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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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people in many countries consider the influence of role models on young generation's lives to be important. Do you agree or disagree?

Everyone has someone in their lives by who they are influenced and want to become like them. However, the effect of role models on the lives of youth is considered paramount by people in a lot of countries. In this essay, I will discuss about the reasons why I am proponent of this thought.

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Many people still believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get to places -What are the advantages and disadvantages of riding a bicycle?

Travelling has become a paramount part of people’s lives, whether it is from one country to another, inter-city or within the city. People spend about an hour daily travelling from the workplace to their home and vice versa. Among the many modes of commute, a bicycle is believed to be the best method of commuting within the city while others oppose it. In this essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of the same and also talk about why I think that bicycle might be the foremost manner of conveyance in some situations but not in all.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbors. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this.

Nowadays, the majority part of people are not aware about their neighbors, due to lack of communication, because of this, society are obsessed with the Internet and mobile phones. In this essay, will examine man causes and the possible solution the problem.

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News media has become more influential in people’s life. Some believe it is a negative development, to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary world most people prefer to acquire daily informations from the social media resources. Undoubtedly, this occasion cauces more distinctive consequences. Many advocate that these results have more negative sides. I partly agree with this statement. In this essay, I will illustrate the pros and cons of media interaction policy based on my perspective and support my idea with examine as well.

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Many local languages today are dying out due to the rise of language like English. Is this a positive or negative development?

It is argued that the spreading of the most successful languages worldwide cause obsolete many nations' local languages. In my opinion, this outcome goes the positive side by bonding all the countries into one tongue and easy for an individual to work anywhere in the world.

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IELTS 12 - Test 6 - At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, the proportion of young adults is increasing drastically compared to elderly people. I believe that the merits of this situation supersede the drawbacks of the situation. In this essay, I will discuss some advantages of having higher youth in a nation such as the economic growth of a country, and some disadvantages including increasing crime rate.

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It is important for children to learn how to distinguish between right and wrong by carrying out punishments you agree or disagree with this ?

Just as children receive rewards to reinforce good deeds or house chores well done, they should likewise be allowed to serve punishments when they are wrong or do something bad. I agree with this assertion and further reasons would be expantiated on to support my argument.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is to have children later in family and its effects in our life as well as in the society. Nowadays work and career are essential part in our life. In this essay i intend to tell some factors, that alter in our life and its effects, which might be main reasons changing world.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some countries choose to build specilised facilities to train top athletes in order to achieve international sports rather than build sport facilities so everyone can use. Although this idea some countries followed to benifit them competing in international sports by provide top athletes with high potential, it may decrease the number of athletic people cause of short of sport facilites that can be used. This essay will discuss both view of building facilties for different perpuses.

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Some people think that study of history is little use to us.others believe that studying history helps us to know the present.discuss both the viewpoints and give your own opinion

Having knowledge about the history of ones own country is considered to be less benefit , as opposed to other people who think that past knowledge of history is an essential element to live present life . In this essay i will discusss both topics and i beleive eventhough vast amount of history knowledge is not required ,however knowing certain facts and figures help s in the betterment ofcurrent life .

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Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city while others think that life is countryside is more suitable for them. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying this conviction that the majority of the masses opine that pupils should grow up in the megacities, as it is better for their life however, others assert that in rural areas, people live a comfortable life rather than in the city. This essay agrees with this notion and my viewpoints will be highlighted in the subsequent paragraphs.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

The issue of obesity in western children has turned into a significant topic in this century. In this way, most of the young people in the society are suffering from the chubbiness and many types of diseases that are related to their lifestyles and non-activity. The following essay will explore two major causes of this significant issue and three effects derived directly from it.

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Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the company for their entire careers. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?

In recent years, the majority of people are deciding to change their occupation more frequently than staying in one company whole working career. Thus, this issue is becoming more serious from year to year. Nevertheless, for employers it is rough to fill the gap after losing an employee. What do companies have to do to keep a productive worker in business?

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Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the one company for their entire careers. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?

Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the one company for their entire careers.

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Scientists advise people to lead a healthy lifestyle, but most people continue with unhealthy activities. Why do you think it is and what can do with it?

The recommendations from many scientists suggest that people should have a healthy lifestyle, but most people prefer with unhealthy activities. In this essay, I will identify that why individuals continue to do like that and how to persuade them to have better activities.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people always do same things for their entire life, where as others try to learn something out of change. I personally feel that change is always good and doing things routinely may cause problems.

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Public health is becoming an urgent issue nowadays some are you that government should create nutrition and food choice loss to improve Public Health while others believe that it is matter of personal choice and responsibility discuss both views and give you opinion

Many recent researches show that the proportion of people suffering from noninfectious diseases such as diabetes, high blood pressure, heart attacks and cancers has been increased. The major culprit behind this is unhealthy diet patterns of human beings, because of that it is believed by some people that government should impose laws on consumption of nutritional diet while others thing that it is a personal choice and individual should take care about their own food consumptions. In this essay I will describe both sides and finally give my opinion about it.

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Smart phones and other similar electronic gadgets have reduced the contact between friends. Discuss how far you agree with this statement.

In this modern era,it is widely recognized that mobiles play a significant role in the globe.However,electronic gadgets create major impact on socity ,which reduces the contact between friends.I totally agree this statement and forthcoming paragraphs i will cleraly explain about useage of cell phones.

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you are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. describe why you are having the party give directions on how to get to the venue suggest how you can accommadate him/her

I'm very excited to inform you of the party of my 2-month-old son which is organized in Hard and Rock cafe in Niagara falls near the Canada and US border.

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Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that funding for education should be invested primarily in improving digital infrastructures, whereas others insist that salaries for teachers should be increased by using this money. I believe both investments are equally important because of the growing importance of digital skills and the quality of teachers.

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