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Nowadays, people go to abroad working, they often live in rented becouse they have not effort money buy the new house so they live in rented home.However, it is good as it is cheaper to rent.for example, If you want to buy a new house, you will lose a lot of money so it is better to live a rental becouse you only pay monthly fee. Even if you can buy a new house, you will to buy household appliances and cover it. Which requires a lot of money. Therefor, in my opinion,renting is better then buying a new home.
These days, politicians who govern some countries approve the capital punishment for both criminals and those who are militans there. However, the death penalty is banned in the other parts of the world including Italy.
The diagram illustrates the consecutive recycling procedures for plastic bottles. Overall, plastic bottles, which are thrown away into garbage, are gathered at recycling centres, then, transformed into raw materials, and used to produce new products.
Illustration about how the people change its expectation of full-time education and its salary were making different after entering the workforce.
In modern countries people used to do shopping. This essay describes a positive devepolment as relaxing and spending time together with friend or family.
Nowadays, as the world's prosperity grows, several developed countries are permitting their residents to apply driverless cars with AI technology. However, there is an ongoing dispute concerning the benefits and drawbacks of using automatic vehicles. This essay discusses both perspectives of the aforementioned issue with various reasons to support each point of view before the conclusion is reached.
In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects and boys tend to choose science subject. It is an old school tendency that is still flourishing in our world. Gender still means too much. One century ago women were not allowed to vote in elections. Two centuries ago they can’t put on pants without permission. Also a lot of people are still thinking that science subjects studied easier by boys than by girls, but now we live in another time and in another world. I know so many boys who can’t understand the easiest math rules. At the same time I am a good example too, because I am not good at literature at all. So in my opinion today everyone can choose what to do and how to do. We should not limit ourselves. It is no progress without broken this stereotypes.
Nowadays people are living in the modern life which is much more convenient than in the past.While some people say that the past was better than now, i fully disagree with that opinion.
The bar chart compares proportion of Australian children from 5 to 16 years old attending four categories of activites in 2012, they are watching TV, reading, art, and riding the bike.
Some people think that school should take responsibility for transport children to school. Other people believe that parents only can transport children to school.Who is right? In my issue i consider this views and gives my own opinion.
The two maps illustrate how a learner's hostel was in 2010 and its contemporary state. Overall, there have been expansions of some structures such as the student bedroom and part of the garden has been cleared, however, some structures remained unchanged.
Overall, the number of 4 kinds of aims that visitors go to UK during the 16 years rose in general.
The pictures illustarte the steps involved in making sugar from sugar cane and how to make this valuable product.
Different languages exist from the dawn/have always been existing/ of time and so is the language barrier.People from all over the world speak in different languages due to living in different places.So for these people to communicate they have to learn each other’s languages.
nowadays , to learn a foreign language increasing . Some parents force their children to learn a new language while others direct based on their interests .
First of all, what’s the internet? The Internet is a global informatic web wich use the telefonic line for transmiting information, once this clear i can say that the internet efectively made society better because it allow us to search much information that is very useful and with that we can discover too much things. The internet made society better that’s a fact but in the other han are the problems that people make with that access to the information for example some people use this information web for search illegal things in order to commit crimes and harm innocent people but as I said that is the other face of Internet.
I think that the people are cruel sometimes with the animals, more in the zoos, when the people visit to the zoos, because the kids are crazy, someone, not all, but they scared and are cruel with animals, like monkeys, more with them because the monkeys are good animals, sometimes play with people that are in the zoo, or with the personal that work in there, also with the lions, elephants and others. In my personal opinion, I desagree with zoos, because these citys don't let be free to the animals, that they are in the jungle, or around the mountains, also I think that the zoos shouldn't exist for the animals don't suffer there, they must be free, apart of that we don't know if the personal that work there give food to the animals, not only food, also water for that they too can stay hydrated. So I disagree with zoos.
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