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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

The majority of people believe that some restrictions on the age of drinking alcohol should be attached meanwhile other part of society think that the absence of strict limitations is better option. Subsequently, who is right ? In this essay, I will discuss both views and provide my own point of view.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Practise makes a person perfect, well daily homework makes a student miserable. Many people thinks that extra school work should not be given to students after regular classes, and some argue that these extra class works plays a vital role in the academics of a schooler.I personally, agree that a child should not have school work at home. In this essay, I will support my point and explain from both views.

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The charts above describe the result of a survey about education for adults. As we can see, these charts provide information about the reason for taking a study and percentage of sharing adult education costs.

These two charts give information about the polling result in adult education. The first graph tells us the polling result of what motivates young people to study. While the second chart illustrates the proportion of cost courses that should be shared in adult education.

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According to most people, it is actually impossible to achieve work-life balance during employment. Do you agree with this statement?

Getting employed by all the members of the family has become essential in today’s challenging world. It is far more than possible to have a balance between work and life.

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advertising is all around us,it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative. discuss both views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Advertising has undoubtedly become one of the most influential parts of our lives today. Indeed there are advantages and disadvantages, which I want to analyze in the following paragraphs.

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Schools should not force children to learn a foreign lauguage. To what extent do you agree with this statemtent?

It is agrue that learn a foreign lauguage should not be obligatory subject for children. While I believe that study a foreign terminology in schools bring some benefits to children, but I completely agree with the idea was mentioned.

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Some people think students should be encouraged to work or travel after finishing secondary education and before starting university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Share your own experience and examples.

Life experience may differs for one fellow to another. Meanwhile, some citizens and I believe that tutees should looking for any remarkable events, whether it is to work or holiday before starting university. The essay will elucidate ideas and contentions about afore-mentioned statement.

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Many manufacturd food and drinks contain high levels of sugar,which causes many health problems.Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some sicknesses are due to excessive sugar in manufactured food and beverage. It is claimed that the prize of these items must be raised in order to boycutt people from buying. While in my perspective, I strongly agree with this suggestion . Some elaborate reasons as well as my thought will be highlighted in the write-up.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Increasing competition in every field has led people to develop different income sources, which can renting a house. Renting business is considered as crucial as purchasing or owning a property for own use. This is certainly due to increased financial pressure and, I firmly believe it is a positive development.

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Some people think that people in senior positions alone should make decisions in a business, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would say that people who are only at senior position should take a decision in a company. However, many argue that other employees also should take part in this process. This essay agrees with the latter point and will show that, despite the experience of managers in that field, junior employees might gives suggestions as they are also a part of an organization.

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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

It is true that individuals tend to settle down in the city because of its pros and job opportunitines; however, living in the metropolis can be bit difficult, in this essay I will discuss why this might be the case and what government can do to alleviate these difficulties.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of people opine that advertising is enormously successful at convincing people to buy goods, other view that it is so simple that human no longer pay concentration to it. personally I support formar proposition and will discuss relevant points along with precise examples and backup my view.

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Today, people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose, because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

It is true that people can able work in global destinations no matter where they stay due to the advancement of communication technology and transport.I believe that it is more positive than negative effects because of some reasons.

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The impact that the growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people traveling by air is to increase tax on flights. To what extent do you think this could solve the problem?

The diagram shows the use of carbon in nature and people's life. The soot cycle illustrates to us how big companies dig up fossil fuels.

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In many countries people now wearing western clothes such as suits and jeans rathers than traditional clothing

There is no denial that people have the freedom to choose what to wear. Although each nation has its own traditional clothes and projects, nowadays people are mostly wearing Western style dress. I think this is a positive development as a result of the growing Western influence and fashion industry.

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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take an interest in the arts?

In our modern life, Art is an integral part of all cultures around the world. However At the present time the number of people who aporeciate art and turn their attention to science, technology and industry is decreasing. In this essey, we well look at several reasons to this issue and in the next paragraph we will come up with some solutions to this problems.

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some people believe that charities should help people in need no matter where those people are in the world/ Others feel that those organizations should only serve the people living in the country where they are based. discuss both sides and give your opinion

The table illustrates data about figures of people who visited Ashdown Museum before and after renovation while the 2 charts give information on the feedback of those who went to the museum twice.

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Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or a negative trend?

Human advancement is driven by competition among humans. It could lead to a positive or negative effect to individuals where the former could teach entity about survival and the latter might produce a gap between insignificant and significant figures.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’ world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Our society believe that experince is of the first important school major. other opinion that, recently. knowladge and technology needs many campany for working more than history.

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Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

More and more people are becoming against paying taxes. There are some people who think that it is not necessary to pay taxes to the state. Others are completely against this idea. This essay will argue that why paying taxes is important. I opine that tax is mandatory for improving the economy of the country.

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