IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 764

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that growing and planting trees in cities and towns are more important than constructing more housing accommodation. I partially agree with this opinion for several reasons.

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The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The best way to improve health is to exercise daily. To what extent do you agree?

It is undeniable that the most effective way to become more healthy is to do a regular excercise. However, in my opinion, there are some factors that should be taken into consideration to keep our bodies fit.

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Most people think that Money Can’t Buy Happiness . Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In our modern life,more and more individuals believe that nobody can't purchase happiness through wealth.From my way of thinking,this type of opinion is not true.This essay agrees that people may buy almost all things with money.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In recent times, most individuals choose to be sole proprietors rather than work for a cooperating group. This essay will elucidate both reasons and give the negative aspects of being a sole proprietor.

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Online shopping is increasing dramatically how could this trend affect our environment and the kind of jobs required ?

Online shopping has become more popular in recent years. This trend affect the environment in many ways such as by encouraging delivery vehicles on roads. It also change the kind of jobs required to encourage this trend which I will discuss in detail in forthparagraphs.

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Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. What impact does it have on the environmental and people? Who lost their jobs because of it?

It is irrefutable fact that in this modern era an increasing number of more and more humans believe that online shopping is too well-known. This is the reason, it is making a good effect on individualsʼ life with its convenience and simplicity . Yet, this tendency has negative impact on the surrounding world , as well as on the occupation market . This is the reason, many employees can lose their profession .

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Animals “Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.” Discuss both views and give your own opinion

People have different views about the importance of Zoo parks . While zoos seem to be such a prison for animals , I believe that there is no better place to keep wild habitat alive when they are likely to disappear .

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government investment in the arts , such as music and theatre , is waste of money . governments must invest this money in public services instead . do you agree or disagree ?

in this present world, investment is the main language of government to support any project . despite that arts , music and theatre are among many projects that can be enjoyed by government investment . it is agreed that government should invest more in public services . analysing the capability of the discipline of government to invest in improving public services , as well as the limitation in investing in arts and music .

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Are higher taxes or lower taxes better for society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is an indisputable fact that taxes have some merits and demerits for the population. The amount of tax is debatable which become a sensitive topic in this recent day. I personally believe that lower tax is more advisable than higher taxes due to economic level of the society and the government’s wrongdoings.

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The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?

Gay marriages are becoming a very relevant topic of discussion because of the mixed opinions surrounding it. Some people firmly believe that they are bad for society, whereas others preach that people should be free to choose the person they want to be with for the rest of their life, regardless of gender. I endorse freedom of choice and following your heart and for those reasons I support the idea of gay marriages being legal and widly accepeted.

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The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025.

The maps compare the infrastructure of the conference centre in 2010 and a concept in 2025. In general, there are several changes in the right side of this centre and some functional rooms would be added in the future.

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Nowadays many people choose choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

The phenomenon of many people preferring to create their own business rather than work for others as an employee has aroused wide concern among wide circles. This article will discuss about why more and more people tend to open their company and what are the disadvantages of doing this.

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Modern technoloys has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music. Is this a positive or negative development?

There has been a topic raised about modern technology making music and books downloads easier to do. However. Modern technology also creates possibilities to download music and books without having to pay for using the content and breaking copyright laws. The question is it good to have this modern technology with the possibilities to use authors and music creators content for free and how does it impact our society?

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Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of society. Do you think art and music still have a place in today’s modern world of technology?Should children spend more time learning art and music at school? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Since we living in twenty-first century there is no doubt that information technology has played a major part in our day-to-day life. Subjects like music and arts are fading away from our society.on the other hand, many peoples believe that these subjects should remain and every child continue to learn from the early stage of life.I partially disagreed with the point as I believe in modern society Information technology is the most important and children must spend more time learning the technology but at the same time Music and Arts cannot be ignored.

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Today more and more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the travelers?

Is it not a gruesome reality that one easily gets bored following the same routine every day in the life? A person feels like there is nothing new happening in life, and as a result, they choose to travel. The several reasons given by the voyager would be discussed in further paragraphs.

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In many countries, governments spend large sums of money on the arts and this is supported by some taxpayers as worthwhile. Others, however, think that this money would be better spent on health and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In which fields governments should invest public money has always been the object of many debates. It is argued that the field of art should receive more funds, while

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Risk-taking can be critical for people’s working and private lives. I believe the merits of taking chances outweigh the drawbacks.

It is an indisputable fact that people should challenge their self to get the risks in their lives. Regarding to this statement, I totally concur and believe that merits will outweigh the drawbacks.

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Today's essay topic: People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

In all modern societies people are acquainted with drugs, however children are also practising the use of both legal and illegal drugs. Few sociologists believe that adults of society tend to set a bad example. In this essay, I will explore some of the problems associated with it, effects of it and suggest some solutions.

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In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs. What are the causes of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future?

It is undeniable that the role of parents has been changed drastically these days in many societies. This essay will discuss the leading causes of this phenomenon, and I will give certain scenarios related to the parental roles in future.

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