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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The poor countries often receive money from rich countries, but the poverty issue still exist. Hence, developed countries should give other categories of help to the poor countries rathen than giving money. I extremely agree that the poor countries should receive other type of help due to financial is not only one factor which cause the poverty, but education and health are involved.

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According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourists in the 1960s and '70s, they return home with no experience of the loacl culture. why do you think this happens ? How was tourism diferent in the past?

Nowadays, many people want to travel with friends and family during holidays or free time . According to a famous travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourists in the 1960s and '70s, they return home with no experience of the loacl culture .

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Some believe that charitable organisations should help people no matter where they live. Others argue that charities should only help those living in the country where the charity is based. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are many charitable organisations in the world.Some of them have expanded their charity works beyond their home country while some are only based in the country where they built. According to some people, they argue that all charitable organisations should expand their work in overseas while others tell that they should operate in their region. I agree with the phenomenon of charitable organisations should help people without considering their place because everyone in the world should be benefited specially victims.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There is an arguable discussion about the main subject at primary school, such as history or Science and Technology. This essay argue that science and technology should be the focus at academy; however, this essay will still cover both sides.

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Some people think that teachers at school are more responsible for children’s intellectual and social development than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a dilemma for some individuals that school teachers hold heavier responsibility over the parents on children’s cleverness and communication skills. I do not believe such statement is true since I understand that while it is possible to be an educated person, being someone who is decent requires many qualities because Intelligence is something which can be taught, but a person is in need of nurturing for developing decency.

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Nowadays, more people are becoming overweight. Some people think that the solution is to increase the price of fattening food? To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Today, fatty food is blamed for an rising number of overweight people. One school of thought holds that country authorities should raise the price to combat this phenomenon. While I accept that this perception is somewhat justifiable, I assert that the solotion also brings some drawbacks to that notion.

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Some people think that young criminals should receive the same punishment as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Opinion

The matter of the amount of chastiseing adolesant offender who commit crime as same as adults has become a controversial debate. While I disagree with tough punishments, some of crimes which tennegare commit should not receive light punishment.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Students want to learn additional subjects in addition to the main subject at some universities. On the other hand, I believe that there is a need for more involvement in the main subject for a good qualification. In this essay, we will discuss both of these views, and I will try to explain my point of view.

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Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals form dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has been a global concern that the number of wildlife creatures on Earth has been decreasing gradually. A vast amount of opinions have emerged regarding this issue. One of them is that we should come up with solutions that will protect the animals from going extinct. Meanwhile, other parties think that we ought to focus on the problems in our society first. For that reason, the upcoming essay will discuss both point of views.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether businesses act as a vital part of the society and have some resposibilities or not is a subject of public debate and concern. There are some truth about this claim based on crucial grounds that I am concivably agree and will argue in the following essay.

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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree.

One of popular methods to overcome the criminal issues is prison. On the other hand, there some people believe that education proposes fruitful suggestion to reduce the illegal act. I personally ultimately agree with proposing education as fundamental step related to several points of view.

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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?

One of popular methods to overcome the criminal issues is prison. On the other hand, there some people believe that education proposes fruitful way to reduce the illegal act. I personally ultimately agree with proposing education as fundamental step due to several points of view.

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Some people think that children should not watch television as it has negative effects while some people believe that they should watch television as it helps them in their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is thought by some people kids should not watch television program as it has damaging effects while other thought watching television programs can bring some advantages in their future. In my opinion, young kids can develop their language as well as their problem solving skills, but it should be under adult supervision with a given time.

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ome people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion

There are many important factors that influence the development of a children, especially its environment. For those who believe friends and media such as televisions or other streaming platforms as the main factors that help to shape children's way of thinking or point of view, it may be because in their perspective, children tends to spend more time doing activity such as watching television, listening to music, hanging out with their friends, and other activity that do not involve family. Moreover, they also believe that those media have more influence on children because it could easily catch children's attention most of the time, specifically in some contents where it was made to cater to children's interest.

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Countries spends large amount of money on sports competitions. Do you think the advantades outweight the disadvantages.

The phenomenon of countries' huge expenses for sports competitions has brought various advantages and disadvantages. From my perspective, the drawbacks have exceeded the benefits.

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Public concern regarding a lot of crimes in many notions is still ingreasingly topical since now and the next ten years. These problems occur because many counties still can not tackle an increase of the unemployment rates and insecurities.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about leg of sleep?

It is undeniable that sleep plays an indispensable role in individual's life.It is vehemently contended by few sections of society thatin this contemporary era, numerous masses are going through sleep issues which has detrimental impacts on their body. This essay intends to cast light on contributing factors and remedial measures to put a halt on it. Further, I will explicate about the matter in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some think that hosting an international sporting event is beneficial for a country while others disagree (advantages / disadvantages)

International events such as Olympic games, FIFA World cup and F1 Grand Prix are very popular. Therefore, some would argue that international events could bringing several advantages to its host country, however some are disagree with that statement. This essay will argue despite international events are very expensive to held, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks because it attract a lot of tourism

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Some people think that hosting an international sporting event is beneficial for a country, while others disagree. Do the advantages of hosting a major sporting event outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, hosting an international sporting occasions may bring several benefits to the host country, ranging from the higher number of visitors to financial income. However, there are pros and cons in this situation. In my opinion, hosting an international event will increase income for local government, advertising the country culture as well as an increasing in tourism, nevertheless it also brings negative effects in local security, and it required a large amount of money from the government.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People often argue that if they get into a bad situation, it is easy to admit the problem. On the other hand, some people believe that it is time to improve from the mistake. In general, This essay will discuss both view and try to add some examples.

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