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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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It is sometimes said that social media friends are not real friends? Give out your opinion?

Today, people are spending a lot of time on social media and relying too much on their networks. Some elites believe friendships on social media are not real. I agree with this statement because people spend time on social media for entertainment not new commitments as well as they publish wrong information about their lives.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exloited and that thery should have the same rights as humans, while others arque that humans must employ animals to satsisfy their various needs, including for food and research.

Although, a group of people believe th animals should have the same equal level of rights as humans . So, it should not be exploited by people. I agree with the people who believe humans can use animals as their food and for research purpose also.

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There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming, and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being. What can be done to discourage people from using their cars? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the use of cars is increasing day by day globally which contributes to global warming and it is affecting to human healths too . In this essay, I will explain my views on how we can discourage people from using their cars by taking some examples from the Newspaper and Journal.

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Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to anaudience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

Even though public speaking is one of the essential thing in life, not everyone good on it. Some people think that school have an important role to develop this skill, while others argue that everyone can improve this ability by join any courses. This essay will express complete agreement with the first viewpoint and will justify the reasons how can this skill can simplify our daily life and relate to another skills.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Currently, there are many qualified graduates from university who are unemployed. In my opinion there are several factors contribute to this phenomenon. But, the government and the university have to do something to prevent this trend continues in society.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors, may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many best graduating students are facing difficulties in finding a job. The writer identifies that limited job opportunities and low soft skills from the graduates are the main factors. Providing a wider job opportunities and a good curriculum might be the best solution.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this advanced era, the environmental problems are increasing day by day due to multiple factors. some individuals believe that the cause of envionmental problems is endangered species of flaura and fauna and on the other hand some say that there are number of other reasons such as increase in the motor vehicles, wrong disposable methods of waste.I will discuss both point of views.

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"Time is money" give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience to what extant do you agree or disagree?

Time is money and time is gold are few statements that show how valueble time is nowadays. i agree with this statement because without proper time management it can hinder our progresssion in work and we will cherish our loved ones more.

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Some people believe that education and healthcare should be free of charge and funded by the government. Others think that it should be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In contemporary society, schooling and health maintenance play vital roles in the daily lives of the citizens. While some claim that these two elements should not be charged to the inhabitants and funded by the authorises, others are of the opinion that the citizens should pay for these services as it is a part of their responsibility to contribute to the development of the country. Personally, I do agree with the latter as I believe the fees and the funds be taken by the government will be used for supporting other several aspects of life and those that benefit for both their citizens and their country. This essay will examine both views to portray a reasonable conclusion for my opinion.

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Employers now tend to prefer employees with good social skills in addition to good qualifications. In fact, social skills are getting more and more important compared to qualifications. Do you agree or disagree?

The social skills are of the utmost significance in the workplace. As a result, employers tend to recruit workers who are the best at communication skills along with good academic performance and social skills as important as compared to qualifications. strongly agree with this statement because interpersonal skills enhance the employee's career as well as expand the professional career. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission outweighthe diadvantages ?

The majority of museums have an enterence fee, while others are free of charge. In this essay, i will explain why the benefits of charge of the museums overshadow the potential drawbacks.

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Nowadays, a growing numbers of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There is no denying the fact that curing of diseases is something crucial for all people. While it is a commonly held belief that these days numerous patients prefer to search for alternative medicines and treatments rather than going to visit their usual physician, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that if ill humans seek for alternative medicines without the consultation of their doctors, a lot of drawbacks will happen.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. What is your opinion? Write your response not less than 250 words. You get 40 minutes to complete this task

Advertisements plays a significant role in our daily basis. However, People are divided in their opinion reagarding Commercials are motivating them to purchase unwanted products or whether it gives us knowledge of up to date items to live a better life. In this essay I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion with suitable examples.

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Today people are travelling more than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

In recent time, travelling and exploring the new things get popular among the people. In this essay I will first discuss the reason behind this and then followed by the benefits of travelling. The prominent reasons behind this was so many cheap tour packages or travelling agencies and due to influence of social media.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, youngsters are more pressured than in the past in order to reach academic success. Therefore, some people argue that non-academic disciplines ought to be taken away from schools, so as to let students focus on the most important subjects. Personally, I strongly disagree, in fact students should keep on studying non-academic subjects.

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there is no doubt that there is a significant change in all areas like population, education and environment worldwide including my country. The issues that public can face in upcoming years are overcrowding with less resources as well as unemployement. However, these issues can recover by using suitable methods such as using family planning methods, and by making education compulsory. The following paragraphs will elucidate both stances in detail with lucid examples.

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Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success?

Achieving success in career or education has been targeted by many people. Actually, a success could provide plenty of meanings to these people. While others are trying to define the meaning of success, I would also share my view about being successful, as this essay will explain my possession.

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamor and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people have argued that in recent years many celebrities have shared a negative influence on the younger generation by being well-known to enrich themselves but not focussing on quality of their performance. The writer totally agrees with that opinion because it can set up a negative mindset on earning money for their life and unrealistic goals for their future to the younger generation. This essay will explain more on those two views of the statement.

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Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Equality between genders is a topic of concern in this modern era. It is believed that an educational institutes should maintain a balance among men and women for admission. However, I also concur with this phenomenon.

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Many parents send their children abroad to study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the phenomenon.

People often send their kids to learn overseas which gave the pros and cons for the situation. Going abroad impact the children in a good way and in a bad way. This essay will provide the discussion about it.

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