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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reason for this? How can people research this?

Although modern society requires human to become extremely busy, people are still fascinated with their houses, especially if the houses have a rich cultural history. Discoveries about our home rich background lead to a deeper connection with the location we live in, generating mental health benefits. This task has been made very easy with the arrival of the Internet.
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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries. What problems does it cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

A number of individuals who are very qualified and experienced at their job is increasing around the world and they prefer leaving their own countries to work in rich countries. Unfortunately, this causes a lot of problems such as reducing of workforce and increasing of property among people of unwealthy countries. To solve this issue, the governments should create better opportunities to work for knowledgeable residents and increase the quantity of facilities such as schools and hospitals.
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What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad? Try to do this under exam conditions — try to avoid looking at any notes you've made while studying this section. Remember, in the exam you'd have about 40 minutes to complete this task.

In globle contemporary eras, there are increasing waves of migration, this trend has raised the concern and discussion about its pro and cons. This essay will compare both view in depth, and In my perspective, both sides hold its merits, and whether it is worthy or not greatly depends on the caracters of each people.
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Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?

Everyone has a dream to live in a good situation, but unfortunately they have not any ideas to be an ideal society. To be a perfect society there are many elemants we have to follw them up. In this statement I will write the most important of them.
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Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss these points of view and give your own opinion.

It is argued that skilled workers including doctors and engineers are ought to work in the same country where they received their education. While these workers should be thankful for teaching offered at these places, it is unfair and unnecessary to confine people working in one place.
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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadyas, technological progress has been drastic improved. Everyday at least there are a new upgraded technologies such as computers. As a device that have a function to manipulates information and data, computers become the most ingenuity device of the last hundred years. In fact, I agree with those who feel that computers are the most creative creation for the last hundred years.
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some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

in today's world, most people think we have too many option. technology and the internet have created many choices for us. I agree with this point of view that it has more advantages than disadvantages.
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The plans below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and how it was developed in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the change in the layout of the library’s ground floor between 2001 and 2009. Overall, the library underwent extensive rennovaion, which reflected a shift towards a more diverse collection with modern facilities.
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Many cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solution can you suggest.

Nowadays, many cities are struggling to figure out how to solve the problem of a housing shortage. The main reason for this is a trend of urbanization, people from countryside tend to move from small cities to bigger ones. The optimal solution for the government would be to invest in small towns and develop infrastructure there.
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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's world, some young people play their cellphones from time to time. The reason for this double-edged phenomenone is prone to be complex.
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Question: University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

In our contemporary society, many students are leaving their home to participate in various courses in foreign nation. While personally I agree that transition for can lead to some difficulties for people, however I if our approach to this be cautious, I would argue this trend benefits outweigh its problems.
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Currently, more and more people respect elders and become convinced that old people should live with their families, which is in contrast to the view that old people should live at a nursing home. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the past, the view that old people should live with their family is more common in most of Asian countries. On the other hand, the western countries tend to have the view that old people should live at a nursing home. Currently, elder living with family become more populer in westen country. This essay will discuss about the pros and cons of living with family and living at a nursing home.
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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the upcoming year, lots of individuals think that the growing using variety of technology such as computers and mobile phones is affecting negatively on young people’s writing and reading skills. Firstly, this essay will discuss, how machines can effect by negatively people’s abilities and secondly, the importance of using computers and phones.
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting is very important for people. Why might this be a case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

According to some, if people could buy their own house, it would be better for them. I believe it has some advantages such as individuals don’t have to pay rent monthly and it is not necessary to move to another place every year.
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Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think in open spaces is important building houses. And some people say that planting trees is important. All thought different.
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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Some people admit that to prevent traffic problems and the high level of pollution governmnet should increase the price of petrol. I strongly disagree with this statement, because such forceful way would not work in a democratic country, hence it most probably will cause disagreement among people. Instead, it would be better to create comfortable infrastructure to motivate people change from private to public transport.
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Some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throughout their courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern days, a large number of people believe that universities have to provide the student's theory lesson because that lesson is very needed for some type of work such as science, archaeology and building whereas others think that giving practical training is useful for students to society. In my opinion, the universities both of the above-mentioned arguments should be kept in balance.
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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the age of capitalism and large business investments, it is almost certain that you can see advertisement of product with the the label of new and companies cannot be blamed. It is shown that this marketing strategy is very successful even though, it might not be usefull in long term development.
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Some people think that university should not provide theoretical knowledge, but give practical training that is beneficial to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In modern days, the large number of people believe that university should give practical training that has many benefit to society whereas others think that improve theoretical knowledge is beneficial some majors such as technology and science. In my opinion, university programm has to equal in both of this statement.
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Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The number of people who have confidence in that job application people skills are more important than the degree skills. I agree with this and I will discuss it.
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