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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many young people today leave school with a negative attitude towards learning. Why？What can be done to encourage a positive attitude to learning in young people？

It is generally acknowledged that a significant number of pupils give up studying at their school with a negative tendancy regarding studying. There are certain reasons why they behave such a trend, and suggest possible ways to handle this situation.

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The death penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime. To what extent do you agree?

The death penalty is still practised in some parts of the world. It is believed, that it is the best way to reduce serious crime. If killing criminals really diminish cases of murder are discretionary.

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In some countries, people prefer to rent their home rather than buy one. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of renting a house?

Many people choose to rent their apartment over purchasing a new flat in some countries.

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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

It is said that in the past shopping was daily domestic task, however they only buy a things which is necessary. while more and more folks now a days regard a shopping as a hobby. This essay will not only highlight that shopping is positive trend , but also give specific reasons.

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Getting promotion is one of the biggest driver for people to apply to themselves and work hard in the modern workplace. Why do you think people are so driven to get promotion? What other factors influence people to work hard?

In this present-day world,it has to be said that people are willing to face hardships and challenges in the workplace for getting promotions.This means not only getting up-gradation but also having other benefits such as incentives,medical clams and social status.This is why most people challenge themselves to do diverse work in their workplace.This essay will enunciate the theme in detail with other attractive factors of this trend with appropriate instances.

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Subjects like arts, music, and drama are more important than other school subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?

Besides my academic and professional endeavors, I also love painting and have actively participated in most of the art workshops. This has served as an excellent stress buster for me over the years from my sedentary lifestyle. I have conducted numerous crash course camps for kids to teach them the art of drawing. These creative skills have imbibed a sense of proactiveness in me and apply a thoughtful approach to any task I accomplish.

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TASK 2 Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise. However, people are walking less on a daily basis. What has made it happen and how to deal with this?

Health experts claim that walking is the best form of workout. On the other hand, people have walked less daily. The reason is because of the online network and the pandemic. However, we can solve this by having a routine or a change in lifestyle.

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The population for India and China has high growth drastically. Do you agree or disagree? for checking

The plan illustrates the changes from the year 2010 to the present.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Organizations which thrive for profit employ different marketing strategies to enter the market or occupy a share big enough in there. In order to be competitive, corporations try to sell themselves as innovators and claim that their offered products are new or developed in some sense. This can be because of the perception by consumers who think that new products will handle new problems unlike old versions and another reason could be just simple interest of human nature to try something new. This essay support this phenomena as a positive case.

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Today more and more toursts are visiting places where conditiond are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

It is true that nowadays human beings more visiting difficult places, such as the Sahara Desert or Antarctic. Even though this trend can be beneficial because people likely to hit the gold of their life, the main disadvantage is that people could be face the problem which can be overlooked.

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All children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earliest grades. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people around the world advocate that learning a new global language is advantageous when teaching in the early years of life. I totally agree with this opinion because of its beneficial affects in long term career opportunities.

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Some psychologist recommend that to overcome stresses in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time of the day. Do you agree or disagree?

How am I supposed to answer this question, though I with desperation and anxiety as I stare at the blank page on my desk. This is my first time sitting for an external exam, although I have conquered the last few pages without any difficulties, I find myself hopelessly stuck at the last one. To add to my misery, I realized that this question also brings the highest mark- precisely eight marks.

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Some people believe that children at secondary school should be streamed, i.e. taught in classes according to ability, rather than being taught in mixed-ability classes. Do you think the advantages of streaming children at secondary school outweigh the disadvantages?

I would like to choose iron as the mineral that I have to consume more. Women has a higher risk of getting Iron deficiency. The reason is that women lose a large amount of blood during menstruation, haemoglobin in blood contains iron so losing blood means losing iron. This makes women at a greater risk in iron deficiency. As a result, it is more important for me to consume more iron. Besides, Iron is the essential part of haemoglobin, which is important to transport oxygen from the lungs to the body. As an athlete, I need to have sufficient oxygen to transport to my muscle during training as oxygen is needed for respiration to produce more energy. So I personally intake more haem iron such as red meat than non-haem iron as haem iron has a higher proportion of iron and it helps to overcome the influence of

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5. Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today, what are the causes of global warming and what measures can government and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Generally speaking, global warming is a crucial problem that all living creatures have fronted and in the future probably this obstacle maintain its importance. This essay will examine the main causes of global warming and possible solutions to this issue.

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Some people believe that having a job you enjoy is more important than earning a high salary. To what extentdo you agree or disagree?

There are 2 types of people in the work environment, some people work for money and, on the other hand, some work because they love what they are doing. What if one decision was made, to stop giving salaries to people who love their job? Would they continue working? I, personally, think that the answer would be no.

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Motorized flight is the greatest invention in the modern world. No other invention has had a more significant impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It’s certainly true that the invention of motorized flight has had a profound impact on both our lifestyles and society as a whole. But I feel it is unfair to downplay the role of other equally, if not more, important inventions.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

These days, owing to the sophistication in technology, the mode of interaction in society has taken a paradigm shift. Although online communication comes with easy access, I believe it is affecting folk's relationships negatively in spite of strengthening the bonds of the community.

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Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?

Donating to charity regardless amount of their income can be another social responsibility. I completely agree with being philanthropic through giving a percentage of revenue, because in my opinion humanity should be generosity each other. This essay will discuss two reasons for the agreement and then overall it. Firstly, contributing to those who need aid is major satisfaction and desire to do over and over. This rises from the moment of belief that animals and children, or other things are protected by your readiness to give what you have. For instance, the motivation from donations impacts their relatives to put forward more awareness about supporting charities. Secondly being economical is another privilege of it. This means those who have the intention to dedicate a percentage of their income to the charity may reduce the incidents of their expending their money on needless. For example, making savings to do donations is one sign of financial discipline. On the othe...

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More than 50 percent of the world population lives in some sort of a democracy. It is the best way for people to make sure their opinions are represented. However, a lot of people feel democracy has its drawbacks.

Democracy is a government by the people, through elected representatives. More than half of the countries in the world use a form of democracy, but is it worth it?

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Some people say in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learnig facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an assumption that the educational system is just focusing on theoretical issues rather than experimental ones which is really problematic for students since they are graduated and going to be employed. In my opinion, it is completely true and this is a big challenge that our training system is facing.

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