IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5. Page 49

IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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despite the increased access to education , a significant number of people cannot read or write . write disadvantages and actions taken by government.

Inevitably , education has been claimed for playing a key role to knock on the door of success and developing a sense of independence in an individual's life. In the present scenario, it is easily accessible to the people; whereas, a fair amount of people are still illiterate .If possible measures were taken by the law to reduce it, many more youngster would improve their economic and social standings . In this essay , I will shed light upon ,simultaneously,both disadvantages and solutions before embarking on the conclusion.

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Some people think that museums’ main function is to educate people, the others suggest that they can also serve for entertainment purposes. What is your opinion?

It had been frequently argued that libraries are a mode of providing knowledge of historical events, however, such buildings could also be used to entertain. In my perspective, museums always acknowledge people about their ancestors, no matter if it could be in the form of fun.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Seldom does the press pay attention to those middle-aged business owners as they are not categorized as geniuses like those who succeed at a relatively young age. Some career coaches might even claim that it's better to decide on one's expertise at an early age instead of risking its career by switching jobs or professions. However, I personally believe that the merits of stepping out of the comfort zone can override the demerits and in the following essay, I would elaborate on the reasons.

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Some people think saving money is good, but others think that spending money is a better way to enjoy life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

There are controversial opinions about whether people had better save money or spend it. In my opinion, both views are right, as long as there is a balance.

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The world's most urgent problem is caused by over-population. Do you agree or disagree?

Living beings are facing the detrimental impacts of the increasing population across the globe. I agree with the statement and I would evident this with possible reasons in upcoming paragraphs.

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Radio will no longer be able to hold its presence, as television and internet media will replace it very soon. Do you agree or disagree?

With technological advancement, old items are quickly being replaced by newer ones. The life span of products has shortened as almost every day new developments are seen in one or another field which makes existing products useless. The same applies to the radio, where easy availability of the Internet and television have replaced radios and no one wants to listen to the shows when they actually can see visual expressions of the artists on the TV set. I see myself favouring the given statement and putting forth my opinion in the following paragraphs.

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Immigration has a major impact on the society what are the main reason of immigration? to what consequences can it lead?

Due to advancements in technology, the world has become a small village;that being so,it is common for people to move from one country to another.This essay will discuss some of the main reasons and the results of immigration in upcoming paragraphs.

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Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and, experience and support your answer with examples and relevant evidence.

Due to modernization, people are so busy with their lifestyle and I agree, with this statement that fathers should be the same responsible for their children's upbringing as mothers.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed. While others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.

Some people argue that human activity negatively impacted biodiversity globally. A few have a notion that there is no scope for change and on the other side many believe that possible actions can bring change.

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It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people argued that taking risks in their life will boost their working career and personal achievement. I generally agreed that these kinds of characters should be embraced because there are many demerits rather than demerits.

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Public libraries should only provide books and should not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or DVDs. Do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly known that innovation has become more and more common in today’s learning environment, for ,instance public libraries. While some people argue that these locations should provide only printed materials, others believe that new technologies and services, for ,example computers, software and hardware, should be used to facilitate students’ learning, and I agree with the latter as opposed to the former.

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Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this contemporary epoch air pollution is one of the common issues of mankind. Hence, some individuals claim that increasing the rate of public transit and decreasing their fares leads to a considerable reduction in pollution. The following essay will aim at outlining further my personal agreement since the rise in the amount of public transit caused to decline in the rate of cars on the road.

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Some people believe school children should help to create rules in their schools. Others say teachers alone should decide what the rules are. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

there are different opinions on whether rules in school systems should be created solely by teachers or with the assistance of children. Personally, my opinion towards this argument will support the facts that the process of making the principles of schooling should have children's help.

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What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by the government and individuals to solve this problem.

It is believed that nature gets damaged by the huge waste of plastic substances due to its deleterious effects there is a terrible thing which can be happened with increasing plastic pollution that is putting plastic on land and leaving particles on the soil which can be tackled by putting a ban on plastic by the authorities and the masses should avoid throwing plastic instead of putting it in the garbage.

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Some teachers think it is effective for students to study in groups while others think is it better to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is a variety of approaches to achieving efficacious academic performance. Some reckon that collaborative learning facilitates the exchange of ideas and thoughts over challenging subjects and is better able to address issues. However, I believe an individual learning environment encourages higher academic performance.

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Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centres. Do you think the advantage outweigh the disadvantages?

The location of a workplace is one of the significant decisions that companies and industries of a large scale should make. While some people believe there are more advantages to the companies moving to more countryside from city centres, other people disagree with it. I personally support the former view for the following reasons.

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The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be leaders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Leadership is a skill that one can possess either by extraordinary knowledge of something or through experience. When it comes to the age of Chief Executive Officers or managers of a company there's a considerable bias as to some it is justified if seniors acquire that rank. While another group advocates this statement and believes that youngsters should get an opportunity to showcase their leadership skills. However, I found myself agreeing with the statement and to ,me everyone should get a fair chance if they truly deserve to be one.

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Some people believe that the the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs . Other believe that there are much wider benefits of university education for both individual and society . Discuss both views and give your opinion .

There are controversial opinions about whether the aim of universities is only related to finding good jobs or whether there are other goals. It is my strong belief that university degrees provide many more advantages and benefits.

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Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a life without that technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that modern technology is beneficial for individuals in life. It would be wiser to revert to the older and simpler ways of life. I believe that life without technology is unimaginable and technology does not make complicated life.

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Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern world, advertising has become an important aspect of the business field. It is like a part of our life. There are people who opine that advertisement has positive effects. In this essay, I will state my clear opinion with valid reasons.

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