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The bar chart compers the percentage of physical activity between different ages men and women in Australia in the year of 2010.
In their advertising, businesses nowdays sometimes stress that their products are new in some way. From my point of view, some businesses want to have good products to give to the people, but usually they worry about their products are newer than some other's businesses products. In think it is a negative development, because when businesses stress about the quality of their products, sometimes they do something wrong while they are producing ther. It is good when the businesses take care of and look after their products but with a limit. According to some experts, when you take a lot of care of something, you will probably do some things, about it, wrong. From my own experience, I was trying to make three school projects, which my teachers asked me to do, and despite my hard work and because I was stressed about the projects I had to do, finally failed because I had made a lot of mistakes. To sum up, businesses nowdays should not stress about their products being new in s...
There are two main causes of obesity amongst children. The first one is sedantary lifestyle which is very common nowadays. Because of various modes of digital entertainment available during the childhood, the physical activity has significantly decreased. Therefore, the fat content from the consumed food gets stored within the body resulting in obesity. Another reason is unhealthy eating and the real culprit for such habit is the fast food culture. This quick service food generally has high fat, salt or sugar content which mean more calories will get consumed with less nutritional value. These extra calories, along with sedantry lifestyle acts as a fuel toward obesity.
The following chart illustrates data in regard to the population of various parts of the world and the correlation of the global wealth accordingly. At a glance, we can witness a substantial difference in the indicators given with a large concentration of wealth in a few regions in total.
Almost all company policy change human resources by replace an old workers who ohave experience with new and young person. I'm strongly agree with the solution.
The pie charts depict the ratio of online sales in 4 different retail sectors, namely: travel, film/music, books and clothes, during 2003 and 2013 in New Zealand. Overall, it can be seen from the graphs that travel accounted for the biggest proportion amongst all sectors in 2003, whereas its importance was replaced by film/music by 2013.
I am writing to inform you that I came back to my native place due to emergency. My father, had a cardiac arrest yesterday and he was admitted to hospital for treatment.
In the modern world, agriculture is developing and doing their best. However, there are people who struggle to find food and go hungry. From my perspective, it is due to the high prices of food, and low salary of employee. For the solution of problem, government could do charity works and make progrmas to increase the number of workers.
Many people are believed that tuition fee and medical cost should be funded by the government and free for residents.
The graph below demonstrates that a country’s GDP cost on three areas, such as health , education , roads and railways, proportion during 2000 to 2025. To begin with, it is obvious that the proportion of the money on heath people cost steadily increasing while the roads and railways take up less and less proportion of GDP during the 20 years from 2000 to 2025 and become the lowest percentage of GDP in 2025 though it takes the highest proportion at the beginning, and both of the health and roads and railways occupied the same percentage which are approximately 4 percentage of GDP around 2006, and they finally take up the proportion of GDP are 7.5 and 2.6 respectively. As for the education, it begins with the lowest percentage of GPD and punctual during the 2000 to 2025 and finally become higher as 4.2 percentage than the beginning around less than 3 percentage and be the midst proportion of GPD compare to health and road and railways.
The upgradation of cities is happening in the world due to hype in globalization. I Agree that there are more advantages compared to disadvantages.
Some students take a year off either to work or travel. What is better - traveling or working? I want to discuss both options. From my point of view both variants good. Some students take a year off either to work because maybe they must to make money in order to provide for yourself or your family, maybe they can get pleasure from work or that time almost most quantity people buy an IPHONE, naturally and thus students prefer working to buy an IPHONE. For instance my classmate Kamron, recently went to Russia to earn money and buy an IPHONE for himself, since all this friends use an IPHONE or maybe they prefer to work in order to in the future they have a affordable travel.
It is argued that the people who read for pleasure in their free time have a better imagination than those who prefer to watch TV. In my opinion, this statement is somehow reasonable.
In the modern world the computer has become essence for everyone and classroom should have computer which helps both teacher and student in learning process.It is often argued that this development is crucial for society, whilst others disagree and thinks this should increase numerous risk to student.This essay will discuss both view points.
Smoking is injurious to health. Many scientists have proved that it is the main cause of deadly diseases like cancer, kidney issues and many more. The authorities should banned smoking in public locations as it also effects on other individuals. I strongly agree with the aforementioned notion and this essay will put forth supporting arguments with relevant examples.
Nowadays, educatinal problem between boys and girls is always hard explaining around the wordl. Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in a separate schools but in my opinion, I don't agree that. I think boys and girls can develope more from attending mixed school.
Nowadays, an increasing number of people use their phones or computers for educational purposes instead of traditional textbooks and upgrading information frequently in books has some problems. That's why it is often considered that universities must require only digital media instead of the conventional system. This essay will explain why I agree with this view on the basis of its benefits such as less damage to the nature and development of new learning methods.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of different ages male and female who do exercises regularly in Australia in 2010.
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