IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 544

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many countries,the number of animals and plants are declining.Why do you think is it happening? How to solve this issue?

There is a rapid decline in the amount of vegetation and animals in many countries, because of a number of various factors, that can be natural which is climatic or man made due to humans disturbing the environment. Natural factors include famine and drought. Man made factors include export and import, infrastructure development, different chemicals. Therefore the earth has find it quite challenging to retain it's pride which is the vegetation and animals. In recent years science have proved how there has been a decline in different types of species. Export and import has a hand also.

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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

My name is Justine Zanini, and I am writing to you because I would like a bridging visa B to visit my family from the 14th of June until the 28th of August.

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Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?

Nowadays, worldwide it has been accepted that, the problem of land, water and air pollution is escalating at an alarming rate. This problem is bringing immense impact for humanity. There are several reasons for this problem, and it is believed that, government and individuals both collectively should contribute towards the solutions. In my upcoming paragraph I shall discuss some of the reasons and possible solutions to reduce global contamination.

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Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although these days many pursue international peace, there are a myriad of countries which have nuclear weapons. Some said say that the weapons are beneficial for the world, however, others believe that nuclear weapons have negative impacts on the world rather than advantages. This essay will discuss both sides of view about this argument and elaborate

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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important.

In modern life, People have different views about animals in the zoos, some people think keeping animals in cages is a cruel and illogical to limit animals’ movement while others think it plays an important role to keep and protecting rare species. In the essay, I am going to discuss these views according to environmental, personal and economic perspectives.

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Nowadays people are able tonuse internet to do an incresing number of task Is this a positive developmemt or negative.

In last few decades, advancement in the field of technology has increased so fast that it enables individuals to perform many tasks. While the internet allows people to do many things with its inbuilt innovation, it becomes an essential part of life now. However, the moot point is if it is a positive or negative development. This essay will discuss both impacts including relevant examples from the experience.

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Many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online and give your opinion.

Nowadays, online shopping is becoming more and more popular,in recent times It has been observed that people prefer to buy a product from an online platform rather than a shop.It has some merits and demerits both pros, as well as demerits, are elaborated on in the next paragraphs

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In many large cities, people waste hours of their time every day because of traffic congestion on the roads. What are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest.

With the growing population in contemporary cities, traffic is one of the major problems in today's world. Almost all people are stuck in traffic and waste time on the roads during their daily habits. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons for this congestion and then describe the possible solutions to the problem.

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Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

many people argue that contemporary society makes people being busier than in the past leading to they don`t have much time for their kids ,whereas others suppose children get less attention for their parents. Therefore , I believe that parents still spend as much as their occasion on their kids.

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Some people think high-end technology can prevent and cut down the rate of committing crime. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that technology is changing the routine of our life rapidly.

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Is economic development necessary to reduce poverty or should economic growth be stopped as it is damaging the environment. Discuss both side.

In the existing era of twentieth century where we all are living-in, Economic development is a major concept. To live a life with all the comfort and with better living standard every individual have to participate or contribute in the economic development. On the other hnad, Not everyone is in the favour of development side. As they do have concern regarding the safty of environment. For that side of majority economic development is not everything. Therefore, we are going to discuss about both the sides.

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Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It always starts with the perception of community, as every human being has their own way of thinking when it comes to giving back to the society. In the ,essay we will briefly discuss about both of the opinions and in the ,end I will also give my point of view.

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The knowledge we gain from our personal experiences is more valuable than the knowledge we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

People could gain more knowledge from many resources. Examples of those include reading books,learning from experienced people, studying by themselves with online searching, and more practice. However, in my opinion, practical learning which may be from real circumstances outweighs theoretical knowledge.

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Childhood obesity is becoming a problem thoughout the developed world . Because of this , some people think that adverts for fast food , sweets and sugary snacks should not be allowed in schools and colleges . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this ?

There is no doubt that obesity in offspring becoming a challenging issue all over the world . Many people believe that advertising for fast foods is the major problem of this issue so that should be banned in institutes and universities. Although I agree with the statement that sweets and sugary harms childhood health .

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this opinion.

For centuries, language is the major source of communication.It is argued that the annual extinction of many languages is not a problem because having few languages will lead to a more convenient life.I totally disagree with this statement which will affect the country's culture.The below essay will elucidate the importance of language to culture,followed by a conclusion.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people argue that these days modern people have too many choices. In my opinion, I partially agree with this statement, because the number of choices are increasing dramatically in some areas, and these changes discourage people to decide properly, although job markets are more improved than the past.

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Memorization of information through repetition (rote learning) is an important part of most educational systems. Do the advantages of this method outweigh any limitations?

In the most of educational systems, memorizing information with rote learning is valued. Although this approach has several limitations, there are more advantages concerning the long-lasting memory and technique of it.

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Some people think that air travel should be restricted because it cause serious pollution and use up the world fuel resources.to what extent to do agree or disagree

It is often urged that flights should be put to limit to reduce pollution and uses a lot of oil.To a lesser extent, disagree that flights should be put to a limit.

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Some people say that teh best way to improve public health is by incressing the numbe of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other messures are required.

As the development of modern society, the health public has become an issue, some people believe that increasing the amount of activities facilities would help to improve general public health. Others believe different measures should be taken into an account.

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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As per the distinct mindset of different people, society has been divided into two groups. Therefore, this has become a debatable issue, whether, young ones should initiate their study curriculum as early as possible in their life or egin after a couple of years. This essay shall demonstrate both viewpoints and shall conclude with my opinion towards the end.To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in the favour of early learning. Firstly, nowadays, parents des...

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