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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many countries schoools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the cuases of this? What solutions can you suggest?

These days lots of countries schools suffer from student’s seriously rude behavior. In this essay, I will talk about causes and solution for deal with this problem.

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

Nowadays, tourism industry results in developing english as a predominant language across the glob so that rarely can we find anyone taking responsbility in this sector that does not know this language. This essay argues the merits of having a widespread language like better communication and nourishing the businesses and also some related drawbacks such as cultural issues. Finally, some concluding remarks are discussed in the last section.

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The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum?

Extracurricular activity plays an important part in our environment today. However, I believe creativity still holds a vital role in our current society and should be included in our education syllabus.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our envirioment. What causes global warming? What solution are there to this problem?

These days we are facing towards to one of the major global warming problems that they are jeopardizing to our natural world.we will discuss what influences climate change and how we can solve these problems together

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some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunitybto help others. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that one of the prominent benefits of being affluent is that they can think of others. I, personally agree with the said notion that rich people can play a crucial role in uplifting the condition of poor people because of mainly two reasons; fristly, they are capable of doing various charitable works. Secondly, they can create employment opportunities for people.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you thinks this is a positive or negative situation.

In some countries, there is a viewpoint that owning a home is more important than renting one. I think the reason causing this situation related to many aspects, such as the national culture and policy. Although I think owning a home has advantages in many ways, I still hold a negative attitude towards this situation because of the economic and social pressure this viewpoint has been leading.

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Completing university is the best way to get a job. while others believe that experience and developing soft skills is more important. discuss both views and give your opinion

Job searching required some qualifications to meet, especially a level of education and practices. However, Employment after passing higher education or after practical knowledge of handful skills such as teamwork, communication, interpersonal and cooperation is a topic of concern. I believe that skills are more important because they are taught at anyplace . In the upcoming paragraphs I will elaborate these further.

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Some say that the most important thing abpit beimg rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extend do you agree pr disagree?

Some people believe that one of the prominent benefit pf being affluent is that one can think of other people's well-being. I, personally agree with the said notion because of mainly two reasons; firstlt, they have the ability to perform varulus charitable works. secondly, they can create job opportunity.

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Some people believe teenagers should focus on all subjects equally, whereas other people think that they should concentrate on only those subjects that they find interesting and they are best at. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Currently, new generations of youth are trying to change the academic scheme by focusing on those subjects they are good at. Nevertheless, conservative thinking of some people consider that an holistic development is crutial for enhancing their skills and consequently being well-rounded in all aspects of working life. In this, essay I will expose each point of view and give my opinion based in my own experience.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Globally, if any country’s player win medals in any sports on international level, It seems to be extremely proud movement for that country’s people. In order to have best performance in internationals games every try their best. Due the fact of more achievements some countries provide special training to their athletes, instead of providing sports facilities.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many people think that peers should start studying a foreign language at primary level because it can make them more capable to pick things in any society if students start studying the foreign languages in higher or secondary level, this will make the student uncomfortable. In this essay, we will study about the benefits and harms of learning foreign languages.

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More and more people are leaving countryside to live in cities. Do more advantages or disadvantages of this development for environment

An increasing number who moved from cities to rural areas occurred in several countries. In this essay, i will explain both sides benefits and drawbacks towards the environment regarding this trend.

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Some people believe that it is ok to put the needs of humans over environmental concerns. While others feel that protecting the environment should be priortized. Discuss both views.

Environment and human are one part of ecosystem on earth, they are always living side by side. Some individuals believe that there is no problem if human needs can be put over environmental concerns, while others argue that they should priortize the protection of environment. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and deliver some explanations.

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It is common nowadays for each member of family to have their own peace of modern technology . Some people think that this will lead to a break down in the family realationships and communication to what extend do you agree or disagree.

In our new modern world, each person who is related to a family has a particular personal technological device ; however , a substantial number of individuals guess that this will destroy family ties. Though , I agree with this idea , I will explain some views in this essay to make it clear.

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Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternatives sources. Discuss both views and give own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While a faction of people hold the notion that government should provide financial aide to artists, others argue that it it is a misuse of public resources. This essay will delve into both viewpoints with relevant illustrations and explain my support for the former view.

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User Some people think the manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that shopping centres and producers should limit packaged products. Hence, some individuals think that people have to take responsibility to choose products with a small amount of packaging. However, as my opinion is considered i think manufacturers must take responsibilities to make their products with less harm to pollute the environment.

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Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others see that having a friendly relations is better. what do you think? Discus both points and give us opinion.

It is sometimes said that teacher need to scare students to create a better relationship. While the alternative view is that a close and friend-like interplay between pupils and teacher is better. Personally, I agree with the latter viewpoint since a warm and kind situation will very likely boost individuals' confidence as well as their ability to absorb new information. This essay will shed some light on this issue and explain the writer's point of view.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Education is vital for the growth of everyone. In this modern era, caretakers are paying more attention toward the schooling of their kids as compared to ancient father and mother. The reasons behind this phenomena are career oriented, migration to develop countries, and phentora of choices. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will elaborate these further.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Globally, not all countries stands on the same stage financially. Some countries has more financial power than other countries. Nations having more wealth tend to help poor nations in the form of aids, grants, loans and helps. These aids for poor countries made to make them independent and financially better.

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The role of parents and family, in the future success of a person is more important than knowledge and skills learn at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The idea of becoming successful because of the guardian’s upbringing has more importance than getting education from institutions. I strongly agree with the statement and equally believe that the influence of elders over kids leave more impact on their life rather than school or college. In forthcoming paragraphs, I am going to elaborate it in detail, while giving solid reasons to support my points of view.

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