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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Today, many people do not know their neighbors. Why is this? What can be done about this?

In the modern world, technology big impact people's lives, as well as changing human behaviour and routine base on my two main reasons below on my essay.

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Some people believe that to reduce the amount of time people spend commuting (travelling to work), parks and gardens close to city centres should be replaced by apartment buildings for commuters to live in. However, others disagree with this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many people assert that green spaces such as parks and gardens should be replaced by residential areas for enhancing family connections as well as to reduce traffic congestion, while rest of people are against it.Both the views will be discussed below.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that big corporates should not only make money, but also must have duties towards society, this essay totally agrees with this statement, I believe that the aim of a business should be beyond just making profit.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some argue that it is important to accept negative condition. Even it’s an unacceptable job or a salary. Although, others believe that people should change those situations to accept the effect. This essay will discuss the reason and examples of this problem.

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Some people think robots can improve human life in future, while others think robots may affect society in a bad way. Discuss both view points and give your opinion.

Many men and women argue that new technology such as robots could be dreadful to the countries, while others believe that it can bring newly developed life for people in the coming years. This essay will highlight some points on both arguments. In my opinion, these changes can be harmful to human beings by reducing job opportunities.

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Nowadays the majority of people are facing the problems with obesity.What are the possible solutions and how it can be tackled?

Globally,obesity is becoming a rampant issue that has been encountered among offspring and matured people.This essay will give reasons for this trend and also will provide some possible solutions to them.

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Nowadays,a growing number of people with health problem are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is now trendy to select medical treatments aside from doctors when people facing sickness,such as newly invented tablets or recommended by friends. However, I do believe this pose an overwhelming threat to individuals' health condition. Some elaborated reasons as well as my thoughts will be outlined in the essay.

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Nowadays, instead of locally sourced produce, many supermarkets sell a variety of foods imported from countries all across the world. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

In recent times, a variety of grains are sold by many mega-shopping centres which come from other parts of the world, instead of being locally based. I would say that this trend has more downsides than pros because such meals are expensive as well as it can discourage local farmers.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about the reasons of studying foreign languages. While a group believe that traveling or finding jobs may be the main cause of it, some others think it can have other causes. I argue that it depends on a lot of motives.

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It is important for children to learn what is right and what is wrong at any early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree? What sort of punishment should be given?

It is clear that children’s tendency toward misbehaviour should be controled, thus I belive that ought to beeing some penalty for preventing kids from inclining to wrong ways are necessary.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problem will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

Many developed countries are experiencing substantial increases in life expectancy. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.

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Many people opine that all university students should study whatever they like, whereas some people think the university should teaching some subjects that only related to science and technology for students. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most controversial issues around the world is education.Meanwhile,some people think,students should select their field of studywhatever they like.but,the second group believe,they should learn the lessons that they are useful and beneficial for their future.I strongly believe,students should learn subjects that they are interested in.In this essay I will discuss both view with some examples and I will give my opinion.

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More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reason for this? What are the solutions?

The given bar chart demonstrates the number of minutes spent on telephone calls in the UK during the 7-year period from 1995 to 2002.All units are measured in billions of minutes.

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Studying art in schools improves studrnt's performance in other subjects ,because it is easier for multi_skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

Learning forms an essential part of society. Schools that teach art promotes their pupils performance in other subjects as these skills assist students in learning new information; therefore, art should be mandatory in schools. It is agreed that students should have artistic studies at school to develop various skills to facitlitate learning.

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Some people believe that watching TV and playing computer games should be limited and substituted by reading books. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

nowadays the consumption of media and playing computer games increase significantly while some groups have a negative attitude towards that and say we should alternate by encouraging people to read books. in this essay, I want to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of these opinions and in conclusion, I say my opinion.

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The pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to the present day.

The given maps illustrate a number of modifications of a park from the year 1980 to the present.

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People think that students should do work before hiring university study.To what extent do you agree.

Studies and work go hand in hand when it tocomes the day-to-day life. Some may think that students should do work before moving forward to universities for higher educational program. ,Conversely there are some that believe students should learn well before going to work. In this essay, I would like to discuss this topic and share my focus on the same.

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"Plagiarism" in all kinds of writing is becoming more frequent. Some people think plagiarism causes problems,but others accept it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

"Copy and paste" in all kinds of writing is becoming more common.Most people think "copy and paste "causes issues. Also , on the other hand, others accept the fact. I will discuss both views and give my opinion in the essay.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this fact.

In today's world every individual is occupied in his life, spending vacations is the only and effective stressbuster. Therefore, masses enjoy their holidays in the limited tourist hot-spots, thereby putting immense pressure on the available resources. Therefore, tourism has benefits and drawback, which will be enlisted in this essay.

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Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?

In the present world, technical advancement has resulted a variety of robotic equipment to assist human assignments both household chores and professional tasks. In my opinion, this is a positive development and this article will explore the reasons behind this phenomenon.

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