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same number of holidays in a year. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

For over the last two or three decades, human rights is being expanded in all fields even in workplaces compared to the past. The majority of people consider that all staff should have the same incentive options. I completely agree with this point of view and in this essay, I will explain my view with relevant examples.

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Many parents are unhappy with the amount of violence in video games, TV programs and other leisure activities. How harmful could this be to children? What could be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, youngsters spend most of their time on gadgets such as TV, laptops and mobile phones. Parents are concerned about the type of content their kids are watching. Video games, movies and songs contain a high amount of violence and promote gun culture, to say the least. This is a huge problem that requires intervention as young minds preach what they see around them.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree or disagree.

It has been observed that, with the entire globe becoming under one roof, eventually a plethora of nations have officially declared dual languages or replaced them with other ones. To a large extent, I believe that this jeopardising situation not only affects citizens social matters but also generates practical problems.

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Parents often give children everything they ask for and let them do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?

A present, parental figure frequently accommodates children with everything they demand and too personal freedom. This essay attempts to shed light on the negative influence before outlining the long-term repercussions of this child-rearing practice.

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Infuture all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside this will be passengers. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

It is believed that in the upcoming days there would be no longer a necessity for drivers due to automatic vehicles , only the travellers who want to go somewhere will need to sit inside the bus. While, saving time is the primary benefit. Whereas, the concerning drawbacks are reduced employment for drivers and chances of accidents which outweigh the advantages.

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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

Many people who achieved stupendous success in life were not academically brilliant students. If we look around, we can also see that many class toppers eventually fail miserably in life. This is probably because most skills taught at school are not useful for success in life. In fact, in the real world, a person’s success depends on their ability to persevere and learn from their mistakes.

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Around the world, more and mpre people today are living in urban areas. Why is this? How to reduce this problem?

Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common for people to live in urban areas. This phenomenon negatively impacts people's health due to overcrowding and pollution. In this essay, I will examine the factors that contribute to living in urban areas and propose some solutions.

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