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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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2.Nowadays, people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat balanced diet. What are the reasons behind this? Suggest possible solutions to control this

Today, people in big cities face the problem of having unhealthy and less nutritious diets also often skip their meals. This essay aims to give the reason for this situation and also put toward for solution.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this

In many nations around the world, more and more individuals are becoming interested in searching out the history of their houses or buildings. This essay will examine the possible reasons behind it and how individuals can research it.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and work place tidy with everything organized and in the correct places. What is your opinion about it?

Many individuals believe that it is crucial to keep everything clean and in order at residencial places and in offices. However, from my perspective everyone should consider this practice mandatory because it will benefits them on many stages of life in future. I am going to briefly discuss this in my forthcoming paragraphs with authentic examples to support my points of view.

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The internet has changed the way people share and use information, but it has also create problem that did not exit in the past. What are the main problems assosiated with the internet? What solutions can you suggest?

With advent of the internet, usage and transfer of information has been progressed. This development created some issues which is not encounterd earlier. In this essay would delve in to some problem assosiated with this and put forward some viable solutions.

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Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and prevention measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Health is a basic right that every human should have. Thus, every government always have some of their budget to provide an adequate medical treatment. Be that as it may, however, there is an opinion that a country must also have a big proportion of its fund for health education and prevention measures rather than only for medical treatment. I strongly agree that such strategy will be the best step to improve health quality since it can minimizes the higher cost needed for treatment in the next future as well as be a generational cure for a disease. This essay will shed some light on this issue and the writer's point of view.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In these modern days, the development of technology is advanced and plays an important role in our life. Everyone will have some electronic gadgets such as smartphones, laptops and tablets. In addition, some children might spend a lot of time on their smartphones. In this essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of this case.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans for the Southwest Airport in its current state and after the development in the upcoming year are illustrated below.

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Nowadays, many people choose to be selfemployed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being selfemployed?

There is no denying the fact that many people tend to be self-employed, instead of working in companies. This essay will discuss some reasons behind this phenomenon, and express the disadvantages of this case.

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Blood sports (any spots involving Killing or shedding of blood as bull fighting, cockfighting or hunting)have become hot topic for debate in recent years.as society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed.blood sports should be banned.TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

Nowadays, some people think that all creatures like animals can be deployed to entertain the society even by designing some sports programs that may injure the animals. Although such a program may have a special audience, I strongly believe that this should be ceased immediately. In this essay, the reasons which I rely on are presented. Also, some concluding remarks are given afterwards.

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Because of the rising cost of housing, many young people are increasingly being forced to live with their parents into their 30’s. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Humans live in the industrial era where it is more likely to see factories than a housing complex. This phenomenon pushes many individuals, especially young people, to continously live in the same roof with their parents even they are already pushing 30s. The majority say that the advantages outlay the disadvantages and this essay will further that view in the paragraphs below.

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Nowadays, women have full-time work same as men, logically men should share household equally with women. To what extent do . you agree or disagree?

At present, there are many women have full-time employment that as same as men, logically men should engage in doing chores together with their wife fairly. I agree men should share housework with women but not share equally.

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Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their stress and anxiety. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Music play a Vital role in each individual lives and have it's own benefits as well. Therefore, some people believe that music act as a tool to to decrease people's stress and anxiety. I agree with this statement because music has a positive impact on people's lives.

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People nowadays are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. Advertising affects what people think is important and it has a negative influence on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the improving of technology in the world, websites, devices have a giant impact on peoples. Even advertising has soread from just papers or thoughr people into online advertising. And it is said to have a negative influence on people's lives which i completely agree with.

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Today, more and more people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss some effects of rural recession and the cause of this

Recent years have witnessed a lot of people moving from the countryside to the urban areas. This is because of some special reason,this essay will explain some effect and the main roof cause of this movement

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It is becoming increasingly popular to take a year off between finishing school and going to college. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

In this era, gap year, take a year off after graduating from school and before coming to campus, become famous in the humankind. Although this trend looks like create harms, gap year possibly be a good choice as it give some benefits for the students.

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Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, plethora of advertising is targeting people in the younger age. There are some opinion that such activities have drawbacks and must be banned. I strongly believe that kids should not be served by bunch of advertisements since it will create a consumtive generation and influenced in parents' earnings. This essay will shed some light on this issue and provide the writer's point of view.

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Some people believe that all children should have a pet or an animal to look after. How far do you share this view?

So important is a statement for encouraging children to have a pet that it would bring some possible benefit. I disagree with this opinion for some extent and I will elaborate below.

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Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities, while others think it is better to have students of different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion?

It is believed by handful individuals that the educational institutions should take admissions according to learner's learning abilities, whereas some others considered that having students from all different abilities is more beneficial for learners. In my opinion, learning from different abilities students can make more better results.

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The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, coordination skills plays vital role in everyone’s life . It is considered by some individuals that team games are the excellent method to understand the importance of of cooperative ability for pupils. This eassy would not only outline my argument but also, elaborate some illustrations in upcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In recent years, there has been a trend in some countries where people get more and more interest about the history of the house or building they live in. This essay will discuss the reasons for the trend and the methods that can be used for historical research.

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