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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many countries paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

The bar chart demonstrates the percentage of the Canadian workforce in each industry in 1850 and 2020. These industries comprise Manufacturing, services, agriculture and fishing, construction, energy and water.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are crippled by gridlocked traffic. What are the possible solutions for these cities?

In developed countries, major cities like New York, London, people have a lot of options for buying a car. With increase in purchasing power, car ownership has increased with leaps and bounds over the past three decades. This has led to increase in traffic congestion and air pollution in big cities. Few possible solutions to these problems are improvement in public transport and government policies on car ownership and office schedules.

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Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas. What are your opinions on this?

n current day and age, supermarkets are a big chain which are able to sell a large variety of food products under one roof giving a lot of choices to consumers. Therefore, I completely agree that supermarkets should sell food produced within their own country, because it will increase food production by local farmers making the country self sufficient and supermarkets have the financial might, to reach out to farmers even in the remotest areas to buy food products.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, technology has developed by leaps and bounds that make our life easier. Apparently, we rather reading something on the internet than on newspaper or books. This will lead to media disruption. In other words, it will be disappeared in our life. I do not believe this notion because the following reasons.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction do you agree or disagree?

Satisfaction with job is less important than a huge salary. This essay completely disagrees with the statement mentioned above because job satisfaction is more important for the employee to have a peaceful mind, and it also will maintain the staff.

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There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The advancement in technology drastically changes the lifestyle of human beings to the extent that nowadays industries and schools are running from the ease of home as it seems more affordable and convenient. I personally believe that it has more adverse effects rather than positive impacts because this raised personal as well as health-related problems.

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Allowing young children to do an enjoyable activity can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

Over the years, as we had evolved as homosepians from an animal; the tennagers learning capability has changed in the same way comparing to last five decade. The thought of giving access to either tennager's favourite activity or reading a book in order to enhance the skills of an individual can be debatable. Thus, this essay is going to address the given statement in neutral manner.

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Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas. What are your opinions on this?

In current day and age, supermarkets are a big chain which are able to sell a large variety of food products under one roof giving a lot of choices to consumers. Therefore, I completely agree that supermarkets should sell food produced within their own country, because it will increase food production by local farmers making the country self sufficient and supermarkets have the financial might, to reach out to farmers even in the remotest areas to buy food products.

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The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To wh/t extent do you agree with this statement?

How are you? I am fine and thank you very much for sending me these passages. The reason why I am writing to you is that I have finally made my decision about whether or not I should go to university.

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Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

All games and sports require hard work and dedication to excel on international level. To assist an athlete excellent training and coaching facilities are imperative for improvements. Hence, I strongly agree that governments should use the tax payer money to fully fund all international athletes. Complete support from government is necessary because government bodies provide structure and the world class training facilites costly to be borne only by the sportsperson.

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Today we can see excessive consumption of natural resources such as air, fresh water, oil, and so on. The usage is increasing at a very dangerous pace and is already reaching critical levels. What are the reasons contributing to this? What should be done to minimize the effects?

Nowadays, there is a considerable rise in terms of relying on natural resources including air, fresh water, oil etc. Due to the fact that this increasement occurs speedily, it becomes more hazardous day by day. I would like to mention some of its causes and possible solutions to prevent it.

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Some people think it is important to know National news while others have opinion that International news are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

A group of individuals present the view that national news is crucial, whereas other believe that global news is more significant. I strongly agree with the latter opinion.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical.

Moving to another country for the purpose of work or education has become common nowadays. However, people has to speak a foreign language while staying in a different country which leads to many social and practical problems.

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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Rap is impacting the different ways in the world today. Few mennesker believes that the song is good To the person and the community and other people think that music has a bad impact on both. In this ,easy I will explain both views.

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In a number of counties, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

For decades, developed countries have improved public transport substantially. A recent controversy revolves around the question of the not important transportation development; commentators interestingly dispute whether building new fast-track lanes for fast trains or modernizing current public transport as a whole should hold this position. This essay will explore both sides of the debate and provide detailed analysis to aid readers with deciding on the most crucial transportation development.

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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, big capital have changed a property from the past in a good way but it is also changed in a bad way too. The big place have more pollutions because it has a tonne of technology that produces the pollutione. I strongly believe that life in the countryside is better in terms of health as in the countryside does not really have a poolution.

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To improve the job prospects,some people want the secondry schools to spend more time teaching communication and business skills and spend less time teaching history.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, communication and business skills are crucial for efficient working which contributes the organisation to being successful and increasing profit. However, history is not practical in actual circumstances. I partially agree with this statement, my ideas and perspectives will be included in this essay.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. what extent do you agree or disagree?

The pie chart demonstrates information about employment in the United Kingdom in 1998 and 2012. This pie chart contains details such as the gender of employees and whether they are working a full-time or a part-time job.

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In many countries, fewer and fewer people go to universities to study science. What’s the reason for this? What can be done to encourage people to learn science.

In our modern times, students who prefer to study in major in science is less and less. The reason for the problem may be from education or students. This essay will look at the reason for this and the purpose of the solution.

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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the fuel cost. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that raising the cost of fuel is the most effective method to solving the world's environmental problems. While I accept that this policy is good to some extent, I believe it is not the best because there are much better measures to reduce environmental issues.

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