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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this positive or a negative development?

In present time, more freedom is given to youngsters as compare to past in many parts of the earth. I believe this is a negative development. This essay will show disadvantages are far more in contrast of advantages.

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Some people feel that young people face more pressure today than the equivalent age groups did in previous generations. Others think they have a much easier life than their parents did. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Obviously, various generations have own problems and difficulties. According to some people’s beliefs young adults of nowadays encounter more stress than equivalent age people did in the past. However, some people think that they have a much easier life than previous generation did. In this essay I will discuss both sides and present my view.

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Some people believe that the fittest and strongest individuals and team always success in sports,others think that success in sport depends on mental attitudes.Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Few people opine that able-bodied, physically active person with strong leadership and teamwork absolutely will win the game,however they said that success relies on the psychological behavior of a player.This essay will discussed both sides. In my opinion to attain success in every competition ,a team member should possess a good physical and mental ability skills .

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Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Women empowerment has been accepted by the various countries. Nowadays,It has contributed a major role in development of any nation.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

With all the progress made in agriculture, many people all over the world still do not have enough to eat and ssutain life. In my opinion, this happens because of the changes that occur in the economy and can be solved by the government issuing laws and aid to the sector.

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Some people think governments should spend less money on arts and invest more in education. How far do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many governments today allocate significant portions of their national budgets to the

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Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution.

Humanity’s reliance on motorised vehicles has reached levels never seen before in history. With the growth of economies around the world, these numbers are only going to continue to swell. I argue that pollution and the draining of world resources are the most serious problems caused by this trend. Carpooling will be suggested as an effective response to these challenges.

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Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Do you agree or disagree?

These days there are more and more crimes in our society. Most of humans think the best repression for perpetrators is jail. To a certain extent, I agree that confinement is a

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Today’s food travels thousands of miles before it reaches customers.Why is it? Is this positive or negative trend?

It is a common scenario nowadays to transport eatable products to far off places in order to reach out to customers.This essay tends to analyze the possible reasons behind it with supporting ideas,why,in my opinion,advantages of this trend outweight its disadvantages.

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Many people get little or no exercise during the working day or in their free time, and develop health problems as a result. Why do many people do not get enough time to exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Now a day, people are too busy in their industry.They do not find hour to do some activities that helps them to be healthy. however , this because they have been overloaded with task all the generation.In my opinion, there are several ways to become stay healthy by doing some yoga and also maintain a nutritious diet.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowaday, technology has become an integral part of people's lives. There is no denying on the fact that people are becoming exceedingly dependent on information technology. Although over-reliance on technology has some negative points, in my view, the pros of using IT overcome any drawback. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and provide some reasons to support my opinion.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been observed by health experts that overall health of all the human beings is expected to follow downward trend in the approaching years.If questioned, I confidently bolster the statement to a major extent.My inclination is explained in the ensuing paragraphs with appropriate reasons and relevant examples.

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With an increasing overweight population some think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s fast-paced world, even though many are self-conscious of their fluctuating weight, they face difficulty in working out due to the amount of work they are given. As for a Polytechnic student, I can resonate with this; because of the projects I am assigned to, it is no easy feat finding time to do my favourite hobbies – running, jogging and swimming much less taking a walk around in my neighbourhood. This results in my ever-increasing number on the weighing scale. Therefore, I feel that while students may believe that academic should be prioritised, universities should infuse sports modules into all degree courses for all to socialise, balancing their lifestyle.

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Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens.

Food is one of the basic necessities of life. Some people say they eat to live, whereas there are some other food lovers who say they live to eat. Since earlier times, the ladies of the house, prepare food for themselves and their families. But with change in time, a lot of restaurants and outdoor food courts have emerged. The interest of people started diverting from home-made food to restaurant food. The restaurant food became really popular among the youth and they started avoiding preparing food at home. However I am amongst the one’s who prefer to prepare food at home.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It’s indeed humans are the most intelligent being in the world. Because of the innovation of science, Earth is in the palm of the human hand now. Naturel resources should use for the best living of man kinds. It's not the best idea to use all of the natural assets because the resources will come at the end one day. In that case, I strongly disagree with the statement.

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Very few school children learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as a part of school curriculum. Do you agree or disagree?

An academic institute usually deals with science, arts and commerce related subjects while ignores teaching money management and this is why it is often noticed that students who do well in school struggle while taking care of their finances in real life. Having said that, academic and financial intelligence cannot be seen as inherent contradictions, but they truly are two mutually independent competencies. I personally believe that value of money and money management should be taught in schools.

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It is said that music is important for bringing people together from different cultures and ages. Do you agree or disagree?

Although it is believed music causes affection and sharing bonds, in many situations struggles are as main results of differences between musical tastes of age groups and cultural beliefs.

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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

These days to make assignments more fun schools have allowed students to work in teams. While some pupil are willing to work together, some still seek to work individually. Hence, It is no surprise that working in a group or alone can have their own perks. Butaccording to me, working in a group can yield more effecient and faster outputs.

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In order to be successful at a sport, some think you must be physically strong while others believe mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although some people believe that a great number of people must have physical power for success in sport, others assert that mental strength plays significant role in achieving success. In my opinion, I consider that people who want win in sport events have excellent physical power.

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Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?

In this contemporary era, there is a profilic increase can be observed in terms of social isolation of people especially older generation compared to the past. This is due to generation gap as well as rising number of nuclear family. However, there are some measures which should be implemented in order to decline this issue.Both sides of this phenomena will be discoursed and exemplified below.

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