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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

In today’s life, more and more people tend to focus on their career in order to achieve fame and fortune. However, different person has their different ways to be successful, People mostly rise to the top of their course as a result of hard work and have their own goals from the beginning, but some choose to take advantage of their presentation or wealth to be promoted quickly in their job. In this essay, I will be discussing both points of view.

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Scientists believe that in order to protect the environment, people must use less energy in their daily lives. However, most people have not changed the way they live. Why do you think many people have not taken individual action? What could be done to encourage them to take action?

In order to save the environment the majority of scientists released that it would be better to cut the using of energy. However, even after this statement people have not changed their habits and proceed waste the energy fuels. In the following paragraphs I will examine the cause of such careless and suggest the alternative solution.

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Although the position of women in society today has improved, there is still a great deal of sexual discrimination. Do you agree?

In this modern world, women are being respected, and treated equal to men. Though, there are lots of improvements, still they face sexual brutality and assaults. In my opinion, I agree with this statement, and we will discuss appropriate reasons for this situation, in this essay.

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Advance in Science and Technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we died there is no better time to be alive then and now to what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion

It is true that Technology and Science and other development have transformed the way we live making it much easier than before. In the last 100 years there is a rapid and dramatic development in many fields including medicine, transport, manufacturing and communication. So many people believe that we are living better time than now. However, I disagree with this statement.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people think that various human beings have some capabilities since birth, such as having inborn art of singing. On the other hand, it is also believed by several that it is possible for anyone to learn some art and become a great player or artist. In my opinion, both the given scenarios are possible and rationale because majority of famous entertainers have not obtained any professional training owning to their inherited talents while others, obviously have learned the craft after beginning. This essay will discuss both viewpoints in detail.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are both the best and worst conditions in the life, which eventually go on with the passage of time and we learn to cope with the bad and enjoy the good situations. Although, a few curses their unpleasant stage of life and accept it, on the other hand, some struggle on to make it better. Both the sides will be justified in the ensuing paragraphs.

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i. #Crime | #Education - In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?

In recent years, the cases of a child’s misbehaviour have been skyrocketing in the majority of schools around the world. Notwithstanding, this discourse will delve into the rationale behind this unfortunate occurrence, and subsequently, will put forward the panacea to arresting the menace.

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Some people believe it is better to raise children in the city, while others consider countryside to be a more suitable choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Children are the pillar of our societies and their upbringing has a significant effect on their own future as well as the country. Hence, the question raises as where is the best place for raising them. While some people think metropolitan areas are more suitable for them to be reared, others believe rural areas are better. In this essay, the benefits and drawbacks of both mentioned views are comprehensively investigated.

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Nowadays more and more people read news on the Internet. Nevertheless, newspapers will remain an important source of news and information for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The recent years have witnessed a dramatic rise in the use of internet as a source of news. Despite this, I would argue that traditional newspapers would not lose their importance because of health safety and low internet coverage throughout the world.

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It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been a common sense that elders are more experienced and are usually more capable of advising wisely. However, due to the constant and rapid change, our society is suffering, some are starting to believe that the younger generations are more aware of how the world is working nowadays and perhaps are the best ones to give recommendations. Although I understand the importance of older people in our society, I believe that the perspective of how society works for them is becoming outdated.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Access to information is getting increasingly convenient in the revolutionised world. It is argued by some that exchanging plenty of data in the sphere of scientific research, business and education is best, while others who realise the value and sensitivity of information, prefer to think on the contrary. I strongly believe in obscuring non-relevant critical data and sharing only what is required.

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The government should allocate more funding to teaching science rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress to what extent do you agree

It is argued by some that the ministry should spend more on teaching science as compared to other subjects for nations development and growth. However, I disagree with the given statement. In my opinion, every subject is important and a country should invest in teaching all subjects such as literature, physical education and technology.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right or wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. Agree or Disagree?

Nowadays, children at an early age have to distinguish between positive behaviours and negative behaviours. Since this distinction recognise quite difficult for children so that some people claim that retribution is required to help them.Nevertheless, I quite disagree with this opinion due to some reasons listed in this essay.

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Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature and history of their own country, rather than the literature and history of other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is important to young children, especially the literature and history of their own country. While I believe this is the right thing to do, I also believe learning these two elements of other countries that help children to have better views of the world.

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Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientists.Do you agree or disagree? Support with examples and reasons from your own experience.

Some people argue that artists play a huge role than scientists, but at the same there is a strong counter argument among some sections of people say that scientists are more important than other performers who gives fun to people.However, I personally subscribed that this essay disagree the given statement because scientists are very crucial for the country and giving comfortable zone to mankind.

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Research shows that a lot of energy is saved if people spend a shorter time in the workplace. To save energy (e.g. gas, electricity etc.), some companies are closing down on one day per week. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, energy consumption has become a controversial issue. Many companies have reduced the working days to save a portion of the power. Both pros and cons of the mentioned idea with my opinion will be illustrated in the following lines.

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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. It is true that medicines and other products are routinely

At present, animal tests are massively being utilized by some companies to improve medicine options and check product's safety for human usage. The on-going debate among people is, whether this type of experiments should be banned as it can harm animals or should enterprises continue pursuing it as it can benefit the good of humanity.

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The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?

At present, the usage of mobile phone has enhanced our way of living, but some people argue that it has affected people's interaction negatively and could possibly post some health risks. While I do think that over usage of mobility might generate minor danger, I also strongly believe that there are more positive outcomes from the advancement of phones throughout the years.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The need for profession applicants to provide sensitive and personal data has been debated more in recent times with a side arguing why this info are relevant and the other why it is unnecessary and unethical. In the process of hiring new employees, employers believe these personal materials go a long way in filling the vacant office roles, but on the other hand, advocates for privacy believe the collection of this data is not justifiable and can form a basis of bias against applicants. In my opinion, this tip is relevant to employers as it forms a part of the decision making in choosing the best candidate suitable for the job.

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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less-educated today. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

In the contemporary society, visual media has a huge presence across the globe and television is being used as an additional learning gadget by students. However, many people claim that TV set can never substitute for books in order to teach students. I partly agree this statement owing to some beneficial factors of TV and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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