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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?

The globalization and astonishing invention of the internet has a great impact on the learning methods. Although nowadays majority of pupils have used the internet to learn and acquire a required information, libraries have their own importance in providing resources. I partially agree with the above notion and my reasons for the inclination are articulated in the following paragraphs.

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Many students around the world don’t choose science subjects at university. Give the reasons for this and describe the impact on the community?

It is often believed that the most of the school students ignore the science subjects while choosing the specialisation at the university. There can be various reasons and their respective impact on the society that has discussed in the below paragraphs.

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Being a celebrity, such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

A well known person, for instance, A hilited actress or a talented sportsman may have not only lots of difficulties but also have opportunities because of it. Although, being famous within people is an advantage,reduce the privacy of personal life may be a disadvantage. In my opinion, being a general person is better than being a famous person in the society.

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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

In this present world, the usage of technology is constantly on the rise. Even classrooms are among the many places that enjoy the usage and benefits of technology. It is disagreed that classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Analysing the incapability of disciplining classroom students with technology, as well as the limitation in the learning process of students taught with technology will prove this. Firstly, a robotic teacher made with artificial intelligence would lack sufficient control over its classroom students. For instance, it is widely known that kids need to be thoroughly watched by their teachers to be sure that they take their class works seriously and do not fool around when classes are going on. Sadly, this is a task robotic teachers will be incapable of carrying out. Therefore, this makes it clear that classroom teachers will never be totally substituted for technology. Secondly, the learning process of students would be disr...

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Immigration has a major impact on the society. - What are the main reasons of immigration? - To what consequences can it lead?

In the current scenario, there has been a trend where people are migrating to various countries. The increasing migration is due to multifarious causes which can have diverse effects on both the individual and the country. This essay will discuss the major causes and effects of migration. Primarily, people from the under developed countries prefer to move to the developed nations for better education for their children and a higher standard of living for the whole family since living in a wealthy country implies living in a country with stable economy. To give a clear example, a handful of people from countries like Bangladesh and Sri Lanka are seen migrating to the United States and Australia to seek better opportunities, to earn more and live a luxurious life. Furthermore, political or economic instability could also be a reason for migration. However, there is a downside to immigration. Overcrowding is a major drawback which leads to several other problems like lack of e...

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Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people opine that oral communication is more powerful than written communication. Personally, I do not completely agree with this idea.

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Many people prefer using their phones to send text these days than talking 1. What are the reasons for this? 2. Do you think the advantages are more than disadvantages?

Nowadays, Several individuals take preference in utilizing their mobile phones to communicate in text rather than making calls. In my opinion, I believe cost-effectiveness and reference purposes make messaging a better choice.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Many countries around the world are depending on tourism as one of their major earning resources. Sadly, many issues can happen if tourism is not managed reasonably by the government. In this essay, the argument will be showed to prove that the advantages of this totally outweigh the drawbacks. The essay will first represent that tourism provides works for local people and attracts foreign businesses, followed by a reasoning of tourism’s drawback, particularly pollution to the local environment, is not valid.

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People are living longer. Some people think that it causes big problems. Others, however, think the aging population has many advantages for business, government and society in general. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that the longer lifespan of humans creates many thorny problems. Nevertheless, others suggest that this can also bring many benefits to business, government and society. This essay discusses both view points and features my opinion.

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Nowadays more and more people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have a different viewpoint about whether or not letting youngsters hold a crucial position in the governmental bodies. Although some have a negative opinion about this trend I believe that this phenomenon is beneficial to some extent

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There are social, medical and technology problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of the mobile phones?

Over the past decade, technological devices have played an indispensable essential role in human’ lives. Particularly, using mobile phone has become a prevalent and publicly recognized habit. This bring several downsides in social, medical, technology dilemmas which seem to outweigh benefits.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, the issues which are related to population always draw the authority of all countries in the world attention and concern. Nowadays, there are different points of view about some countries that have large number of young adults compared with some countries having the number of older people. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of this matter.

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In some countries, owing a house rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Whether an individual should buy a house or lease an apartment is one of the most burning questions

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has developed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

There is no surprise to say that a TV set is supposed to be one of the most necessary appliance of every modern house.However, seemingly it gradually becomes an indirect culprit that demolishes communication among the member family and even takes a gap between friends. From my everyday knowledge and experience, I strongly agree with this thoughts for some reasons.

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: In order to prevent Covid-19 pandemic from spreading, many extreme measures have been taken such as quarantine, isolation, social distancing, which had significant impacts on different sectors, especially education due to school closure. In such a context, many people suggest that GCSE exam should be abolished to relieve the burden on students and the whole society. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this suggestion. What is your opinion? Write at least 250 words.

That a number of emergency actions including separation, quarantine have been conducted with an aim to forestalling the spread of Covid-19 pandemic had adverse effects on various fields, chiefly education. In that situation, some individuals argue that it is advisable to eliminate GCSE exam to alleviate the burden on juniors and our community. From my perspective, although this proposal has both pro and cons, the benefits from which children can reap gain dominance over its downside.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.

A latest report from New York times has revealed that 63% surveyed people agree that enforcing longer prison sentences is the best method to cut crime, meanwhile the remaining participants think there are enormous different ways which are better than that. I strongly agree with the second statement and the following paragraphs will take a look at both views and give sufficient reasons and examples.

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Task: in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Newspapers or books, a kind of conveying the latest information nowadays,have been playing a crucial role in our society. however, it is believed that those kinds of communication will be replaced by modern ones,which is free and way more convenient. From my own standpoint , i completely concur with this statement,but i believe all kind of printed papers will probably contribute somewhat in our society .

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Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people support that transmitting the information and ideas verbally is far more effective than expressing in writing. While I agree that oral communication is powerful exceedingly, I believe that written communication is equally significant.

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The modern life is harmful for people as it brings a lot of pressure and reduces quality of relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, the world is developing, and people have more modern life than in the past. However, some people think that it is baneful because it brings a lot of pressure and the quality of relationships is reducing while others do no. While I agree that people do not get closer to each other, I disagree that people may be stressful.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it?

In recent times, the global job market has become extremely competitive, leading to high unemployment rates in numerous countries. This unfortunate situation even happens to university students with outstanding qualifications. In this essay, the key factors accounting for this problem are outlined and some possible measures are offered below. Firstly, many undergraduates only focus on theoretical knowledge and tend to ignore the practical applications of what they have assimilated during their school year. Although this studying strategy might provide students with both fundamental and advanced information about their fields of study and help them excel in exams or dissertations, some particular fields related to Applied Science or Business and Marketing require real experiences by conducting actual projects or undertaking work. If the future job seekers fail to meet this requirement, the chance of them being rejected is much higher. Most students, therefore, are advised t...

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