IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5. Page 47

IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?

More young society is dropping out of school and can not get a job in many nations. I will elaborate on the effects that this situation caused and investigate how individuals as well as the community can solve the problems.

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'Telecommuting' refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology. Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades. How do you think society will be affected by the growth of telecommuting?

Today, thanks to new technology in cyberspace, some office employees are allowed to work from home. This system has led many companies to gain more benefits, and I think this method will become more popular in the future due to the introduction of more developed web systems and facing more transport problems.

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Very few schoolchildren learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum. Do you agree or disagree?

There are increasing concerns about young children, who have few opportunities to learn about the value of money and essential skills to handle money today. While some people put emphasis on the importance of these skills and propose that they should be embedded into a part of a school curriculum, others are pessimistic about this view. I personally support the former view for the following reasons.

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People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

It is widely believed that to tackle environmental problems, the government should raise the price of fuel used in different means of transport. Personally, I agree with this solution for some reasons.

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Everyone deserves to be educated. It is unfair that intelligent people are not admitted to private universities because of their financial background. University education should be free for everyone. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

It’s undeniable that school education can be an extremely powerful thing in human form as a responsible and well-mannered person.There are a number of reasons that confirms that theory, however in some cases literacy can have a negative impact on children rather than on parents, and the following reasons will be enlightened in this essay.

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In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

It is not uncommon to see people in modernized regions live by themselves in small apartments. While some believe that the drawbacks of this phenomenon outweigh its advantageous, however, I personally reckon that this is a positive trend for personal development.

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Social media helps people to keep in touch with friends and stay on top of news and events. Do you think the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, internet-based media are more beneficial for people in terms of maintaining relationships with loved ones and staying updated with the news. Converse that, it is a leading time waster and leads to some mental illnesses. Despite its ,drawbacks I strongly believe that online social platforms provide greater convenience for human lives.

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History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Advancements in technology have paved the path to modernisation all around the world, however, there are predominantly two contrasting views, where a section of society asserts that history plays a most predominant role in school syllabus, whereas, other people claim that teaching science and technology is more crucial as comparison to the past. According to my perspective, history is not much important subject nowadays.

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Many people believe that they should spend money to enjoy life at present.others however, think they should save it for the future. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Money is an essential part of life. The important question about earned money is how someone spends those. Some people urge that we should spend our earnings enjoying life , and others believe saving is more important than enjoying the present. In this ,essay I shall discuss the merit and demerits of both these views along with my opinion.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early stage. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

The best time for someone to learn something new is at a young age. At this age, they have to learn which things are right and wrong. But some parents are giving them punishment as a learning complement. Personally, i disagree with this statement and this writing will extend the reasons and give the solutions.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people have different perspectives on their working life. Some of them prefer to change their colleagues or working places frequently. While the others, prefer to stay in the same circumstances. In my view, it is better to gain more experience in different working environments. This writing will be given both sides' views and the author's opinions.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children thi message?

Children are often told that everything can be successful if they strive hard enough in some cultures. Otherwise, they are not able to earn any achievements. In my prospect, It seems to me that the thought has both merits and demerits.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others argue that the circumstances and motivation of each crime should always be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The increase in crime rate nowadays has brought about controversy if the severity of the crime committed should determine the penalty given regardless of the circumstances surrounding each sin. There are valid points to both views, however, I am of the opinion that offenders' situations should be considered when issuing punishment.

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University Education should be free to eveyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or diasgree?

In this contemporary epoch, the literacy rate increasing among the population, so some people claim that any student, regardless of background should be released from their tuition fee. Since by mentioned effort level of education will rise, but varsities' worth and competitive environment will disappear, the following essay will aim at outlining my partial agreement with the aforementioned statement.

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Some people believe that young children under 18 years old should not be allow to go out after midnight, while other thinks the opposite? Discuss both views and give your opinion

Although it is considered by some that individuals younger than 18 years old should have forbidden from being out later than midnight, others disagree with this statement. This essay will discuss both views. In my opinion, I believe they should avoid going out at late hours.

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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, there is an increase in the number of violent scenes in digital media especially on television. This could have a detrimental effect on the children who are watching it. I strongly agree with this claim and this essay will examine the reasons with empirical evidence.

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despite the increased access to education , a significant number of people cannot read or write . write disadvantages and actions taken by government.

Inevitably , education has been claimed for playing a key role to knock on the door of success and developing a sense of independence in an individual's life. In the present scenario, it is easily accessible to the people; whereas, a fair amount of people are still illiterate .If possible measures were taken by the law to reduce it, many more youngster would improve their economic and social standings . In this essay , I will shed light upon ,simultaneously,both disadvantages and solutions before embarking on the conclusion.

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Some people think that museums’ main function is to educate people, the others suggest that they can also serve for entertainment purposes. What is your opinion?

It had been frequently argued that libraries are a mode of providing knowledge of historical events, however, such buildings could also be used to entertain. In my perspective, museums always acknowledge people about their ancestors, no matter if it could be in the form of fun.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Seldom does the press pay attention to those middle-aged business owners as they are not categorized as geniuses like those who succeed at a relatively young age. Some career coaches might even claim that it's better to decide on one's expertise at an early age instead of risking its career by switching jobs or professions. However, I personally believe that the merits of stepping out of the comfort zone can override the demerits and in the following essay, I would elaborate on the reasons.

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Some people think saving money is good, but others think that spending money is a better way to enjoy life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

There are controversial opinions about whether people had better save money or spend it. In my opinion, both views are right, as long as there is a balance.

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