IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 545

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits. What is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success?

Equality means that people will have the same rights and treatments, and in this kind of society, I believe people will achieve more than in unequal environment.

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some people think that using animals for experimentation purpose is cruel, but other people think that it is necessary for the development of science. Discuss both view and your opinion.

The development of science has greatly involved the use of experimentation of animals. While for some people, they might be against it, others believe however that is for the good and benefit of mankind. In my opinion, the greater benefit lies ahead with the experimentation of these animals for our survival.

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Today, majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over a domestic problem, which is that offspring have to live with their grandparents. This essay is dedicated to analysing some effects of this issue.

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Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?

One of the biggest problems facing all over the world today is that too much food is wasted. Some reasons that account for this trend can be identified, but there are some steps to be taken to change the situation.

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Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The diagram illustrates different stages in the process of recycling bottles made from plastic.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Life always brings something unexpected to surprise us. Sometimes we go through some bad circumstances such as money problems or dissatisfaction at work, so some people say that we should patiently bear these kind of situations, whereas others believe that we should work hard to achieve better in life. In this essay, both perspectives will be discussed, however, I support the latter viewpoint.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

As social media facebook launched in 2014 with many integrated features of chatting , posting pictures and allowing the expression to show around the globe.

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the number of visits to two new music sites on the web for 15 days.

The given line graph illustrates the number of visits to two new music sites on the web for 15 days.

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the rates of smoking in some-land between men and women from 1960 to 2000.

The given line graph illustrates the rates of smoking in some-land between men and women from 1960 to 2000.

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/ 1 point WRITING TASK 2 Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older? Write 250 words.

It is widely known that parents are always buy the things for their children and they allow their children to do whatever they want. I believe that is not the good way to raise a child, because parents need to intoduce them with something is good, and something not. So, when they are older, they could be a well-mannered person.

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In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless.The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In this era of technology innovation, thousands of daily appliances and vehicels are created with advanced technique. Therefore, it is claimed that all types of transportations such as cars, buses and trucks will drive automatically. This expectation means that vehicles will contain only passengers.

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In many developing countries,there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction.What measures could be taken to prevent this?

In a lot of improving countries nowadays appears an issue with decreasing quality of air and water from both industry and construction. The main reason for this is increasing number of toxins which are emitted into the atmosphere by various factories. The solution for this problem can be recycling all the waste materials that are being created.

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Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job,others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead

It is often argued that getting a degree from a university is your pledge of a good job, whilst others disagree and think that it is better to straightforward into work and get more practice instead. In my opinion, job experience is also a main aspect, but a university degree is more important.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificial intelligence robots. What is your opinion?

As development of technology grows, many useful products have been invented. One of the greatest inventions is the artificial intelligence robot. They freed our human’s hands. Additional, they also have higher productivity than human beings. However, artificially robots cannot replace occupations that required human interaction, knowledge, engagement and etc. In this essay, I will talk about my opinions.

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These days, many university courses are offered through the internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures, while others claim that there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, large numbers of online courses are available in many universities. It is often discussed as a controversial issue whether there are more benefits or more drawbacks to distance learning. From my point of view, I believe there are more disadvantages than advantages. In this essay, I will discuss both views in detail.

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the alteration of the Tomson road as it now and its plan in the future.

The given maps illustrate the alteration of the Tomson road as it is now and its plan in the future.

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Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative developments?

Nowadays, people are believing that their marriage life should have to be started by having a fancy ceremony. Unfortunately, a fancy function is concluded by spending many unwanted expenses. From my point of view, couples react accordingly due to seeking guests' attention and being living in a materialist world.I will mention in the below essay the side effect of this kind of development.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Even thought there is a popular agreement that sports and social activities are not as important as classes and libraries and should not receive equal financial support, I have a different opinion. I strongly believe that they should equal financial support. The basis of my opinion is social and medical perspectives.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Even though there is a popular agreement that television advertising directed towards young children aged two to five should be allowed to keep them entertained, I have a different opinion. I totally disagree with this. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

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Some companies require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

It is heated debate whether which part of development that the costume designed by a firm is essential. In this essay, we will discuss on existing benefits and possibly negative results that are able to obtain from a restricted uniform.

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